XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Randomness Fight]

Could be reduced in size

~~REVIEW~~
Well first off i would suggest reducing the size of the flash as it was abit larger and will turn alot of

56k users away so thats a start, it was interesting though just needs abit of file reduction

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
File reduction

~~OVERALL~~
Big file but still decent work and this artist is getting better

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[moneyrun]

This was very good

~~REVIEW~~
haha the graphics were simple but you presented a good idea and concept which made me laugh and really enjoy

it, improved graphics would only improve on this one, anyways nice job indeed. i will add this to my faves

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some imprived details in character and some shading in backrounds wouldnt hurt

~~OVERALL~~
Awsome idea very funny

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[Brendon & Gerrard Show 01]

Um ok

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad on the characters, but the voices could use some re-working, it was abit scratchy, and it had some

random image moments which was silly, but overall i thought it was ok, but can be improved

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better quality of voices could be used

~~OVERALL~~
Another silly flash

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[Music Video]

Notbad

~~REVIEW~~
Well that was notbad, the black and white style is cool, some added color just here and there would spice it

up, but overall its a good little video, maybe even making the screen abit larger would be nice aswell

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the screen abit larger and add some color here and there

~~OVERALL~~
Good music video

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[Wicked Twist (old)]

Interesting

~~REVIEW~~
Interesting animation, the music was a nice tough, but it seems to droput halfway through the animation,

your character was also ok but could use some fine details, other then that it was notbad

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Less thicker lines on the outline of the character can be a start

~~OVERALL~~
Good start but needs improving

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mightclark responds:

Thank you for your Review XwaynecoltX, i appreciate your tips, and thoughts on this animation. I've recently been working on improving my artwork skills, and I'm currently remaking this series with the same general ideas. I hope to see your comments and ideas for the remade version.

[Clock Crew's Final End !]

Notbad for a clock flash

~~REVIEW~~
Well notbad on this one i liked seeing the old clocks in there, i wouldnt mind understanding the clocks abit

more though, other then that it was a funny episode

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some subtitles

~~OVERALL~~
Clocks of the old

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[Mikey, revisited]

Seems abit slow

~~REVIEW~~
This was a good animation except it seemed abit slow you should speed it up abit make each scene go by

faster, and abit of detailing on your characters wouldnt hurt either, other then that it was notbad

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Speed the story up abit

~~OVERALL~~
Good story just abit slow

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[New Orleans Laptops!]

Interesting

~~REVIEW~~
That was interesting and kinda funny, the size was ok but was starting to be abit much other then that it was an ok flash

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Cut the size somewhat

~~OVERALL~~
Interesting idea