XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Testdrive]

amusing with a twist

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm ok well first off you may want to ad some sorta stop action code so it doesnt just start off, the user may want to view the menu page or even may have not been at the computer and waiting for it to load, a stop-action code, would stop it from starting now you probably want to make a nice play button to go along with that though, just a thought though, i did notice you did have a "REPLAY" button though and that was a good touch, but anyways onto your flash here, Lol ok i will admit it was some funny stuff, you made a funny flash in just aboyt two scenes not bad, but would have been nice to see more scenes, as for the joke lol it was funny, the "VOICES" were ok, but also had abit of scratchy sounds, and muffled at times, so maybe next time you could have better quality voices and or even have some "SUBTITLES" just a thought or two for better improvment, anyways good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So there could be a number of things to make this better i would start off with some Subtitles, and even some better voices or less scratchy ones, also some stop action code so it doesnt just start off, adding a "PLAY" button at the start would be a nice improvment aswell.

~~OVERALL~~
a funny short with a sick twist, i thought it was pretty well done though, made me laugh.

~X~

[Red Right Hand]

Could use some improving

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm ok so it took abit to load even with a somewhat small size of film, now nice job on the "MUSIC" and even "SOUND/FX" this seemed very short thoough, i was watching as i was reviewing and it was over in a gunshot hehe, but anyways good music some ok characters you had in the scene, just way too short, if you ask me i think the loading part took longer, and since you do have good characters here and even music, along with some decent backrounds, it could have gone longer with more stuff, more scenes and even more to that story, cause it started off really good. also i think the "GREY" backround with the credits could be a more brighter color, or if its too much to do all the work in making a full on story, try and make other short clips and put them along with this to ad more of a short few clips kinda like a collab of sorts and such, well just a thought or two that could improve on this as it was abit disapointing, but like i said it can be improved to show more of the story and all, Really good choice of music though, and as short as it was i did like it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So a few things mentioned above like, more story, more content, characters scenes and so on, and also change up the grey backround for the credits to something more brighter.

~~OVERALL~~
Too short but good quality and a start to something nifty

~X~

[Resident Evil CC]

It was decent

~~REVIEW~~
A decent flash here had some good humor to it and was entertaining and thats the important part i thought, you should make another though, something more effort wise with much more stuff going on and more humor of course, it would be much more entertaining, just give more thought into what you are presenting with all elemnts like humor, art, action and characters.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the 2nd part, ad new stuff and add more funny content aswell

~~OVERALL~~
Decent and funny with this one

~X~

[<blank> (0m41s)]

Needs more content

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm well i thouoght this was way too "SHORT" the music was really nice and pleasent and it seemed to fit what was going on with the visuals, but again i felt it was just too short and seems like you could have put the effort fourth and really made this into something awsome more then what it is, dont get me wrong its pretty impressive even as short as it may be, by adding more content and more of a story with "BLANK" in mind you started it off great with these odd characters and such, but again just short lived and too short, now as it is black and white thats pretty cool, i think you could have added abit of "COLOR" even if just a touch, so with all that said, things that could make this better are ofcourse more "CONTENT" more of a story, abit longer if you will, and then some color not alot as to take away from the Black and white style but something that has just a touch of color, so all and all i did enjoy this, it was just too short, and needed abit more ump to it, good luck on your next entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
so adding more content and more of a story is a plus, but also Black and white flashes are notbad, but while its black and white, you Should add some color even if just a drop of red or blue here and there, like say a blood drop so that the Black and White reflects more it would be a nice, and would standout abit better, and improving on your Black and White animation, anyways good luck

~~OVERALL~~
A very short flash, could have been much better, but it is decent for what it is.

~X~

Surn responds:

I guess the main thing was that I was itching to choreograph the song. It goes without saying that if you choreograph a short song your production will be short. Even so it's still a good point that I should try to look on (nobody would rather eat a fun size chocolate bar). As for the content and color: content/plot would have been difficult (but not impossible) add yet the color would indeed make it look better but it would have needed more than "just a touch".

So to recap I need to:
- Make it longer
- Use color
- Use plot (though I might be able to get away without it [see:ANIMUTATION])
- Overall try harder

Thanks for your help, I appreciate it.

[Attn: Joker_adt]

Needs more

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so its been awhile since i seen stuff like this and this was always a great refresher of how newgrounds was back then it seemed alot more fun back then, but anyways the five differant flashes were all the same, wish there was something abit differant but still gave me a laugh or two, so nice job on that, add more next time., anyways good luck on your next entry, thats if you still make stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add something differant to each clip the same ol thing is amusing but tends to get abit old also.

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and amusing, needs more to it though.

~X~

[The Farting Menace]

Decent but needs some work

~~REVIEW~~
Lol well ok this was amusing, and anything with starwars i am instantly a fan of but this could be improved on and made much better, like the "LOOPING" adding a stop action code would sufice, as for the action in the film you had lots of it and the graphics were notbad, the jpeg face was entertaining and the jepg explosions were not half bad either, to be honest you did show some good effort on puttong this together and bringing together a story, but the looping should be fixed, aswell as slowing it down abit and adding more to the flash and story itself, I did have a good experiece watching this flash, it just went by too fast, needs slowing down, but all and all its a funny and entertaining flash that i enjoyed, so keep up the good work. hope to see more of your animations in the near future, untill then good luck on your next entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
First off add more to the story, slow the flash down and add more content, Add a stop-Action code, it will stop the looping of the flash, aswell ad some play and replay buttons.

~~OVERALL~~
A good story just needs to be slowed down abit.

~X~

[Kapanet Clock Crew]

Random and amusing

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so this one was cute, the menu screen before the main event heh, always nice to see a little something before the actual show so nice job there with the flying ghost? now while its an ok menu i think you still need some sorta "LOGO" there about the flash that is about to play and such, but anyways onto the film, Wow i must say this is a funny little flash you have here, now first off the "AUDIO" seemed so perfect for this, especially the way you animated the characters, to really reflect off the music so really awsome job, i think i will ad this one to my faves just because of that, but anyways, Haha well i had a really fun time watching and reviewing this, you added lots of color and joy, the music really put this in a new perspective of a joyish toon, and the art was very smooth and refreshing, in the end this kept a smile on my face, and makes me want to watch more of your tunes, so i do plan to watch more especially if they are like this, anyways as to improve on this one? well keep the same style and make more wacky stuff like this, i did think you should have had more funny and random stuff happening infact even adding more "CC CHARACTERS" would have been nice, anyways nice work once again, it was a pleasure to review.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more random stuff happen, and add more clock crew characters within your flashes.

~~OVERALL~~
A funny and random flash which will take you on its own adventure, hope you all like it as much as i did.

~X~

[Rolling Girl]

Entertaining music video

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm now this was a very pleasent flash, it had a more "MUSIC-VIDEO" feel then anything but that was the neat thing about it, i also like the black and white style of it and all, but also you gave it that touch of color that made it abit more then just black and white, now i cant say i liked the ending as it just seemed to "CUT-OFF" but for the most part it is pretty good, as for the "ANIMATION" its notbad, somepoints it seemed choppy but then kicked it right away so that could be me , and as for the "MUSIC" it was a good choice seemed to fit the animation verywell, just didnt like how it cut off at the end, so the flash was great even the "ART" was notbad at all somewhat simple style but overall still enjoyble, i enjoyed the entire flash as a an amusing and entertaining music video, didnt understand it much but it was enjoyed so nice job there. I f i were to suggest improving on stuff it would probably be adding just abit more color, making more of an ending when the music just cuts off, these are just a few things to work on, but overall i enjoyed your flash animaion.music video.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Also explained above, adding just abit more color, and maybe abit more quality on the sound as i did hear some scratchyness, and would like more of an ending as the music seemed to just cut off.

~~OVERALL~~
So overall a good animation here, like a music video, amuing and some nifty music, i hope to see more like this.

~X~