XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Atomic Bar episode 4]

Funny animation

~~REVIEW~~
Funny stuff here, good quality style of flash and makes me laugh with some of the humor, this is the type of movie that i would like to see compressed abit better ill explain below.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Lowering the size of the flash helps everyone including more views for your flash, maybe even making it into two parts would help so that you dont overwelm the user or something just abit of advice your way.

~~OVERALL~~
Overall this was ok flash some compresson is needed though

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[yellin' bobby]

Could have been better

~~REVIEW~~
Could have had more effort on this, it was silly and somewhat funny but seems like it could have used some more effort, all around

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More content is needed more plot aswell

~~OVERALL~~
Funny for abit

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[FOX in a Nutshell]

Funny

~~REVIEW~~
Funny flash you have here made me chuckle just abit not alot but just abit, maybe add some subtitles, as it was hard to hear what they were saying at the start.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some subtitles it will improve on the voices

~~OVERALL~~
funny flash here and random nice stuff

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[Kirby Kirby Kirby]

Nice kirby

~~REVIEW~~
Very neat but then again all kirby stuff is always, it gave me much laughter as kirby was just a cute ball of joy, anyways nice work here keep it up

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make mor ekirby stuff

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining kirby flash

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[The Mattress Resprung 2/2]

Tjis wa spretty good

~~REVIEW~~
A pretty good flash here eventhough it was abit long on loading so reduce the file just abit, other then that it was great

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Filesize was somewhat large I use 56k and im sure alot of other users do aswell and something to think about when making really big flashworks and the filesize is that big think about the user abit as they might not beable to download as some people may be impatient, compress it abit or cut it down somehow but remember that alot of us use 56k..

~~OVERALL~~
Decent but could use some compressing

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[Wily Shorts #5]

Haha another good one

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was amusing made me laugh throughout the flash i enjoyed it you should have more action scenes though, anyways keep up the good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more action scenes

~~OVERALL~~
Funny film

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[I am not a Togepi!]

Add some subtitles

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad on this especially with the graphics. well done there i especially like the detail of the backrounds

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some subtitles

~~OVERALL~~
A good little flash nice graphics all around

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hanman917 responds:

Thanks for the compliments and the advice. I might go back and add subtitles because the little egg guy with the deep voice is hard to understand.

[Don't Smoke... Please?]

Notbad at all

~~REVIEW~~
I liked this, allthough it was short it had some smooth graphics a good meaning and some nice music, you should make more that are like this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe abit longer next time

~~OVERALL~~
short but good meaning

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StupidGir responds:

Thanks! I will try to improve next time!