XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Clock/lock adventure!]

(( lol ))

~~REVIEW~~
lol this was anusing, i like the subtitles but you should add more i didnt hear any voices so maybe that should be something to add, the are was cute and the story was abit funny so nice job on this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some voices would be good.

~~OVERALL~~
A simple but amusing clock flash.

~X~

HoboPorn responds:

Thanks, no idea how you came across this flash and decided tor eview it but much apreciated anyways. And yeah if I could get a mic and voice these I would so for now it's iether old style movies, like back in the old days like 3 stooges when it would be boink boink or bonk or just funny sounds to anything they did instead of talking or subtitles.

[Creativity - Episode 8]

(( nice artwork ))

~~REVIEW~~
this was good, there was some good artwork, nice characters aswell with lots of detail, and ontop of that you had some good voices, the flash does "loop" so you may want to fix that, explained below.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This flash needs a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" it will help for the looping that the flash does, it will make it so that the user presses play and at the end replay, you will also need the propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons aswell, feel free to stop by the "FLASH" Forums on the newground BBS as they will help you on how to add this script intoyour flash. so stop by the forums on here newgrounds, and do a sreach for "flash help" or "STOP-ACTION-CODE" and your terms should bring you to the actual stop action code or other help that will help you in stoping the loop.

~~OVERALL~~
nice toon but does need some work.

~X~

[LL - Portal Fun SE]

(( lol entertaining ))

~~REVIEW~~
haha this was neat and abit funny, cant say that i have seen the other one but it was good and ill check out the original if i can, besides that his was notbad at all, made me laugh.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe a new version with differrent stuff.

~~OVERALL~~
A silly and funny version.

~X~

MasterLock responds:

If I made a new one, even more people would bitch at me for resubmitting a flash.

[The Experiment]

((decent flash ))

~~REVIEW~~
this was decent, kinda neat with the flow of animation, i thought the size of the flash could be better, the music was ok but maybe something else might work better, besides that it was notbad.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The flash could be compression, and change in music wouldnt hurt.

~~OVERALL~~
Decent animation nice flow of animating.

~X~

[Tosti Trieout]

(( entertaining ))

~~REVIEW~~
lol this made me laugh but it could use some color, even just a little here and there would work and improve on this, also some sorta subtitles would be nice aswell, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some color and some subtitles.

~~OVERALL~~
A black and whit silly flash needs some color.

~X~

Migel responds:

Well im glad it made u laugh becuz that was only intention of the movie. And ill take ur advice and use collor next time..although I kind of like black and white ;d. THnx for the review.

[Tour of The World Cup]

(( lol ))

~~REVIEW~~
haha this was funny, you could put some work in the characters and backrounds, maybe give it a real feel to the topic matter, and maybe not so muc basic colors, but it was silly and funny so nice job on your part.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs more character work aswell as backround detail an dshades.

~~OVERALL~~
a silly soccor flash.

~X~

[WOS TT 2]

(( nice graphics ))

~~REVIEW~~
i say nice graphics because this had some nice menue and lots of good use of color like the buttons, as for the short clips they were notbad some were abit wacky.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just make more silly episodes like this.

~~OVERALL~~
A good use of color on some silly animations.

~X~

Arskagarf responds:

You remind me of myspace

[NORMAL MAN!]

(( Interesting ))

~~REVIEW~~
lol this was interesting, it had some funny moments mainly when he was just standing there, he was funny looking though, besides that this could use more to it more animation more humor and so on.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More animation and more content.

~~OVERALL~~
Abit simple but it was ok.

~X~

[The Truth Behind Cancer]

(( Awsome ))

~~REVIEW~~
lol this was great but it was funny because of how you set it up, and some amazing graphics, very nice animation and glad to see you won some awards aswell, so very nice efort on this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
its perfect.

~~OVERALL~~
great flash awsome graphics and very funny

~X~