XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Madness TV]

Add some color

I know these types are meant to be black and white, but just an ounce of color, would be nice, also some other scenes that you had this in would also be nice, good luck in future stuff

Nice flash but could use abit more effort as i explained above

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Vaneetra responds:

Yea, it could have. But like I said, this is only my second attempt. I just need to practice with the basics a little more to get used to it and then try more complex situations and such. Thanks for the tips!

[Ep1 Beginning of Madness]

Funny characters

You made something decent here i really like the characters and how you made them all sorta unique and differant as so they have there own style and , personality, it made for a much more entertaining flash episode here

As to improve, make more episodes with even more entertaining characters and the animation could be smoother especially on the limbs.

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[Supercat Saves Teh Day]

Haha this was cute

Haha ok this was much better then the tittle leads on, the idea behind it was cute and your art style is neat and refreshing the color sheme is simple but i enjoyed itm as to improve? well i supose the file could be compressed somewhat, anyways nice flash

Improve on this film by compressing the filel

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[Super Mario World War]

Nice effects

This was nice the sprite work looks very sharp and crisp and the action was jam packed, the animation was awsome, I think if i was gonna give any advice it would to have the action go into much more scenes differant ones with all sorts of more action

It needs more scenes and stuff like i explained just above, hope it helps and hope to see new and upcoming vids from you

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diogoshx responds:

i understand!

yeah! what you are trying to say is that if i make more "different cameras of action". :D

More effects, and a little more, appreciation of the art, as well of a little longer movie.

thanks for your time!

[Red Ball Adventure]

Its cute

Well this was a cute little animation, the bouncing ball atleast i think thats what it was, has a funny and cute feel to it it was amusing though, i think it needs abit more such as much more color mainly in the backdrop of all the action, anyways i enjoyed your little flash here i hope my advice can help you improve

Some backround effort is needed, also it loops over and over that needs to be addressed with a stop action code

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[Most Random 60 Secs Ever]

Nice animation

A cute animation you have here, it seemed abit on the shortside, and i thought it could have used some subtitles, but i like what you did with it like the effects of fading out here and there, it cammeout to be an entertaining and very amusing flash, make more soon

Improve? well maybe start with some subtitles then you could add more content and make it a tad longer.

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[Mario Vs. Sonic Preview]

Macho mario

Wow i love this the characters alone is what did it for me and you added so much action very welldone on how smooth this animation flowed, and on top of that you thought of a good idea with Mario vs sonic, and now comes the question on mario he was more of a MACHO MARIO hehe but i guess plummers are that way lol, anyways i enjoyed your animation

Funny characters lots of action and smooth animating made this a hit with me. if i can help improve on your film it would be to suggest a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" it will stop yhe looping and ofcourse you need a play and replay buttons

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[Project "Early Bird"]

It was kinda slow

This animation kinda was slow, but i liked it, im a fan of sci fi stuff and this was right up there the story was my faveourite part you seemed to really put lots of effort into this, so while it was slow it was still a good flash and i thought in the end it was a fantastic entry.

Things to improve? speed up the animation and story, dont drag it on.

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