XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Patrick Kawoop]

This was cute

~~REVIEW~~
This was a cute toon, i should say it does need some "STOP-ACTION-CODE" though since it loops over and over just thought i would give that tip there, anyways good toon nice color and its funny pretty short aswell

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a stop-Action code, it will stop the looping of the flash, aswell as some play and replay buttons. Add abit more content aswell seemed abit on the short side

~~OVERALL~~
A funny ST Patties day toon

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[SHIT! Redux]

Went by kinda fast

~~REVIEW~~
You have a decent flash here, from art too smooth animation, the characters were funny looking but thats what i liked, onlything this lacked was that the flash could have used some subtitles, anyways nice flash here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was ok but it wouldnt hurt to add some subtitles, not because anything was hard to hear or anything but because its just something extra that would make this abit better to understand and its like a nice little feature for your flash here

~~OVERALL~~
Could use a small fix but its a neat vid

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[KK Nes Vol 02 PaKK Man]

lol ok

Well another entertaining flash you have here, the cat head once again made this an entertaining and very amusing flash to view would like to view more of these, since they are all short they could be all placed in one flash.

Anyways good and funny stuff here

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PantyWipe responds:

thank ya

[KK NES Vol 04 R.K. Ransom]

lol cute

Haha well i found this entertaining, gave me a few laughs i really like the jpeg head on the old time sprites, it was way too "SHORT" though it needs to have much more content and last longer atleast abit longer

Funny flash but can be improved with more content and made longer not so short as it is

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PantyWipe responds:

thank you for the kind words, and not automatically zeroing it because its kitty krew!

[CoolJaw: T.T. II-V]

Hmmm differant

Well this was differant for sure, i like the idea of the color and you had a nifty little cursur in there all in all this was a nifty little flash wish it was abit more quality on choices but it is what it is

Fun flash here i look forward to more of your flash

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Celx-Requin responds:

Cool,
thanks for the review!
- Celx

[KK NES Vol 03 Kitty Kong]

Interesting game

You have an interesting game here its classic donkey kong with abit of a twist, dont get me wrong i love it but still seems so-so, you could improve on this like larger characters more animation from other characters and some more random humor would really help on this

Hope the tips above can help to improve on a funny flash here

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PantyWipe responds:

thank ya. when i made these i only had 6 hours and couldnt save my work (stupid college computer) so whatever i could whip up quickly had to do.

[21 Pains]

Needs more scnes

The graphics were pretty impressive,, the "VOICES" were not half bad, i really came to enjoy such a pleasent video and you did very well with the art, and some animation, but this lacked in other scnes i like what you did just wish it had much more effort in taking it into more differant scnes and backrounds

As said it needs to be taken into much more other scenes

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MonoFlauta responds:

oks thanks a lot for the review... in our next flash you will see all the things you are asking :p

[Tablet vs Pencil]

Cute

This was a cute little flash here i like the "2" Differant versions, its a start in the right direction, i think you should make more like this with the differant "CAMERA" styles but maybe in your next one you might want to introduce a color version vs a Black and white one, maybe this will give you a few ideas.

Well as i said a color version would be nice, but not just that make these flashes much longer and have the sticks doing much more in there perspective areas.

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martiescageda responds:

Your suggestion is really constructive and you have good ideas, but I guess I'll stop making these stick animations for a while dedicate myself to real cartoons. It's kinda hard working with perspective on stick figures to... Anyway, thanks for the review.

[Pleasure Island]

Nice artwork

The animation ran smooth the art was amazing, and the humor in all this was funny as hell i couldnt stop laghing after the kiss, the "SIZE" is somewhat large but other then that its an ok and funny flash you got here

I thought the file was a tad large you can compress it to a smaller size so that it doesnt take so long to load, this also making take up less on newgrounds, there are a number of things you can do reduce the size, from small images not so detailed dependent, smaller sound files etc.

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Sexual-Lobster responds:

reduce file size? from 3.8 MB? woah, you're oldskool