XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Shadow of the killer]

(( decent start ))

~~REVIEW~~
this was notbad has a good start you should make more of these though, i like your style though, i hope you do make more, but next time cut the size abit mor ethough.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some size reduction and some more visuals.

~~OVERALL~~
Decent animation could use some graphics effects and more content.

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[Chrono Trigger Unglued 12]

(( decent action ))

~~REVIEW~~
this was notbad some good looking sprites a decent story, allthough the file was abit up there, but besides that it was a fun story and good action flash, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some different styles of characters would be nice, Try and compress the file size nobody likes a large movie some people dont even watch a large file, so in that aspect your draw away users from veiwing your work, so a little compression would improve on this.

~~OVERALL~~
decent sprites and fun action but needs some reduction of the file.

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[Greatest Megaman Flash]

(( needs work ))

~~REVIEW~~
this needs work i had some issues with it playing correctly, and i didnt see buttons for it to continue, it had some decent graphics though but it was interesting, nice work on this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some more effects would be nice and some buttons to continu on in certain key areas.

~~OVERALL~~
Decent flash needs abit of work.

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[NGC Toon #1]

(( notbad ))

~~REVIEW~~
well notbad on this i especily liked the effects and your style in this flash you could work on the size abit as it was starting to get up there, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more effects would be nice, You may want to compress the file as it was abit larg and for users with 56k such as myself might have issues with downloading the file, just something to think about when the file gets that big.

~~OVERALL~~
decent style, needs some compression thoough.

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NGCTOONS responds:

Thanks for your review, it is surprising to get one from you! (a bit of sarcasm). As for the filesize, it ranges just under 3000, which is not 1/3 of the max, so I think its no deal. Thanks for the review though ^_^

[Peanut Butter´s Quest]

(( lol funny ))

~~REVIEW~~
lol this was funny and the lock characters were notbad, but it was abit hard to understand what they were saying, maybe you should add some subtitles.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add some subtitles.

~~OVERALL~~
Funny but needs some subtitles.

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Courgy responds:

spammovie

[Jetpack Raccoon]

(( Interesting flash ))

~~REVIEW~~
this was interesting and it was funny had me rolling hehe, no but really this was neat you should make more maybe a series of some sort, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would think about some compression.

~~OVERALL~~
Funny jetpack scene lol.

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[Stick Free Runz]

(( notbad ))

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad of an animationn and it was smooth looking nice jumping aswell, you should give your character some detail, like some eyes, maybe ahve another character aswell.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some detail to the character like some glowing eyes or something.

~~OVERALL~~
good smooth animation but needs abit more.

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