XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[-=Noir=-]

(( Nice work ))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was notbad, i kinda liked it, but the fals was real large and really could use some compression, but besides that it was decent and was a good style of flash work so nice job on this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Compresion would really improve on this, it would also allow more people to view it and less download is always a good thing on newgrounds, even if you cut it into a few parts so that each file is not so large, anyways try and "COMPRESS" it as much as you can.

~~OVERALL~~
A big file, but has a neat style to it.

~X~

[The Food Chain]

(( Neat ))

~~REVIEW~~
Kinda neat, you should make it larger, ,maybe show all the ombonations of the food chain even add humans lol, no really this was neat with some good idea, nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the chain longer.

~~OVERALL~~
A food chain lol.

~X~

[Don't Tell Me What to Do!]

(( Funny animation lol ))

~~REVIEW~~
notbad on this, the characters were decent, aswas the backrounds, it could be fixed up such as the "looping" with a stop-action code, and probably some subtitles for more quality to the animation overall it was a decent flash.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
All though the voices/Audio were fine, it would have been nice to still have some "SUBTITLES" just for the overall effect of it making it more enjoyble, This flash needs a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" it will help for the looping that the flash does, it will make it so that the user presses play and at the end replay, you will also need the propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons aswell, feel free to stop by the "FLASH" Forums on the newground BBS as they will help you on how to add this script into your flash. so stop by the forums on here newgrounds, and do a sreach for "flash help" or "STOP-ACTION-CODE" and your terms should bring you to the actual stop action code or other help that will help you in stoping the loop.

~~OVERALL~~
Good animation with some funny humor and good characters but could use some fixing up though.

~X~

[15 seconds of d]

(( funny short animations ))

~~REVIEW~~
this was funny and i liked that there was lots to chose from and they all had some good art aswell, with a funny humor side to all of them, maybe add a smal icon above each title of clip, it could give an idea of what is about to be seen, nayways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a smal icon above each title of clip, it could give an idea of what is about to be seen.

~~OVERALL~~
About 6 short funny clips, with some decent art and animation, nice work, keep them coming.

~X~

[3 Peasants & A Leprechaun]

(( Short and funny ))

~~REVIEW~~
Abit on the short side but had some good funny humor to it, you also had some nice artwork like with the characters, aswell as some decent voices, to make it an all around balanced animation, so nice job there.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe it could be slightly longer but seemed fine as is.

~~OVERALL~~
funny characters and funny joke, you all will like this one.

~X~

[Mario the Gladiator]

(( Cute ))

~~REVIEW~~
This was cute, and it was a nice idea with the whole gladiator, the mario and luigie were ok but maybe they should have been some sharp looking sprites, but it was notbad and kinda funny so nice work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some sharp looking sprites might work.

~~OVERALL~~
Notbad of an idea, and kinda funny.

~X~

[[KK] The Fag's Halloween]

(( lol funny ))

~~REVIEW~~
lol ok this was funny, kinda strange and seemed very random, but i did get a good chuckle out of it, the file does need to be compressed though, besides that it was ok.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Compress the filesize.

~~OVERALL~~
Strange and funny.

~X~

[FF One + WoW]

(( Interesting ))

~~REVIEW~~
Well this was interesting and did remind me of the old ff games, the characters were decent, and i really like the navigation system at the top it helped to move things along, anyways decent flash, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe abit of extra effects in the attacks.

~~OVERALL~~
Abit odd but it was a neat flash.

~X~

[duck: hospital]

(( Cute and funny ))

~~REVIEW~~
lol a funny animation with some good characters and some really smooth animation aswell, very nice work on this one, the "NEEDLS" scene was my fave, anyways cute animation, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing as i thought it was fine as is.

~~OVERALL~~
A cute animation, nice work.

~X~

[.:trippy fbf:.]

(( Trippy ))

~~REVIEW~~
I do agree with the title it was trippy, but i would have liked to see more of it like with different scenes and such maybe some more animation in there aswell, but the effects were neat of the fade off and such, anyways nice little flash here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More scenes, and more animation would be nice.

~~OVERALL~~
Nice effects, but needs more.

~X~