XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[[CC]MetalSong]

(( Funny ))

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad, the character could have used abit of work but it was entertaining i did however think the file wwas abit long and took some time to download, but besides that it was entertaining.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Work on some compressing the file, besides that it seemed fine.

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining and amusing, kinda neat.

~X~

Metal-Sun responds:

Thank you

[Visit to Starbucks]

(( LOL FUNNY AND ENTERTAINING ))

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad, i thought the "CHARACTERS" were interesting they had style, the "VOICES" was a nice touch but the sound quality was way down, as you could hear a scartchy backround sound, you should cut that backround sound out, maybe even add some subtitles, anyways nice animation it was funny and entertaining...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some subtitles and fix the audio up abit.

~~OVERALL~~
Good animation, does need some improving, but you are bound to get a good laugh from this nice job, and i hope to see more good work from you soon.

~X~

TheMentalInstitute responds:

Cool, I'm glad you liked it.

Since the audio was recorded at a low quality I don't think there's not really an easy way to improve it now.

Check out my other stuff if you want, and I'm planning on submitting more sometime soon.

[Antartica, 4589]

(( TOTAL CHAOS ))

~~REVIEW~~
Ha this was entertaining with lots of sprite slug action, very nice work on the "SOUND/FX" it really came through with so much sounds all at once so nic ejob on that and awsome job on some very sharp looking sprites and such, hope to see more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More story line would be nice.

~~OVERALL~~
A total chaos of sprite action, awsome sound/fx.

~X~

[LL-memory's lockification]

(( ABIT SLOW ))

~~REVIEW~~
This was ok, seemed abit on the slow side maybe speed up the animation somewhat, and some better detail in the lock characters would also be nice, i however did like the backround work as it was decent, as for the story well its notbad, could have more depth to it though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More effort towards teh characters and animation...

~~OVERALL~~
Locks and some funny busness...

~X~

[Frank Van Gogh]

((( COULD BE IMPROVED )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad but could be improved, such as adding more content and and compressing the greatly large file at the sametime, notbad though and it was somewhat entetaining just needs abit more effort and time to it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some compression and more content...

~~OVERALL~~
Large file needs some compression...

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[DOODz:South Park Theme]

(( Entertaining ))

~~REVIEW~~
this was sorta funny and entertaining, and even the the characters were kinda neat, i did think you could have lowered the foilesize somewhat though, besides that it was some good animation and notbad for your first works, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some slight compression would be nice, as this file was pretty large, and not always fun waiting for a big download, i supose if i had a fater connection and computer it wouldnt be a problem but not everyone does have that and it kinda makes people stray away from large files such as this, so in that aspect of things, a lower filesize will help and probably get you more views to your flash.

~~OVERALL~~
A funny and entertaining music like video.

~X~

[edgardos adventure#6]

(( Cute and funny ))

~~REVIEW~~
lol this was cute and funny, the guy in the white was funny always trying but never suceeding hehe, nice humor with that, i have not seen the others but ill be sure to check em out anyways nice animation and good characters, aswell as very funny.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
It was just right.

~~OVERALL~~
A funny episode with nice effort of artwork and character humor, nice job.

~X~

[-=Noir=-]

(( Nice work ))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was notbad, i kinda liked it, but the fals was real large and really could use some compression, but besides that it was decent and was a good style of flash work so nice job on this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Compresion would really improve on this, it would also allow more people to view it and less download is always a good thing on newgrounds, even if you cut it into a few parts so that each file is not so large, anyways try and "COMPRESS" it as much as you can.

~~OVERALL~~
A big file, but has a neat style to it.

~X~

[The Food Chain]

(( Neat ))

~~REVIEW~~
Kinda neat, you should make it larger, ,maybe show all the ombonations of the food chain even add humans lol, no really this was neat with some good idea, nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the chain longer.

~~OVERALL~~
A food chain lol.

~X~