XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[anot a b]

Interesting

Hmmm well it was interesting dont get me wrong there, but i thought it could be greatly improved such as your character designs you should mold them so its more character like, and have much more scenes and stuff going on.

Character designs needed

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[Inspire: typographic poem]

Hmmm notbad

This was notbad, a good idea of a poem on flash onlything i thought it could be improved on was that, it was just text all around, adding abit of "ANIMATION" wouldnt hurt and may make it more enjoyble for others, just an idea though.

Needs more then just the text, nice idea though

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[Hitcher Head of w/ a stic]

its notbad could use improving

i liked it, its very entertaining, i believe you need to add smoother frames per socond, and add some backrounds like other scenes for the characters, anyways better luck next time.

i made a few suggestions above that could help improve on this

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[My car is an automobile!2]

Random and funny

Funny. Could use some work on the animating and abit more effort on ideas. But I found the randomness of it all amusing and made me very glad to have seen it

more effort on ideas next time good stuff though

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[r]

Strange but notbad

Yeah abit on the strange side but I kinda liked it. It was entertaining atleast. Art seemed ok and even the animation was notbad. So all n all it was entertaining. Good luck on future stuffs

differant but still entertaining

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[camilledensen]

Notbad

Notbad on this one. The artwork seemed to go alright. Though there could have been some improving on the animating. Maybe making it abit more smooth somehow. Anyways hope this review helps abit.

Work on smoothing out the animating abit

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[(un)coloured]

Good music

Notbad on here. The music was good. A really good choice I thought there does need to be more to the flash itself. More action I would think so. Good start though

add much more content and more action

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michiforjoy responds:

Hey thanks! I recorded the music just for this, which was fun! I agree that it was a bit boring later on hahaha. :D