XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mario Kart Underground]

Very good animation

~~REVIEW~~
This was very welldone, i love the starting of it aswell, you presented some awsome characters with great detail even some nice and "SMOOTH" animation and the story was great i really enjoyed it so nice job indeed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more of these types

~~OVERALL~~
Good and well presented animation

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[Mario Fuzzy Day]

Lol it was funny

~~REVIEW~~
It was funny and made me laugh abit, i wouldnt mind seeing more "EFFECTS" like with the explosions and fire and such, but other then that it looks pretty good so notbad at all

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more nifty effects and maybe make it abit longer

~~OVERALL~~
Funny but needs more

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[Once Upon a What?!]

Very funny and amusing

~~REVIEW~~
I liked this and you put good effort into it, i dont mind the black and white either but with a tad color it could be even better anyways nice job here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Black and white flashes are notbad, butl= while its black and white, you Should add some color even if just a drop of red or blue here and there, like say a blood drop so that the Black and White reflects more it would be a nice, and would standout abit better, and improving on your Black and White animation.

~~OVERALL~~
Decent and funny animation here, keep up the awsome animations

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[PWN4GE- Episode 02]

Entertaining atleast

~~REVIEW~~
Well this was funny and i had fun with it, but the animation seemed to run abit slow, but it did give me a few laughs, speed up the animation just abit more fasterpaced stuff and such.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Speed up the animation.

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and entertaining but could be faster

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FOAMNINJA responds:

im new to flash, so its good to hear where i should improve. thanx! :D

[The College Years 12]

Very welldone

~~REVIEW~~
I liked this right from the start, and i should probably checkout the rest you have, but as for this one great detail of characters and color, but especially the color very welldone, and it was funny, anyways keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
i like it as is just make more of these if you can

~~OVERALL~~
good flash great detail, i liked it

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RandomFilms responds:

Thanks, my other cartoons are not that great animating wise, but still entertaining. I think I finally found a good way for raising the quality

[Beneath the Sheets]

This was ok

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat abit differant from your other stuff but i still enjoyed it, i did have to replay lol, good theme and good style leading upto the well you know lol, anyways decent flash here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it abit longer and with abit more suspense next time

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining

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Fro responds:

Ha thanks. I'm making a prequel and a sequel to this sometime. The prequel won't be very long, but it will be funny to those that have seen this one. The sequel will be longer and will probably have more suspense.

[Hay Wars]

LOL This was funny

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this was funny, and did give me a few laughs, not just because i like starwars but you actually gave this some good humor so nice job there, also props to you on good effects.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More humor more effects would be great.

~~OVERALL~~
Funny humor and neat parody, i liked it

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Fro responds:

Thanks for the review. I'm going to be working on a sequel sometime this summer and I will make sure that it has more humor. :)

[Tywo At Large Ep. #3]

Very nice indeed

~~REVIEW~~
Very nice work here, and i just loved the, "INTRO" very impressive from the characters to the voices, i do think it would have been improved with some "SUBTITLES" just for the extra measure for the fans, anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some subtitles

~~OVERALL~~
Decent flash good characters

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Pixmintro responds:

It never even dawned on my to do subtitles until afte i uploaded it... I'd especially be doing a favor to some people I know since some of my relatives are deaf! D: