XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[TLB - Do you lke waffles?]

hehe silly

~~REVIEW~~
well that was kinda silly, kinda short aswell, you should have had it go longer and more characters maybe even go into a "WAFFLE HOUSE" or something, but it was still neat

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer with more scenes and stuff

~~OVERALL~~
Waffles are good

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[Seymour RaisinBuns]

Cool animation

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat the animation was very smooth, i like the black and white style, but i think you should add just a tad of color it will bring it out more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a touch of color here and there

~~OVERALL~~
Smooth animation

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CartonOMilk responds:

Ah, your right man, and thanks!
All these are more of a test honestly, this one was to BE smooth, so I'm happy then! haha
Thanks a lot for taken the time to review!

[Not so funny random Ep1]

could use some subtitles

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad on this the graphics were the best part of this, the animation was ok could be improved, add some subtitles because the lips moving and sound didnt work too well

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some subtitles as stated above

~~OVERALL~~
decent flash could use some more stuff worked on though

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[DBZ GloriousDream Redux!]

oh cool

~~REVIEW~~
I like these comic styles and this one had some really nice artwork, onlything it could use would be to add some more animation so that its not just a slideshow but you have it down

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more animation

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining cant wait for more

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[Asshats]

I liked it

~~REVIEW~~
This was pretty good, it sorta reminded me of the old clock crew flashes, you did good on character work, i would suggest even going as far as adding the "TEH EDN" at the end hehe

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add the ending of old clock crew movies

~~OVERALL~~
Funny stuff just like an old cc flash

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[Clone Link vs Link]

make it longer

~~REVIEW~~
I liked it, kinda neat and the characters were neat but kinda short, add some more content and some more stuff going on and it will be better

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add more content and make longer

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining but too short

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[we were soldier: the bomb]

Decent

~~REVIEW~~
A decent animation you have here good graphics nice style and good flow of animation an all around ok flash i liked it

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing i thought it was just right

~~OVERALL~~
Decent work here make more soon

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[The cold one-s]

haha funny

~~REVIEW~~
Well you did bring some good humor to it, and the artwork was not so bad either i was impressed. just abit more effort next time

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer and more story next time

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining short here

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