XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Ringtone W**ker!]

nice job

~~REVIEW~~
haha this was a good idea hehe, the ringtones do get anoying after awhile but this flash was right on and so true hehe thanks for making it

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
nothing it was just right

~~OVERALL~~
a true yet funny flash

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[Dokemon Channel A.H.]

graphics need work

~~REVIEW~~
notbad but the artwork could be much better, i liked the flash but it would wow alot more people with some more detail

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add abit more effort in graphics and detail

~~OVERALL~~
funny flash here

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[Smoke Kills Part 1]

haha cool

~~REVIEW~~
very good graphics here especially the graphics, the characters were good and well animated, an all around awsome flash with a funny idea.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more of these there are tons of ideas this would work with

~~OVERALL~~
Another great idea into flash

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[Abstract Cartoon]

decent

~~REVIEW~~
This was kinda funny, i like the idea the graphics could have been slightly better but im ok with this since it was abit funny, so nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
improved graphics would be nice maybe some voices aswell

~~OVERALL~~
Decent work here i liked it

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[Mario Get Down!]

Trippy flash

~~REVIEW~~
Very funny and trippy i like all the color changes, mario does get down hehe, anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add more characters and more marios getting down hehe

~~OVERALL~~
Mario really does get down lol

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RareKirbyStarBall2 responds:

Thanx :D this was just a shorty. you should see my stupid mindless brothaz :P

[Too Blondie]

Entertaining video

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad, i like the graphics and artwork and even the animation is good, but you could do more with it, as stated below

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Have the backround change colors or something have the character move into differant scenes, and some subtitles wouldnt hurt

~~OVERALL~~
An entertaining video here

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[TLB - Do you lke waffles?]

hehe silly

~~REVIEW~~
well that was kinda silly, kinda short aswell, you should have had it go longer and more characters maybe even go into a "WAFFLE HOUSE" or something, but it was still neat

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer with more scenes and stuff

~~OVERALL~~
Waffles are good

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[Seymour RaisinBuns]

Cool animation

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat the animation was very smooth, i like the black and white style, but i think you should add just a tad of color it will bring it out more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a touch of color here and there

~~OVERALL~~
Smooth animation

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CartonOMilk responds:

Ah, your right man, and thanks!
All these are more of a test honestly, this one was to BE smooth, so I'm happy then! haha
Thanks a lot for taken the time to review!

[Not so funny random Ep1]

could use some subtitles

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad on this the graphics were the best part of this, the animation was ok could be improved, add some subtitles because the lips moving and sound didnt work too well

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some subtitles as stated above

~~OVERALL~~
decent flash could use some more stuff worked on though

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