XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dinosaur Boy Episode 1]

This was nice

The story was really good here the visuals very nice not a lot of animation and as this is the portal , it was an entertaining piece the artwork was nice, wish there was more animation like on the mouths as they talk and such, but besides that this was pretty good work here some very deep storylines and nice art detail.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Other then more animation it was pretty solid stuff.

~X~

TheWhaleAnimation responds:

Thank you!
I saw you watched the fifth episode in early February, reckon the series gets better as the episodes go on :)

[alien lego attack 2]

Time for some Lego

This was cool seems like a more close up camera angle would have been better and maybe more faster tempo music of some sort and I would even go with a larger view screen, The legos are a great idea and you have presented some nice visual points here on this one, I love how you have some small action in this and theres "EVEN-A-SMALL-STORY" there, so its always exciting to see "LEGO-ANIMATIONS" such as you have presented here with this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
a more close up camera angle would have been better and maybe more faster tempo music of some sort and I would even go with a larger view screen

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[Valor’s World 5]

This was cute

So this was both cute and random and had some nice element about it, you have some ok animation but could be smoother a bit more direction on the story and some subtitles would go well here, but regardless of all that said this was rather cute and entertaining

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
you have some ok animation but could be smoother a bit more direction on the story and some subtitles would go well here

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stevetherapper responds:

I can’t use subtitles because I use phone, sorry. And this was a couple of months ago. And it will be super duper hard to use subtitles on your phone.

[Clay Meets Lego]

Lego is awsome

Haha that was cute and really short I would suggest making it longer with some added flashy effects and such, The lego movie you presented is pretty nifty and while there seems to be a big loading time it was well worth it, the action and and how the stop "ACTION-TAKES-PLACE" is all a fun element to these kinds of movies and I enjoyed the "LEGO-SCENES" and whatnot so nice job here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest making it longer with some added flashy effects and such

~X~

[Playful Kitties]

Entertaining

lol hmmm normally newgrounds doesnt get these random videos of people doing wacky things so I guess this is different I guess this being an art site you could ad some flashy effects to this to give it some more go power but anyways this was entertaining

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
you could ad some flashy effects to this to give it some more go power

~X~

[Lego people fighting]

Legos

Kind of short and the screen was kind of small so making it longer and more larger of a screen would be a plus, Well you cant go wrong with a lego movie, you have some decent lego stuff going on here, you have some nifty action even, now somethings could be smoother and even faster but overall this was "A-GREAT-MOVIE" with "SOME-LEGO-TWISTS" all about you I was pretty amazed with the visuals here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Kind of short and the screen was kind of small so making it longer and more larger of a screen would be a plus

~X~

[StarWarsGangstaRap:TEASER]

Very cool

Very cool and congrats on all the awards it had lots of success, with great work behind it all, this gangsta rap was very nice and you have some nice ideas the visuals are pretty nice too some good animation and starwars related so that was cool, very impressed, keep it up.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Could be longer

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[StopMotion Racers!]

Nice Claymation

A fun film here the screen size on this one could be larger and some added subtitles would be nice too, A nice claymation movie you have here this was some awsome detail if I do say so myself, some nice elements of suprise too "CLAYMATION-IS-UNIQUE" and glad we have clay movies like this one as you have done "A-FANTASTIC-JOB-HERE" with some clay works, very good flick indeed.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
fun film here the screen size on this one could be larger and some added subtitles would be nice too

~X~

[NG Time Trial 10 A]

nice work

Wow Afro you have really pushed it to the limits on this one, and daily second nice going, the music was cool, the animations were neat, they kept me in it till the end, anyways nice job, and congrats on the award. and hope you make more like this.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
no changes needed

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[Clayground - Ad Absurdity]

A Nice Clay Flick

Nice clay film I do think the screen size could be much larger the visual effects on this are really nice though, All the different stop motion element you have going on here with this piece of film, you bring a certain buzz to the portal, and there is not "CLAY-MATION" stuff everyday so it was nice finding this "GEM-OF-A-CLAY-FLICK" and I encourage you to make evenh more and make lots more.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
the screen size could be much larger the visual effects on this are really nice

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