XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[LL - Regarding the CC]

Nice LL/CC Flash

~~REVIEW~~
LOL ok so this was a pretty entertaining flash here on the lock Legion and the clock crew, i dont know i have been watching clocks for 10 years now and locks a little after that, but as for this one this was pretty nifty like the opening loaders and good effects that was presented with it, as for the little story, it was notbad, i did think some subtitles could have been used for the clocks talking, you did present some nice animation, like with the falling "LOCKS" and all, and from start to finish it wasa pleasent flash i even thought the ending was funny with the little sayings and all, So a good flash here about the LL, and abit of the CC, so all and all a good entertaining flash, good luck on any other entries.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The onlything i really saw, was possibly some subtitles but even that was somewhat ok, maybe throw in a few more effects like when the locks are falling have some flares or light effects behind them or something.

~~OVERALL~~
a good LL flash of recruiting hehe

~X~

[This is not a Test 3: SFX]

Good story, decent graphics

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm ok notbad of a flash here, the characters are really good, lots of awsome design great use of color and a number of awsome detail to go along with them, I did notice a few things that could make this even better though, such as, it could use some "SUBTITLES" also a play button at the start wouldnt hurt either as it just starts off right away, the story itself is pretty good and you had some ok "EFFECTS" but thought there could be more enhanced effects aswell, like more sparkles, more gradients like fire stuff, you did pretty awsome with the characters and shades, and overall it was a good story here, so i really had fun with this, you should ad a preloader with a play button at the start, that was the big thing for me, But anyways i enjoyed this flash eventhough it was a tad older good stuff all the way through.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The movie starts right off so you may want to ad a play button, This was ok but it wouldnt hurt to add some subtitles, not because anything was hard to hear or anything but because its just something extra that would make this abit better to understand and its like a nice little feature for your flash here, adding abit more enhanced effects would also be a nice touch.

~~OVERALL~~
Now overall this was a good flash nice story, could be improved with a few touch ups.

~X~

[Vintage Voicemail 2]

Amusing

~~REVIEW~~
First of all, nice loader page, still has the "GREEN" touch you always like to go with and that i liked, and it had something that would have been related to the flash, like the cell-phone. so nice touch there, Now i must admitt that this was pretty short, so wont be easy on my to review but i will do my best, so it did make me laugh, and the "AUDIO" was pretty funny and amusing, the guy in the backround jumping around was funny and somewhat random so nice job there, the backround scene was notbad and showed some good effort all around, but i feel that if you took the flash into other and new scenes, like maybe the guy is walking around, throughout the house, while the bouncing guy behind fallowed him, might give it that extra bit humor, aswell as making it somewhat longer, so its just an idea, but might work, either in this or a later version and or update, But anyways i had a fun time with this, you should make more , but try and make em longer if you can.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Have more scenes in it, like him walking around aswell as the bouncing guy, also not really a major thing but the lip animation didnt exactly match up with the audio but i also understand how that can also be a pain so not a big thing.

~~OVERALL~~
So overall it was short, but still was amusing.

~X~

[ANAL FURY LOLICON HENTAI]

amusing

~~REVIEW~~
LOL ok so i started this and it had a small little animation which is notbad, you have some cute characters and really good use of color so it all seemed to pay off, and then pops up the play button so it can only get better from here which i like, Ok so the first one to click on was a fould language word that was interesting, So after viewing them all these were all somewhat entertaining but too much flashing, i think you should do more on like what the intro was as that was abit more entertaining.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More of a story more animation but with less of the flashing

~~OVERALL~~
Silly short clips with too much flashing.

~X~

[Shaolin Master]

Needs some fixing up.

~~REVIEW~~
Well first off i thought this was way too short, you need to add much more content, more chacahters and much more color aswell as better visuals, and second you should probably ad a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" so those are the main things that need some work as for the animation itself, its notbad of an idea, kinda cute if you ask me and you have a good idea but like i said the visuals could be better, and more detail in the characters and effects aswell, so really this is ok but needs much more effort and detail on the animation, some ideas to improve on would be instead of the "LINES" as characters give them more full body types and have them animated abit smoother it seemed choppy at times, making it longer with other scenes other characters and much more use of color will also help, these are just a few ideas that could improve on this, try them out and see what you come up with.. but like i said it needs lots of ideas and improving, wont hurt to try.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So i mentioned a few things to improve on, I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see, So more is needed, if not making it a short, make it filled with much more then you have, this movie "LOOPS" now thats actually an easy fix, you can use a stop-action-code from the action - script and there are actually lots of easy to understand tutorials here on the site to view on how this is done if you dont know, but anyways the stop-action-code will stop the looping, but dont forget to add some "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons for the viewers to restart viwing the flash, so these are just a few tips on improving on this i hope its helpful for your next creation.

~~OVERALL~~
A very short flash but can be improved, kinda funny idea i liked, of what was there.

~X~

[Kevin Rudd:RAI493+D 004]

Hmm abit long

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm well these are just like the adolf series and not much to them, they need some sprucing up like, maybe some animation and such, it just doesnt have enough, maybe some fire animation for this ones, but still needs some more stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
ad some animation have charmandor do something like jumping around and such

~~OVERALL~~
Not much going on here but it is what it is.

~X~

[Neji Vs Orochimaru(demo)]

Too sgort but was notbad.

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so first off this is notbad at all, i really like it, and while it didnt "SCORE" very well it was a good start and better that its your first works, As for the "PLAY" screen you had the play button there with no real logo so if anything is suggested you should present a logo of your flash, also the "VIEW-SCREEN" seemed abit small, make it larger with some more platforms so they are like jumping and fighting all around, will have more visuals of alot of stuff going on, just an idea to work on. Ad More "EFFECTS" like with the backround scene, you could ad some running water for the waterfall or something, and when they are fighting you could have some more "BLASTS" that jump out making really fancy making the whole flash dazzle, just another idea that will improve on this, try it out, The flas seemed "SHORT" so make it longer with more characters maybe even more scenes not just the same one, just really go all out on this battle and have them go differant scenes, So i enjoyed this little flash of yours but it could use some improving as explained above, anyways good job, hope to see improved versions sometime.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Adding a logo at the play menu screen would be a start, a larger viewscreen, more scenes and most of all more widespread effects.

~~OVERALL~~
A good battle seemed too short though.

~X~

Shikhs responds:

i made a mightier version of this flash about 2 mins long and with a lot of special effects v-cam and all but i lost the pen drive which contained it.if i can find it i will give all the newgrounders a visual treat.Anyways thanks for the review