XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[NYC meetup 2010 slideshow]

Notbad

~~REVIEW~~
Well its notbad a slideshow simple yet fun, the pics were nice to see and seems like everyone had fun and such, this was not a bad attaempt but i feel it lacks "INFO" you should add info with each image give the viewers an idea of what was going on, seemed like there was some pretty funny moments and a picture only tells part of the story, so some "CAPTIONS" would be great

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Like i explained some captions would be just perfect but make it abit more then captions, put in what was going on in each pic with more detail

~~OVERALL~~
Fun pics here

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Parlux responds:

Thanks for the review, but like I said I don't have flash skills I suck but I'm learning I'm gonna start watching tutorials cause I really wanna earn some skills. Don't expect me to make my own series or anything I might just learn a few skills for some collabs here and there but I'm a spam artist at heart.

[Mortal Kombat People II]

This was nice

~~REVIEW~~
This was such a neat idea, i hope you make more episodes with more characters you guys did pretty well though, the fight was pretty intense, how long did it take you for this? anyways great stuff keep up the neat flash-mations

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More effects would really work well on this like the smoke stuff and other neat things that happened in MK games

~~OVERALL~~
Funny flash cant wait for more

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DiegoNOX responds:

The recordings lasted about 3 hours ...
It was the time used to find clothing characteristics, think about how we would work and training before the original recording ...

The effects, I try to improve more and more ever.

Thanks a lot

[Super Mario Blitz]

Crazy

~~REVIEW~~
This was abit crazy, the animation and animations went by very fast, but it all seemed to flow together, there was lots to see, and you had some fast action packed with some pretty entertaining stuff, so nice job there

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Slow it down just abit, so one can enjoy all the little animations

~~OVERALL~~
Fast and the furrous meets Super mario world

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[Rage Bot ep. 1]

You have something here, but needs much more

~~REVIEW~~
For starters you may want to make it longer with more chacters and more scenes and more backround detail, this one lacked alot of that and couldbenifit from those tips, also more details wouldnt hurt

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As stated above a few tips could help to improve on this

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining and short needs more, i pointed out a few tips that may help

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FlashMasterXD responds:

Waw, and your a detective or something!
Okay fine, I'll make Ep. 2 better!
There are actualy alot more charecters but I can't finish it, because I haven't got a Femail voice actor.

[Super Mario Galaxy 3 Ep.2]

Large size but still entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
Sprites are nicely animated you had some nice features such as the "SPACEBAR" to go to next text that was very nice, the "SIZE" was abit much, but i did still enjoy this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try and compress just a tad

~~OVERALL~~
Good flow of animation it was a good little flash here

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[Lunch!]

Lol very cute

~~REVIEW~~
Very welldone on this clay-mation, it was very "SHORT" but it was very entertaining, you made a cute story and the clay was very smoothly animated hard to do with clay from what i hear, but regardless it was very good to see such entertaining clay action

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggest to make more of this, cause the story is great but needs to be longer

~~OVERALL~~
Fun clay action

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[Vice Faction: Episode 15]

Overall a good animation

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm this was an overall good flash some nice artwork with characters and backrounds and even a decent story to go by, it can be better i belive, maybe its me but i didnt notice a play button at start, i ended up having to right clcik play, something to fix i think, anyways nice flash, improve on it just some details here and there

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The play button? it could use one, unless that was just some glich

~~OVERALL~~
Great art nice animation, all will injoy
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[Sword Short]

Yes very short

~~REVIEW~~
The little animation is actually pretty good, but there are a few things that could fix this up, such as for starters to make the view screen much larger, 2nd you can add more action with more color mainly in the backdrop, and also give it new places like mountains ships etch

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I pointed out a few ideas above hope it helps to improve on this

~~OVERALL~~
Abit short and small but can be better

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[You Know What I'm Saying?]

Its notbad

~~REVIEW~~
well its notbad, i like it, lots to see some good animations in there and such, the "VIEW SCREEN" is somewhat small, you should make that larger, also the size needs to be compressed, anyways good luck on other stuff

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the screen larger as to see more stuff, and compress the file abit just a few tips to help this get better

~~OVERALL~~
Needs a few fixes but overall was entertaining

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