XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[LL-memory's lockification]

(( ABIT SLOW ))

~~REVIEW~~
This was ok, seemed abit on the slow side maybe speed up the animation somewhat, and some better detail in the lock characters would also be nice, i however did like the backround work as it was decent, as for the story well its notbad, could have more depth to it though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More effort towards teh characters and animation...

~~OVERALL~~
Locks and some funny busness...

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[Frank Van Gogh]

((( COULD BE IMPROVED )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad but could be improved, such as adding more content and and compressing the greatly large file at the sametime, notbad though and it was somewhat entetaining just needs abit more effort and time to it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some compression and more content...

~~OVERALL~~
Large file needs some compression...

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[DOODz:South Park Theme]

(( Entertaining ))

~~REVIEW~~
this was sorta funny and entertaining, and even the the characters were kinda neat, i did think you could have lowered the foilesize somewhat though, besides that it was some good animation and notbad for your first works, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some slight compression would be nice, as this file was pretty large, and not always fun waiting for a big download, i supose if i had a fater connection and computer it wouldnt be a problem but not everyone does have that and it kinda makes people stray away from large files such as this, so in that aspect of things, a lower filesize will help and probably get you more views to your flash.

~~OVERALL~~
A funny and entertaining music like video.

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[edgardos adventure#6]

(( Cute and funny ))

~~REVIEW~~
lol this was cute and funny, the guy in the white was funny always trying but never suceeding hehe, nice humor with that, i have not seen the others but ill be sure to check em out anyways nice animation and good characters, aswell as very funny.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
It was just right.

~~OVERALL~~
A funny episode with nice effort of artwork and character humor, nice job.

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[-=Noir=-]

(( Nice work ))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was notbad, i kinda liked it, but the fals was real large and really could use some compression, but besides that it was decent and was a good style of flash work so nice job on this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Compresion would really improve on this, it would also allow more people to view it and less download is always a good thing on newgrounds, even if you cut it into a few parts so that each file is not so large, anyways try and "COMPRESS" it as much as you can.

~~OVERALL~~
A big file, but has a neat style to it.

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[The Food Chain]

(( Neat ))

~~REVIEW~~
Kinda neat, you should make it larger, ,maybe show all the ombonations of the food chain even add humans lol, no really this was neat with some good idea, nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the chain longer.

~~OVERALL~~
A food chain lol.

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[Don't Tell Me What to Do!]

(( Funny animation lol ))

~~REVIEW~~
notbad on this, the characters were decent, aswas the backrounds, it could be fixed up such as the "looping" with a stop-action code, and probably some subtitles for more quality to the animation overall it was a decent flash.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
All though the voices/Audio were fine, it would have been nice to still have some "SUBTITLES" just for the overall effect of it making it more enjoyble, This flash needs a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" it will help for the looping that the flash does, it will make it so that the user presses play and at the end replay, you will also need the propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons aswell, feel free to stop by the "FLASH" Forums on the newground BBS as they will help you on how to add this script into your flash. so stop by the forums on here newgrounds, and do a sreach for "flash help" or "STOP-ACTION-CODE" and your terms should bring you to the actual stop action code or other help that will help you in stoping the loop.

~~OVERALL~~
Good animation with some funny humor and good characters but could use some fixing up though.

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[15 seconds of d]

(( funny short animations ))

~~REVIEW~~
this was funny and i liked that there was lots to chose from and they all had some good art aswell, with a funny humor side to all of them, maybe add a smal icon above each title of clip, it could give an idea of what is about to be seen, nayways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a smal icon above each title of clip, it could give an idea of what is about to be seen.

~~OVERALL~~
About 6 short funny clips, with some decent art and animation, nice work, keep them coming.

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[3 Peasants & A Leprechaun]

(( Short and funny ))

~~REVIEW~~
Abit on the short side but had some good funny humor to it, you also had some nice artwork like with the characters, aswell as some decent voices, to make it an all around balanced animation, so nice job there.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe it could be slightly longer but seemed fine as is.

~~OVERALL~~
funny characters and funny joke, you all will like this one.

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[Mario the Gladiator]

(( Cute ))

~~REVIEW~~
This was cute, and it was a nice idea with the whole gladiator, the mario and luigie were ok but maybe they should have been some sharp looking sprites, but it was notbad and kinda funny so nice work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some sharp looking sprites might work.

~~OVERALL~~
Notbad of an idea, and kinda funny.

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