XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pmation: "Teeth For Two"]

All In a nutshell

I love how these start off so pleasent then something "BAD" happens like the female character checking on him at the start, but its all in good "FUN" My suggestion is the same ad some voices into these that would be a real plus, So this was all in a nutshell, because you put all this energy into this and it shows, these characters are funny even if they are not as fine tuned as I would like but they are still very entertaining and the color and humor is what I really enjoy about these, so Keep making these. And so as I start on this submission, it has some interesting points, some not so interesting parts aswell, but I guess thats what the reiew feedback is for, for what works and what doesnt work, But it starts off kind of so-so but does get better, I was pleased with a few parts and hope the rest does get better, But I will suggest some feedback later. And well there you have it, it was an alright flash could have some adjustments but thats for later, but for the mostpart this was still an interesting and somewhat entertaining submission, there are a few more suggestions but thats for later aswell.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
My suggestion is the same ad some voices into these that would be a real plus

~X~

[Toy Guns]

Another entertaining

So here we have another entertaining film with these funny and "ADORBLE" characters and as always the "VOICES" are just as amazing you seem to always come up with a cute little script here and with the added "JPEGS" it seems to work well so nice job indeed on this amimation series you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe some subtitles

~X~

[Trampoline]

Always entertaining

So these are as always very entertaining, these little adorble "CHARACTERS" so cute and the voices really great stuff, I still suggest you ad some subtitles it wouldnt hurt, This one here is Entertainment a Grand adventure with various ideas Utilised in just the right way, you have Earned some points from me on this one so nice effort.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I still suggest you ad some subtitles it wouldnt hurt

~X~

[Kirby calls out Mario (Animatic)]

This was cool

I am really in love with the kirby "VOICE" you did very well here and made it work, some areas you can really push it a bit more but for what it is this was really nice work, also adding more emotion would be a plus on some elements here, anyways nice work hope to see more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Would love to see more of these maybe even longer.

~X~

[Throwverwatch 2]

Impressive

Wow this was really good, I really like what you did here and it plays out itself, The "VOICE" work in this one is very well done so very nice work there infact the voice really did it for me on this one, but anyways nice work on here and really enjoyed this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make this longer and much more random factor woulod be a plus.

~X~

[Pmation: "Shock And Roll"]

Colorfull

Now you really got me interested from the start on this "ESPECILY" with using the pencil right from the start, as an idea you should have two artists drawing on the same paper that would create a wild animation episode, These are always so colorfull and entertaining you really know how to make all these episodes pretty fast too they are pretty entertaining though and the animation is as always smooth and stream lined for some success, very amusing its just a good little series you have here and Im glad I have the opertunity to review a few of these, but anyways nice work here, some good stuff. so keep up the good work. But anyways as this review comes to a close, I would like to take this time to say this was pretty good and in some ways a bit unique those are things you dont see all the time, but with that said hope to see more of your work especially if its like this, but anyways great job on this one, Hope to see what you come up with next. and hope its even better.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
as an idea you should have two artists drawing on the same paper that would create a wild animation episode

~X~

[Fistful of Madness]

Entertaining

So I have to say this was very "ENTERTAINONG" especially with how you presented it while its madness its western and you really added some nice "WESTERN" feel to it, I do wish there was more dialog to this though, the film actually picks up some speed and progresvlly turns out reall well love how it speeds up in action too.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do wish there was more dialog to this

~X~

[George's Bad Day]

Very nice

I like that there are some "TEXT-BUBBLES" but would love some more dialog on these like some voice overs or something to really bring out the story but I will say that the sprite work is pretty amazing with all that you have presented and has a decent story with some amazing sprites.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
would love some more dialog on these like some voice overs or something to really bring out the story

~X~

[Eddsworld - That's a shark]

Another entertaining film

So here was another entertaining film gotta love these As I have seen some in my day but I found this one delightful and the "VOICE" work is really good, the film runs pretty well and I could see you adding more of a random phase but overall this was pretty good so nice work indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Adding more random into this would be a plus.

~X~

[The Sergio Show Episode #90]

Creativity and appetite for destruction

Im still waiting on the day that you ad some subtitles it would be a huge improvment with all the sound issues, So that line > Creativity and appetite for "DESTRUCTION" is what perfectly describes sergio and his show because he is a creative being and has an appetite for destruction lol, no but really nice film here and amusing as always, so from the get-go I really thought this was good, and I was unexpectedly taken back with how good it really was, so that for sure shows your effort and time put into this, There are various ideas and tips you could go about and make this even better, I would love to see that happen, Now Criticisms aside Its a decent "FILM" entry shows your skills and effort. So Overall this was pretty decent, but with all that said I hope to see more stuff from you eventually. This was pretty pleasent maybe a few things could be more Enhanced and such. but its a Definite fave of mine.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Im still waiting on the day that you ad some subtitles it would be a huge improvment with all the sound issues

~X~