XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Kapanet Clock Crew]

Random and amusing

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so this one was cute, the menu screen before the main event heh, always nice to see a little something before the actual show so nice job there with the flying ghost? now while its an ok menu i think you still need some sorta "LOGO" there about the flash that is about to play and such, but anyways onto the film, Wow i must say this is a funny little flash you have here, now first off the "AUDIO" seemed so perfect for this, especially the way you animated the characters, to really reflect off the music so really awsome job, i think i will ad this one to my faves just because of that, but anyways, Haha well i had a really fun time watching and reviewing this, you added lots of color and joy, the music really put this in a new perspective of a joyish toon, and the art was very smooth and refreshing, in the end this kept a smile on my face, and makes me want to watch more of your tunes, so i do plan to watch more especially if they are like this, anyways as to improve on this one? well keep the same style and make more wacky stuff like this, i did think you should have had more funny and random stuff happening infact even adding more "CC CHARACTERS" would have been nice, anyways nice work once again, it was a pleasure to review.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more random stuff happen, and add more clock crew characters within your flashes.

~~OVERALL~~
A funny and random flash which will take you on its own adventure, hope you all like it as much as i did.

~X~

[Rolling Girl]

Entertaining music video

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm now this was a very pleasent flash, it had a more "MUSIC-VIDEO" feel then anything but that was the neat thing about it, i also like the black and white style of it and all, but also you gave it that touch of color that made it abit more then just black and white, now i cant say i liked the ending as it just seemed to "CUT-OFF" but for the most part it is pretty good, as for the "ANIMATION" its notbad, somepoints it seemed choppy but then kicked it right away so that could be me , and as for the "MUSIC" it was a good choice seemed to fit the animation verywell, just didnt like how it cut off at the end, so the flash was great even the "ART" was notbad at all somewhat simple style but overall still enjoyble, i enjoyed the entire flash as a an amusing and entertaining music video, didnt understand it much but it was enjoyed so nice job there. I f i were to suggest improving on stuff it would probably be adding just abit more color, making more of an ending when the music just cuts off, these are just a few things to work on, but overall i enjoyed your flash animaion.music video.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Also explained above, adding just abit more color, and maybe abit more quality on the sound as i did hear some scratchyness, and would like more of an ending as the music seemed to just cut off.

~~OVERALL~~
So overall a good animation here, like a music video, amuing and some nifty music, i hope to see more like this.

~X~

[LL - Regarding the CC]

Nice LL/CC Flash

~~REVIEW~~
LOL ok so this was a pretty entertaining flash here on the lock Legion and the clock crew, i dont know i have been watching clocks for 10 years now and locks a little after that, but as for this one this was pretty nifty like the opening loaders and good effects that was presented with it, as for the little story, it was notbad, i did think some subtitles could have been used for the clocks talking, you did present some nice animation, like with the falling "LOCKS" and all, and from start to finish it wasa pleasent flash i even thought the ending was funny with the little sayings and all, So a good flash here about the LL, and abit of the CC, so all and all a good entertaining flash, good luck on any other entries.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The onlything i really saw, was possibly some subtitles but even that was somewhat ok, maybe throw in a few more effects like when the locks are falling have some flares or light effects behind them or something.

~~OVERALL~~
a good LL flash of recruiting hehe

~X~

[This is not a Test 3: SFX]

Good story, decent graphics

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm ok notbad of a flash here, the characters are really good, lots of awsome design great use of color and a number of awsome detail to go along with them, I did notice a few things that could make this even better though, such as, it could use some "SUBTITLES" also a play button at the start wouldnt hurt either as it just starts off right away, the story itself is pretty good and you had some ok "EFFECTS" but thought there could be more enhanced effects aswell, like more sparkles, more gradients like fire stuff, you did pretty awsome with the characters and shades, and overall it was a good story here, so i really had fun with this, you should ad a preloader with a play button at the start, that was the big thing for me, But anyways i enjoyed this flash eventhough it was a tad older good stuff all the way through.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The movie starts right off so you may want to ad a play button, This was ok but it wouldnt hurt to add some subtitles, not because anything was hard to hear or anything but because its just something extra that would make this abit better to understand and its like a nice little feature for your flash here, adding abit more enhanced effects would also be a nice touch.

~~OVERALL~~
Now overall this was a good flash nice story, could be improved with a few touch ups.

~X~

[Vintage Voicemail 2]

Amusing

~~REVIEW~~
First of all, nice loader page, still has the "GREEN" touch you always like to go with and that i liked, and it had something that would have been related to the flash, like the cell-phone. so nice touch there, Now i must admitt that this was pretty short, so wont be easy on my to review but i will do my best, so it did make me laugh, and the "AUDIO" was pretty funny and amusing, the guy in the backround jumping around was funny and somewhat random so nice job there, the backround scene was notbad and showed some good effort all around, but i feel that if you took the flash into other and new scenes, like maybe the guy is walking around, throughout the house, while the bouncing guy behind fallowed him, might give it that extra bit humor, aswell as making it somewhat longer, so its just an idea, but might work, either in this or a later version and or update, But anyways i had a fun time with this, you should make more , but try and make em longer if you can.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Have more scenes in it, like him walking around aswell as the bouncing guy, also not really a major thing but the lip animation didnt exactly match up with the audio but i also understand how that can also be a pain so not a big thing.

~~OVERALL~~
So overall it was short, but still was amusing.

~X~

[ANAL FURY LOLICON HENTAI]

amusing

~~REVIEW~~
LOL ok so i started this and it had a small little animation which is notbad, you have some cute characters and really good use of color so it all seemed to pay off, and then pops up the play button so it can only get better from here which i like, Ok so the first one to click on was a fould language word that was interesting, So after viewing them all these were all somewhat entertaining but too much flashing, i think you should do more on like what the intro was as that was abit more entertaining.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More of a story more animation but with less of the flashing

~~OVERALL~~
Silly short clips with too much flashing.

~X~

[Shaolin Master]

Needs some fixing up.

~~REVIEW~~
Well first off i thought this was way too short, you need to add much more content, more chacahters and much more color aswell as better visuals, and second you should probably ad a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" so those are the main things that need some work as for the animation itself, its notbad of an idea, kinda cute if you ask me and you have a good idea but like i said the visuals could be better, and more detail in the characters and effects aswell, so really this is ok but needs much more effort and detail on the animation, some ideas to improve on would be instead of the "LINES" as characters give them more full body types and have them animated abit smoother it seemed choppy at times, making it longer with other scenes other characters and much more use of color will also help, these are just a few ideas that could improve on this, try them out and see what you come up with.. but like i said it needs lots of ideas and improving, wont hurt to try.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So i mentioned a few things to improve on, I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see, So more is needed, if not making it a short, make it filled with much more then you have, this movie "LOOPS" now thats actually an easy fix, you can use a stop-action-code from the action - script and there are actually lots of easy to understand tutorials here on the site to view on how this is done if you dont know, but anyways the stop-action-code will stop the looping, but dont forget to add some "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons for the viewers to restart viwing the flash, so these are just a few tips on improving on this i hope its helpful for your next creation.

~~OVERALL~~
A very short flash but can be improved, kinda funny idea i liked, of what was there.

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