XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The L-C Project]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
LOL well what can i say, it does need work to it such as better characters more detailing, some better voices, and it needs better presentation as it was very sloppy, it did make me laugh though, anyways better luck next time...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Alot of stuff, characters graphics, detail sound and so-on....

~~OVERALL~~
A cute but sloppy animation...

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[StrawberryClock-Hurricane]

((( ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
LOL well it was entertaining, the different clocks was cool, could use a few more locations and such aswellas more clocks, nice color and backrounds, a decent clock flash if i say so myself, keep on clocking lol...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More clocks and locations...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny clocks and there silly-ness...

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JonBro responds:

'k.

[A bouncing ball]

((( INTERESTING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well a different take on silent fils, with the "BLUE" bar to better understand what was on the text which was a very nice touch, you should have made it abit longer, but for the most part it was very entertaining very funny with the crash boom pop haha, anyways nice flash, keep up the good work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer, and more different scenes...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny silent sorta, but funny stuff...

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[No Bait]

((( NICE CHARACTER )))

~~REVIEW~~
The character was great, and even the walking was decent, but if your going to have him walk that long of a scene change his walking everynow and then so it looks more realistic, also some text bubbles would help besides just the text, good flash though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some work with the text, and better walking in the animation...

~~OVERALL~~
Good animation, runs abit slow though...

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[Mario's Slam Dance!]

((( LOL FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this made me chukle somewhat, the mario sprite was decent, as for the "DANCING" it was ok, could be better like more wild stuf in the dancing but for the most part it was entertaining, the music didnt fit with the dancing so maybe a different choice next time...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More wacky dancing and some better music...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny but needs more wacky humor to it...

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[Anarchy Face 13]

((( OK )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was ok but could have been better, much more detail and color for starters,a nd you could try compressing i somewhat, i supos eill checkout the others but hope they have more effort then this one...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More detail and color, and more effects for sure...

~~OVERALL~~
OK but needs more detail and much more effort...

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[Dark Clone Pico]

(( Nice flash for pico day ))

~~REVIEW~~
another good flash for pico day, this was neat, and a neat idea for the flash day, could be slightly compressed but not by much, i had fun watching it, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe some slight compression, but besides that it was fine.

~~OVERALL~~
Another great pico submission.

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