XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[WALL WARS]

Needs a stop action code

~~REVIEW~~
Well here was an interesting and entertaining flash video the "CHARACTERS" were actually pretty cute and creative, i noticed this flash loops , you can fix that easily with a stop action code, by also addings osme play and replay buttons it should run better and not loop as to not allow users to miss something or come in on the middle of it and such, dont get me wrong this is a pretty neat flash here cute and lots to see but most of all the looping should be fixed, and also maybe fill in alot of the bland spots the white parts outside of the door scenes, a basic color would help but the white is just too bland if you ask me. so fix the looping ad something to the bland white spots, make the video somewhat longer and you should have something pretty decent here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
fix the looping with a stop action code, fill in the bland areas, and as mentioned make it longer with even more stuff going on

~~OVERALL~~
abit short and needs some fixing but is entertaining for the mostpart

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[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 094]

Interesting

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm well this is interesting i really like the backrounds on this one im thinking you should have put the pokemon more deeper into the cave with mayne some glowing eyes and such, and make the whole cave somewhat darker aswell, might make for something differant in the series.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
as explained a darker caveren, and the pokemon down at the end

~~OVERALL~~
hitler in the cave

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[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 132]

oh wow

~~REVIEW~~
oh wow i think this was the first time i have seen hitler on the other side of the image in the whole series infact, well who said change was bad hehe, anyways i like the small change here and cute lil pokemon there aswell. now all you need in this one and others alike is abit of animation some story to it and such.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
ad some animation to the pokemon and or hitler, also some added story would be nice

~~OVERALL~~
entertaining and somewhat differant this time

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[I'm Not Your Broom]

Short and amusing

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad with this one, the "PLAY" screen had that nifty tank, but the back end of this area was all blank, might have been nice to see something back there atleast something not so bland as the white backround, i normally find some deep greens and reds to be pretty neat, just an idea though, its not anything major but it could help, now as i view the flash its pretty neat filled with some very creative and nifty characters, i do like the black and white style, but the backrounds seem to bland even for black and white theme as you have here, now maybe if you had the back end black and white, and the characters "OUTLINED" in some sorta color, your flash seemed way too short, so maybe you could make it longer or maybe add other little short animation s with it, you know to give it that extra bit for the viewers to really enjoy what you have here, i guess i can understand the shortness for it for the end result but still something to think about, and last but not least ad some "SUBTITLES" it would be a nice little extra for the viewers, well hope i didnt bore you with my review infact hope it helped abit, anyways good luck on your next entry

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
above i mentioned a number of suggestions such as , subtitles, color in the backend, longer ending, and a menu screen blandness

~~OVERALL~~
funny and short but still could be even better

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[Fap to NG acts: Frostbrth]

notbad once again

~~REVIEW~~
Well its not a large file but did take abit to load so maybe lower it just a tad, also this might do abit better with some subtitles, and since i seen one or two of these have more visuals maybe a post history review history and so on. but for what its worth its pretty entertaining.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
have more "VISUALS" in there not just of the profile but post and review history you might beable to bring up some funny stuff there, and some subtitles wouldnt hurt either

~~OVERALL~~
profile flash of frostbirth

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[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 065]

Needs more

~~REVIEW~~
now dont get me wrong i like this series and i know i complain about no or very little animation but with just abit more it could be slightly better also i think you should put the pokeball in differant places not always in his hand, just have it pop up differant places and such, anyways good luck on the next entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
have the pokeball in differant places of the screen and since the pokemon is out have the pokeball opened aswell

~~OVERALL~~
amusing pokemon/hitler episode

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