(( Nice story ))
~~REVIEW~~
This had a nice story with some good depth to it mainly in the story though and the characters were notbad either and it does have that dark noir feel which i really liked, very nice work on this one, maybe some compression would be nice though.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just abit of compression of the file, it seemed to get up there in size.
~~OVERALL~~
A very welldone story should make for a neat series if it goes that far.
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