XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Strawberry clock #2!]

(( Cute animation ))

~~REVIEW~~
lol this was a cute animation, the characters were welldone,a dn i like that you added some subtitles, a short but entertaining animation, nice job, hope to see more of your work soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add new characters and a longer episode.

~~OVERALL~~
funny short clock flash.

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DAGamesOfficial responds:

thanx for possitive review. Ye I might consider making my next Strawberry clock much better. :P

[Dailytoon #265]

(( silly ))

~~REVIEW~~
this was silly with the randon toons but i laughed with it, you should add more then just the two though it would make the flash more full, anyways nice animations.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add another clip or two.

~~OVERALL~~
a couple of silly shorts.

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[a little snack]

(( nice characters ))

~~REVIEW~~
this was great i love the "CHARACTERS" but the animation was very short, als it might be better if you had some subtitles. besides that it was kinda funny.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make it longer and some subtitles would be nice.

~~OVERALL~~
A good flash but too short.

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[Spongebob- The Fun Song]

(( F-U-N ))

~~REVIEW~~
lol this was fun and funny haha, no but really good little song, the characters were perfect and so was the recorded audio, you could have had some nore animation like have sponge bob walk around and such, besides that it was F-U-N.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some more animation to the characters

~~OVERALL~~
Funny fun song with spongbob.

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[Spongebob Squarepants]

(( lol amusing ))

~~REVIEW~~
haha this was funny and very random, the starting of it was actually really good but the noob part was kinda random but all n all it was funny and did make me laugh somewhat.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more content as it was kust looping the same type of thing.

~~OVERALL~~
Funny random and odd but i found it entertaining.

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[(old) SpongeBob: Rehersal]

(( lol funny ))

~~REVIEW~~
lol this was funny, they were just sorta standing there, by giving them some sorta animation would really improve on this, but besides that it was funny, nice .flash

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more animation from spongebob.

~~OVERALL~~
Funny animation, it needs more animation though.

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[Clock/lock adventure!]

(( lol ))

~~REVIEW~~
lol this was anusing, i like the subtitles but you should add more i didnt hear any voices so maybe that should be something to add, the are was cute and the story was abit funny so nice job on this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some voices would be good.

~~OVERALL~~
A simple but amusing clock flash.

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HoboPorn responds:

Thanks, no idea how you came across this flash and decided tor eview it but much apreciated anyways. And yeah if I could get a mic and voice these I would so for now it's iether old style movies, like back in the old days like 3 stooges when it would be boink boink or bonk or just funny sounds to anything they did instead of talking or subtitles.

[Creativity - Episode 8]

(( nice artwork ))

~~REVIEW~~
this was good, there was some good artwork, nice characters aswell with lots of detail, and ontop of that you had some good voices, the flash does "loop" so you may want to fix that, explained below.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This flash needs a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" it will help for the looping that the flash does, it will make it so that the user presses play and at the end replay, you will also need the propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons aswell, feel free to stop by the "FLASH" Forums on the newground BBS as they will help you on how to add this script intoyour flash. so stop by the forums on here newgrounds, and do a sreach for "flash help" or "STOP-ACTION-CODE" and your terms should bring you to the actual stop action code or other help that will help you in stoping the loop.

~~OVERALL~~
nice toon but does need some work.

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