(( um ok ))
~~REVIEW~~
well this was abit odd, had some strange style of art and images but kinda neat, you should work on the file, its abit much.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some slight compression would be nice, as this file was pretty large, and not always fun waiting for a big download, i supose if i had a fater connection and computer it wouldnt be a problem but not everyone does have that and it kinda makes people stray away from large files such as this, so in that aspect of things, a lower filesize will help and probably get you more views to your flash
~~OVERALL~~
Needs some file compression as explained above.
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