XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Destructo Box Christmas!]

Funny and amusing

~~REVIEW~~
Now when i saw this i was glad to see another episode, i have watched some of them and this one was intersting very funny indeed, First of all the {GRAPHICS} are very welldone, not your normal style, the {VOICES} were pretty straigt on and good wouldnt hurt to have some subtitles though, the voices were somewhat deep, but could help more with some subtitles. but the first one was great, funny, i like how you present these, maybe you should put in more then just the two, but from what you do have it was great, and love how you use differant styles for the graphics, To improve on this, i would have more then just the two toons, maybe a 3rd one so its not too big, but maybe make more with some other wacky and strange stuff happening, but anyways great stuff you have here, i loved it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add another toon or two, maybe even have some more {EFFECTS} like with the second toon, there seemed to be more stuff going on.

~~OVERALL~~
A couple of good and fun clips of xmas destruction

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DestructoBox responds:

More then 2 shorts in submission probably won't ever happen mostly because that would mean we'd have to NOT release shorts as we finish them just to be able to release them in multishort packs. We'd rather get them to you all asap without waiting for another short to be finished. This was a special case since last years special wasn't on newgrounds and we wanted to bring you all the sequel without waiting another year!

Thanks for watching!

[ASuperMarioBrosQuicky3]

Cute little short here

~~REVIEW~~
lol this was actually pretty funny, but still kinda on the short side but guess thats why you put in "QUICKY" but maybe as an improvment you can put a whole bunch of quickies in one flash say 3-5 might make for a better flash with much more to see then the short quicky, but as for your short little toon, i thought it was pretty entertaining and even somewhat cute, the {BACKROUNDS} are ok but thought you could have done a little more with them, maybe have the backrounds more art style while keeping the sprites as the main characters, just an idea though and you never know people may just like the new style, and also wouldnt hurt to add some subtitles, just as an added extra feature for the flash, but besides all that it was funny, and a cute little short. anyways untill next time, good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You can improve on this, with a few extras, one being have one flash with lots of small shorts in it besides just the one, saves room, and shows more effort on yourside, adding subtitles wouldnt hurt, and having a mixture of art and sprites would also be a plus.

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and amusing abit on the short side.

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Mario8th responds:

Dude Thanks! I eventually will make what you were saying, 3-5 animations in one video, and it will be a new series I'm going to do. I've a actually already thought about it. About the subtitles, some will have them, others wont. I'm truthfully not very proud of this animation, but I am proud of qucky2. Also, the background sucked because the tile set I got was absolutely horrible.=(
Yes, it is supposed to be short.
Thanks for your review, and if you want to see a better one check out some previous ones.
thanks.

[Gaia Adventures 2.3]

Very good story-line

~~REVIEW~~
A funny game you have here, the animation was good, and i really like how you put a story in there along with the sprite like characters, i like that you have to click on the next button, but you should let it flow like a movie, seems anoying at times to always just click on the button, but still its an ok flash and good story with some decent art and graphics, and again the animation was pretty good, you really show effort in this and thats what we dont see alot of but i liked it regardless, Now as to improve on, i would lose the buttons, and let it flow like a movie, but other then that it was ok with me and i had a pleasure watching and reviewing this, anyways nice job keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
remove the buttons and let it flow like a movie.

~~OVERALL~~
nice flash good stpryline.

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Killit666 responds:

Thanks for the review. The reason why I added buttons was to make it more interactive because it's a flash movie. Otherwise I would have made it for youtube. This series has become somewhat exclusive to newgrounds even if people hate the series or not.

[Angry Bob : Monsters]

Randomly funny

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok now this one was amusing, seemed really {SHORT} the animation and art were very smooth and also liked the sound/fx you added along with this one, it all seemed to synk all together, now while this didnt really have any story line or anything as it was more random, thats what sorta made it funny and amusing, Still again i thought it was kinda short and i could actually see this run a bit better with more of a colab type so maybe you make 3 or more of these short flashes you could ad it as a flash with these shorts in it instead of just the one short flash, dont get me wrong its pretty funny and love the smoothness of it and the art of your blue character and monsters is funny and a neat idea, other then that its ok.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As above make it in a flash along with other shorts, or ad to it, its a good idea and you already have the animation to go with, go with that and it will be much better imroved

~~OVERALL~~
Short but was randomly funny

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ZoVies responds:

haha htnx i will work on it :3

ps.
WOOOOOOOOW THE MAKED OF GHOST MOTEL SAW MY CRAPPY MOVIE!! yaha xd
i feel important already ghehehe :D

[The Christmas Caper]

Very good humor

~~REVIEW~~
The file at first seemed to take awhile but that caught up in no time, nice job on the loader page, its always the first thing people see and you presented a nice looking one, The toon you have here is actually very funny and you presented us with lots of funny characters and unique, the sounds were really good so nice job on the voice over, even the song was funny, not to mention you gave the toon lots of humor lots of little jokes here and there, so i was glad to have seen this it was amusing and very funny, as to improve on it, not sure maybe better animation for the limbs and stuff and really make new scenes in there aswell, but mostly it was just fine, so i hope you make more of this like in a series of sorts, anyways nice toon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe somewhat shorter not as long but not too short either, and improved animation on the limb movment

~~OVERALL~~
Funny story and great humor in this one

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[Cigarettes Life (extended]

Can be better with practice

~~REVIEW~~
This was not a bad start, the animation was a bit {CHOPPY} the music was good and seemed more like a music video, the {ANIMATION} seemed kinda slow and choppy as said before, but these things can be improved easily, and you asked about some tutorials, all you have to do is do a search in the forums, or even go the the flash forums, there are alot of tips there to help improve on stuff, with your animation just needs some smoother animation, more use of the backround and more stuff going on, you have it right with the idea, and characters but you may want to fine tune those, also i noticed the {CONTINUE-BUTTON} didnt seem to want to work, thats another issue you may want to look into, and while we are on buttons you may want to make a more bigger and standoutish buttion, and more color use, anyways hope this helps you in making improved creations, anyways good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few things that could be improved on would be better working buttons, improved animation and a smoother feel, i suggested some help tips and how to find them on the forums.

~~OVERALL~~
Cute but still needs improvments

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AmeatureFilms responds:

thx, but i found out why the btn doesnt work, in my action script i said to go to and play "scene1" but i had changed the scene name to killed, that is y.

Thx for the useful help

[Gypsie Short]

Decent but could be better

~~REVIEW~~
lol ok this was amusing, it was rather short though, but for the content that you did put in there it was amusing and short, but i think you had the idea right, just needs to be somewhat longer and you could introduce some new and differant characters give it more of a {STORYLINE} the {CARDS} seemed abit fuzzy aswell, but with some small fixes and more details like the graphics, making it longer, and introducing alot more to really just make it a more fuller flash that you have presented here, but like i said i liked it, oh and some {SUBTITLES} wouldnt hurt but anyways good stuff i look forward to seeing more from you this was pleasent.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some subtitles, ad more scenes and characters and ad abit more detail in the graphics like on the cards, and just making it longer with more characters,

~~OVERALL~~
Decent but still could use some improving

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Bluealex999 responds:

Thanks for the advice!

[Taco Bell Stories Ep. 1]

Decent idea

~~REVIEW~~
haha ok this was funny and i got a good laugh from this now its not the best but you do have a good {IDEA} with this one basicly because its simple and you have some voices in there, now you can take this flash and improve on it i can see alot of stories coming from it and making it shine, some things of improving would be, so some ideas would be some added color, and ofcourse some better synking so the sound and animation match up better, , and make them abit longer so it looks better all together, better fonts aswell wouldnt hurt either, but all and all it would be a good idea to make more and just really go with it, and if they are too short, you could put a number of em in one flash just another idea that would make for a good series and such, anyways it was a pleasure to see and review this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
as suggested above a few ideas , better sound synking is a plus though, and more orginized.

~~OVERALL~~
amusing idea can work if better orginized

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Senmetsu responds:

I'm seein' a trend in what needs fixing and its all the things I thought needed some fixing.

A) Its too short.
B) It's too rushed.
C) I need someone who knows flash better, or to practice more.
D) I need some real voice actors to help me possibly.
E) Keep up with the IDEA of telling funny stories from work, but improve the flash quality :)

Thanks for the thought out idea, I really thought this flash would get blammed so to see such support really helps. Thanks :) Maybe I CAN do this if I just put some actual care into learning what I'm doing.