XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Javacke storyboards part1]

Kinda funny

~~REVIEW~~
Hhehe well it was kinda funny as i stated above, i did think you the artist could have worked on some featured to improve it, like i wouldnt mind some subtitles of some sort, not that it was bad or anything just that its a nice feature, anyways nice flash in anycase

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Subtiles as i stated above

~~OVERALL~~
A good flash i rather enjoyed myself with it, hope to see more of your work in the coming future

~X~

JonSock responds:

ya ill start to get better sooner or later

[Sponsor a starving child]

Made me chuckle

~~REVIEW~~
haha well it did make me chickle abit, kinda funny, i thought you could have added more scenes and just more characters to give it some more humor.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs more stuff, like i pointed out above

~~OVERALL~~
Funny but needs more

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[Lum the Fat]

It was interesting

~~REVIEW~~
This was interestting, i like the design, i did however think the loading bar could be re done o better fit the film though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
New loading bar

~~OVERALL~~
Awsome idea here

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[The Double Yolker]

enteryaining

~~REVIEW~~
haha this was cute, i like the "CIRCLE" view of it and on top of that it was funny made me laugh, anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more color seemed abit bland at times

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and nice idea

~X~

[mario constipated]

Kinda funny

~~REVIEW~~
Kinda funny, entertaining and somewhat amusing, you could have used more effort on backrounds and such, such as the bathroom scene it seemed abit bland, the joke it self was ok but could have used abit more "TACT" anyways it was what it was, better luck next time

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Bathroom scene needs some backround deail

~~OVERALL~~
Amusing joke

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[Dirtæ's Big Day]

could use more

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was ok i thought you could have put more ideas and such into it, also it was very bland, especially in the backrounds

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add more backround stuff, and new ideas

~~OVERALL~~
it was ok

~X~

[Bill Clinton - Homo]

lol clinnton

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was amusing the talking clinton was funny made me laugh here and there, you could make this longer and with more jokes and such.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer with more scenes and such

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining abit short though

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[Star Wars Episode 2]

Text too slow

~~REVIEW~~
haha this was cool i love all things starwars, this was right upthere, i did however think the "TEXT" was abit slow speed that up abit and it will be fine

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Speed up the tex on the black screen points

~~OVERALL~~
It was entertaining could use some work on the text as explained above, nice vid though

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