XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Christmas Caper]

Very good humor

~~REVIEW~~
The file at first seemed to take awhile but that caught up in no time, nice job on the loader page, its always the first thing people see and you presented a nice looking one, The toon you have here is actually very funny and you presented us with lots of funny characters and unique, the sounds were really good so nice job on the voice over, even the song was funny, not to mention you gave the toon lots of humor lots of little jokes here and there, so i was glad to have seen this it was amusing and very funny, as to improve on it, not sure maybe better animation for the limbs and stuff and really make new scenes in there aswell, but mostly it was just fine, so i hope you make more of this like in a series of sorts, anyways nice toon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe somewhat shorter not as long but not too short either, and improved animation on the limb movment

~~OVERALL~~
Funny story and great humor in this one

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[Cigarettes Life (extended]

Can be better with practice

~~REVIEW~~
This was not a bad start, the animation was a bit {CHOPPY} the music was good and seemed more like a music video, the {ANIMATION} seemed kinda slow and choppy as said before, but these things can be improved easily, and you asked about some tutorials, all you have to do is do a search in the forums, or even go the the flash forums, there are alot of tips there to help improve on stuff, with your animation just needs some smoother animation, more use of the backround and more stuff going on, you have it right with the idea, and characters but you may want to fine tune those, also i noticed the {CONTINUE-BUTTON} didnt seem to want to work, thats another issue you may want to look into, and while we are on buttons you may want to make a more bigger and standoutish buttion, and more color use, anyways hope this helps you in making improved creations, anyways good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few things that could be improved on would be better working buttons, improved animation and a smoother feel, i suggested some help tips and how to find them on the forums.

~~OVERALL~~
Cute but still needs improvments

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AmeatureFilms responds:

thx, but i found out why the btn doesnt work, in my action script i said to go to and play "scene1" but i had changed the scene name to killed, that is y.

Thx for the useful help

[Gypsie Short]

Decent but could be better

~~REVIEW~~
lol ok this was amusing, it was rather short though, but for the content that you did put in there it was amusing and short, but i think you had the idea right, just needs to be somewhat longer and you could introduce some new and differant characters give it more of a {STORYLINE} the {CARDS} seemed abit fuzzy aswell, but with some small fixes and more details like the graphics, making it longer, and introducing alot more to really just make it a more fuller flash that you have presented here, but like i said i liked it, oh and some {SUBTITLES} wouldnt hurt but anyways good stuff i look forward to seeing more from you this was pleasent.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some subtitles, ad more scenes and characters and ad abit more detail in the graphics like on the cards, and just making it longer with more characters,

~~OVERALL~~
Decent but still could use some improving

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Bluealex999 responds:

Thanks for the advice!

[Taco Bell Stories Ep. 1]

Decent idea

~~REVIEW~~
haha ok this was funny and i got a good laugh from this now its not the best but you do have a good {IDEA} with this one basicly because its simple and you have some voices in there, now you can take this flash and improve on it i can see alot of stories coming from it and making it shine, some things of improving would be, so some ideas would be some added color, and ofcourse some better synking so the sound and animation match up better, , and make them abit longer so it looks better all together, better fonts aswell wouldnt hurt either, but all and all it would be a good idea to make more and just really go with it, and if they are too short, you could put a number of em in one flash just another idea that would make for a good series and such, anyways it was a pleasure to see and review this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
as suggested above a few ideas , better sound synking is a plus though, and more orginized.

~~OVERALL~~
amusing idea can work if better orginized

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Senmetsu responds:

I'm seein' a trend in what needs fixing and its all the things I thought needed some fixing.

A) Its too short.
B) It's too rushed.
C) I need someone who knows flash better, or to practice more.
D) I need some real voice actors to help me possibly.
E) Keep up with the IDEA of telling funny stories from work, but improve the flash quality :)

Thanks for the thought out idea, I really thought this flash would get blammed so to see such support really helps. Thanks :) Maybe I CAN do this if I just put some actual care into learning what I'm doing.

[Sky High Misheard]

Could be better

~~REVIEW~~
Ok well this was differant but it was funny as hello, i like the variation of text and sound allthough the font you used was really large but still it was amusing, the music tends to get repetitive so you may want to change that up abit, The {ANIMATION} was notbad, kinda neat but it needs more images and differant variation of animations not just the same over and over, but really it was pretty good and somewhat entertaining so i did enjoy it but still needs more, so nice job for the mostpart, add abit more next time though anyways keep at it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
as said, make it have new animations maybe not so repetitive, for the most part it was ok.

~~OVERALL~~
entertaining but needs a few changes as stated above

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anunfittingname responds:

Its repetitive because its on a loop. The song doesn't have anymore lyrics so blame the song. Thanks for the review though!

[DD: Hokuto Hyakuretsu Ken]

Could be longer

~~REVIEW~~
lol ok i must admit this did give me a funny laugh here, the {SOUND/FX} was good, and the old sprites along with the action was funny aswell, the ending was great too, but i believe you could have done more with it including making it longer, because it was short and just the few scenes but it did give me a short laugh so notbad there at all, just add to it make it go into othere scenes maybe some other characters from the game or something but please do try and make it more longer. maybe even add it to other shorts so there a number of short shorts in one flash, but anyways it was a decent little flash and i got a good laugh out of it, so nice effort.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I stated that you could ad more scenes, and more characters also making it longer and or adding it to some sorta flash that has other shorts in it, just an idea though

~~OVERALL~~
A short but yet amusing flash here, does need more but it does have some decent effort.

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[Winter fun]

Funny and cute

~~REVIEW~~
First off i want to mention that this is pretty impressive i want to start out with the cute characters you got here not standoutish but still funny enough for a few laughs, so nice job there, and also like the preloader page with the characters and a backround aswell, it looks like effort was put all around, so nice job there, The {ANIMATION} itself was very cute lots of snow action, it was actually alot of stuff going on and that was pretty neat about it, you had lots of characters and again lots of action, very funny stuff and the {MUSIC} was notbad at all, this was funny and amusing and gave me a few laughs so props to you for that, now i hope you make more like this as it was A ok with me, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As for improving add abit of flashy effects in there, its probably not needed but wouldnt hurt, anyways nice job.

~~OVERALL~~
overall a funny and cute flash great characters and cute story with abit of action.

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[Thief]

Needs more work

~~REVIEW~~
Could have been better if it was finished it has a good idea around it but needs more stuff and content, like more characters props scenes and so fourth, so work on the idea you have and work around it, keep trying and practicing and it will be pretty good i think.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
as stated, you have an idea here now just add more effort all around that idea, much more content and so on, practice practice is always the best medicine in flash

~~OVERALL~~
an ok idea needs more effort though

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[V for Chappelle: Food]

Its interesting

~~REVIEW~~
Its an interesting flash, very random i thought, infact it reminded me of all them old flashes from back in the day from when newgrounds had first started, also you should add some subtitles, it will be a great option for the viewers, not that it really needs it but it would help out, and since the mic was abit off it is probably a big help in this flash, this ended really quick? you had a few randomness in there but i think if you added much more random "CHARACTERS" lets see to name a few, "GEORGE W BUSH" maybe "SARA PALIN" well thats just to name a few and might make for some good humor if you put them in some strange situations, but regardless of that, you need more "SCENES" in there more random backrounds would also be a nice addition to your very random and funny flash, it did give me a laugh or two though, well hope these small tips may help to improve on this, anyways good luck in your next entry

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add more random characters, and add some subtitles, and add more backround scenes

~~OVERALL~~
Abit on the random side, but it will give you a laugh or two

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[Blue Screen of Death]

I Understand

~~REVIEW~~
I understand what your trying to say but thats more of the old style i believe, better luck next time
Make it longer with more animation, more content and more effort in some sorta idea that will really make users want to say hey that was neat

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
needs more content, more effort of an idea and so on

~~OVERALL~~
needs more content and more ideas

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