XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[CC Stop Animation]

Entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
this was neat it was differant aswell, and all around was good allthough the audio could be of that a better choice but for the mostpart i did enjoy this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Longer and more content and possibly new audio

~~OVERALL~~
Decent flash here

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Cantdoright responds:

yes I do intend on making it longer as soon as flash stops hating my comp. Anyways ill look into some diferent music for. Thanks for watching.

[PSA: Sceb on Forums]

Great character

~~REVIEW~~
this was good, i really enjoyed the great character and good animation, the voice over was fantastic, it all seemed to roll along i was very pleased with this one

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just make more awsome stuff like this

~~OVERALL~~
entertaining flash and character

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JKR responds:

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it! I try to make awesome stuff weekly for FredtheMonkey.com (though sometimes things are delayed a bit) so you can always check there for more. Otherwise the bigger cartoons I put here on Newgrounds when I can. Thanks for taking the time to leave a review!

[A Booming Short]

Abit on the short side

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad but this was kinda short, you should make it longer and with the flash program you could add some flashy effects maybe even some color or something along them lines

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Effects and add more content

~~OVERALL~~
Decent but very short needs more

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[Indiania Flour Sack]

Decent but needs more

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad the animation itself seemed ok but might be improved with some music and or sound/fx, its a good little animation though, i look forward to your future works

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add sond/fx and or music, you can even try something from the audio portal

~~OVERALL~~
Nice animation but needs work

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[Noir Madness.]

Haha cool

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was cool especially the intro, it really themed like madness, love the touch of color added, anyways nice entry

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing its good as is

~~OVERALL~~
Decent flash here make more soon

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Tager responds:

Thanks alot :D

[Madness Aggravation]

Nice detail you have here

~~REVIEW~~
Very nice detail you have here with backrounds, also noticed the nice and smooth animation, i wouldnt mind seeings some flashy effects with that though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add some flashy effects like more detail and possibly some "ALPHA" effect in stuff

~~OVERALL~~
Anyways nice madness with good detail

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SilenzXE responds:

Just so you know... I didn't make any of this stuff. I am making my own sprites atm, but these aren't it.

Thanks for the review! :D

[haiku project]

This was entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
This was a cute and entertaining flash i love the character shows you have good detail, you could detail the backround abit better, maybe with some flying birds or something to make it look abit more real.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround details would be nice

~~OVERALL~~
Decent flash cute and funny, nice work

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icetray111 responds:

yeah i know. This was a rushed a project. I didnt like doing it either which is why i rushed to get it done and plus I ran out of time cause i procrastinated :P.

But thanx for the review man. i could use some constructive critism.

[Too horny!]

Cute flash

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was really cute especially the character, i thought the text above the head would have been better if it was at the bottom on some sorta scroll bar but thats just me, nice flash in anycase

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a scroll bar at bottom for the text

~~OVERALL~~
Decent and cute flash you have here

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Kaytee responds:

It's not meant to be cute >:3

But thanks for the review anyway :)

[Glycolysis]

Educational

~~REVIEW~~
Well it does teach some that was the good part, the "AUDIO" was abit scratchy so possibly a better quality mic or music instead

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A better mic

~~OVERALL~~
Decent flash

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[Goat Runner]

Cute flash

~~REVIEW~~
This was a cute flash but i found it entertaining, the "MUSIC" was really good it really made this flash even better, anyways nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the screenview abit larger

~~OVERALL~~
Cute animation better music

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Graeme responds:

Choosing music is difficult. I wish I could have found something maybe a little more suiting. But nothing had exactly the feel I was going for.

And, I was wondering about the screen view too. I didn't want the goat to be too big. Nor did I want more than just a handful of frames on screen at once.
I suppose I could have tinkered with it a bit more though.

Thanks for the helpful tips