XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

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((( COULD BE BETTER )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well notbad but seemed abit on the shortside, could use some "SUBTITLES" though it was funny just needed more to it, so notbad, work on it abit...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some subtitles and add more content, aswell as more characters...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny but needs more...

~X~

[PLANET Q]

(( LOL FUNNY ))

~~REVIEW~~
Lol this was funny, i had fun watching this, it was entertaining and wacky in a strange way, nice job, you should make more of this maybe in a series it seems wacky enough for newgrounds, anyways i had fun watching this nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try and compress it somewhat.

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and strange all rolled into on.

~X~

[Any Ghost]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well notbad it could be slightly better though, what i liked about this was the story, and the animation was ok but could be abit smoother, you may want to think about some more compression aswell, anyways nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some smoother animating, and some more compression...

~~OVERALL~~
Great movie great story style, some compression is needed...

~X~

[[CC]MetalSong]

(( Funny ))

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad, the character could have used abit of work but it was entertaining i did however think the file wwas abit long and took some time to download, but besides that it was entertaining.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Work on some compressing the file, besides that it seemed fine.

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining and amusing, kinda neat.

~X~

Metal-Sun responds:

Thank you

[Visit to Starbucks]

(( LOL FUNNY AND ENTERTAINING ))

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad, i thought the "CHARACTERS" were interesting they had style, the "VOICES" was a nice touch but the sound quality was way down, as you could hear a scartchy backround sound, you should cut that backround sound out, maybe even add some subtitles, anyways nice animation it was funny and entertaining...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some subtitles and fix the audio up abit.

~~OVERALL~~
Good animation, does need some improving, but you are bound to get a good laugh from this nice job, and i hope to see more good work from you soon.

~X~

TheMentalInstitute responds:

Cool, I'm glad you liked it.

Since the audio was recorded at a low quality I don't think there's not really an easy way to improve it now.

Check out my other stuff if you want, and I'm planning on submitting more sometime soon.

[Antartica, 4589]

(( TOTAL CHAOS ))

~~REVIEW~~
Ha this was entertaining with lots of sprite slug action, very nice work on the "SOUND/FX" it really came through with so much sounds all at once so nic ejob on that and awsome job on some very sharp looking sprites and such, hope to see more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More story line would be nice.

~~OVERALL~~
A total chaos of sprite action, awsome sound/fx.

~X~

[LL-memory's lockification]

(( ABIT SLOW ))

~~REVIEW~~
This was ok, seemed abit on the slow side maybe speed up the animation somewhat, and some better detail in the lock characters would also be nice, i however did like the backround work as it was decent, as for the story well its notbad, could have more depth to it though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More effort towards teh characters and animation...

~~OVERALL~~
Locks and some funny busness...

~X~

[Frank Van Gogh]

((( COULD BE IMPROVED )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad but could be improved, such as adding more content and and compressing the greatly large file at the sametime, notbad though and it was somewhat entetaining just needs abit more effort and time to it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some compression and more content...

~~OVERALL~~
Large file needs some compression...

~X~

[DOODz:South Park Theme]

(( Entertaining ))

~~REVIEW~~
this was sorta funny and entertaining, and even the the characters were kinda neat, i did think you could have lowered the foilesize somewhat though, besides that it was some good animation and notbad for your first works, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some slight compression would be nice, as this file was pretty large, and not always fun waiting for a big download, i supose if i had a fater connection and computer it wouldnt be a problem but not everyone does have that and it kinda makes people stray away from large files such as this, so in that aspect of things, a lower filesize will help and probably get you more views to your flash.

~~OVERALL~~
A funny and entertaining music like video.

~X~