Very nice movie
So you have a nice "MOVIE" here the character animation and expressions very realistic and really nice detail, you have a good story here, Maybe this could be a tad bit longer though, And here we have a decent submission allthough there are some areas that could be worked on I thought, but mostly I got good response from this submission, there was some nice visuals, and some nice elements throughout the whole flash, you can possibly give it some Cutting Edge touches, So that its more Extraordinary then it already is.
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Maybe this could be a tad bit longer though
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