XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[MS: TTS Part 1]

(( Lol ))

~~REVIEW~~
haha i recently started playing MS and its fun as hell, as for this flash its notbad, the animation of the characters could be improved instead of just the flipping, its a funny short though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more content and more characters.

~~OVERALL~~
Funny maplestory parody.

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[Stick Omen Hybrid]

(( nice action with this. ))

~~REVIEW~~
notbad on the battle scene i even liked the backround walls with some nice after effects, but i thought besides "STICKS" you could have had some more defined characters with eyes mouths nose and so on.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some detailed characters.

~~OVERALL~~
A neat battle scene with a couple of sticks.

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[Generic FBF]

(( funny song ))

~~REVIEW~~
lol the song kept on going after the animation ended, but anyways nice animation very smooth, seems like it could use some color or something, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some color and add more animation so it adds with the song.

~~OVERALL~~
A silly and very short animation, funny song though.

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[Purest of Souls Stage 2]

(( this was interesting ))

~~REVIEW~~
this was interesting, kinda odd but i found it interesting, the graphics were abit different aswell, but thats what i liked about it, anyways great work on this hope to see more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like it as is.

~~OVERALL~~
An interesting and different kinda flash.

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[003 McE's]

(( interesting and strange ))

~~REVIEW~~
this was oddly strange but thats what i liked about it, the visuals were interesting onlything i was not too fond of was the "SIZE" so maybe work on that abit.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try and compress the file size nobody likes a large movie some people dont even watch a large file, so in that aspect your draw away users from veiwing your work, so a little compression would improve on this.

~~OVERALL~~
a big file but a neat animtion/flash

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[magical book]

(( lol ))

~~REVIEW~~
notbad but the flash could use some improved character work with some good color with shades and more detail all around especialy some added backrounds.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some improved graphics would be great,and some backrounds.

~~OVERALL~~
a silly film that needs some character improvments.

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[Labix's Heaven]

(( wow ))

~~REVIEW~~
wow that was amazing, some very impressive animation, nice graphics and just very well presented awsome style aswell, and it all just flowed well together very nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Reduce the file size so that it doesnt take loads of time to download, look for areas to compress, maybe the intense graphics or the audio needs to be cut, but whatever the case try and compress it.

~~OVERALL~~
A large file but well worth the wait, i suggest everyone to see this, its an awsome animation.

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[Dance Monkeys Dance]

(( Notbad ))

~~REVIEW~~
This was ok and had a good story to it, but the flash was very big in size, really could use some reduction in size, but still i liked it so notba don this one, keep up the nice animations.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you need to compress this, The File size was very massive almost killed my machine, i use 56k and im sure alot of other users do aswell and something to think about when making really big flashworks and the filesize is that big think about the user abit as they might not beable to download as some people may be impatient, compress it abit or cut it down somehow but remember that alot of us use 56k

~~OVERALL~~
a good animation but beeds some reduction.

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