XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Mattress Resprung 2/2]

Tjis wa spretty good

~~REVIEW~~
A pretty good flash here eventhough it was abit long on loading so reduce the file just abit, other then that it was great

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Filesize was somewhat large I use 56k and im sure alot of other users do aswell and something to think about when making really big flashworks and the filesize is that big think about the user abit as they might not beable to download as some people may be impatient, compress it abit or cut it down somehow but remember that alot of us use 56k..

~~OVERALL~~
Decent but could use some compressing

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[Wily Shorts #5]

Haha another good one

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was amusing made me laugh throughout the flash i enjoyed it you should have more action scenes though, anyways keep up the good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more action scenes

~~OVERALL~~
Funny film

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[I am not a Togepi!]

Add some subtitles

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad on this especially with the graphics. well done there i especially like the detail of the backrounds

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some subtitles

~~OVERALL~~
A good little flash nice graphics all around

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hanman917 responds:

Thanks for the compliments and the advice. I might go back and add subtitles because the little egg guy with the deep voice is hard to understand.

[Don't Smoke... Please?]

Notbad at all

~~REVIEW~~
I liked this, allthough it was short it had some smooth graphics a good meaning and some nice music, you should make more that are like this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe abit longer next time

~~OVERALL~~
short but good meaning

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StupidGir responds:

Thanks! I will try to improve next time!

[fun stuff 999]

More randomness

~~REVIEW~~
here we have another fun stuff episode with lots of randomness not much more then that it was entertaining though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Keep on with the random style

~~OVERALL~~
Funny random stuff as always with these

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[fun stuff 776]

Haha random

~~REVIEW~~
I remember these, they are all random, dont get me wrong, they are funny and entertaining just not much to them, the "REGIS" holding the sign was my fave part though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more random stuff

~~OVERALL~~
Random stuff from start to finish

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