XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Funny Radio Song]

This was funny

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok i got a good laugh from this one, but you probably want fix it and clean it up for one it {LOOPS} so you could add a stop action code, and that should stop that, also you can add some {SUBTITLES} it would be funny to show whats beeing said and all, cause some of the stuff is funny, and it was abit short, so it was entertaining, but still needs to be fixed up, and the {AUDIO} was abit scratchy that could also be cleared up for abit more quality, so improving on this are the 3 main tips suggested, scratchy audio, some subtitles, and fixing the looping with a stop-action-code, its entertaining but would be much better with some slight changes, anyways nice flash you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the 3 main tips suggested, scratchy audio, some subtitles, and fixing the looping with a stop-action-code,

~~OVERALL~~
Funny idea but needs some work.

~X~

[Reading Rainbow 4]

Notbad

~~REVIEW~~
Well this is notbad allthough it could clearly use some more {FIXEs} some subtitles would be a great bstart, maybe even making the {VIEW-SCREEN} much larger this would also allow for more detail. The flash you have was actually kinda short you may want to think about adding more content, it just sorta ended too quickly if you ask me, it was entertaining and the characters were decent looking so some effort was put into it, Also noticed the {BUTTONS} were very small you should make the button more clickble, and more visualy better looking, Better explained below, The backround graphics artwork was pretty good though, also noticed another thing you could work on and that was the animation of the {MOUTHS} seemed to be animated too slow, speed that up just a tad, so anyways a decent flash here but could have some fixes and upgrades to making it much better and fixing these little details will help it greatly, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Making the view screen much larger would be a start, Now I mention Subtitles only because its not hard to understand or anything but its nice to have for viewers, cause sometimes something might be missed, just a little something extra that will make a better flash and such, Work on the button, make it look more like a button, all you have was the text of a buttion, you should make the text with a box or circle around it, and make that clickble aswell, that will give more area to click on and not so hard to click on by viewers.

~~OVERALL~~
Decent flash here nice artwork, still needs more effort though.

~X~

[Rumble In The Projects]

Decent story of battle

~~REVIEW~~
for an older flash its notbad and its a good little {BATTLE} the story plays out pretty good, and really neat to see the battle play out into differant scenes, i like the detail with the backrounds in the first scene but you should have done the same with the rest of the scenes as they ended up being more bland with just the gradients, also the {TEXT BUBBLES} could use some work like more {BOLDER} bubbles and text maybe even make the text black so it standsout better, now these are just a few ideas that could improve on the flash its actually an ok flash just needs abit more of that effort, so work on the text bubbles, and the backrounds in the later scenes other then that it was an ok story and flash.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the later scenes in the backrounds with the {GRADIENTS} were abit bland, make it more like the city backround you had in the first scene, and the text in the text bubbles could be more bold to standout more

~~OVERALL~~
An interesting story of battle, could use some work.

~X~

[A RETARDED THUMB]

Random

~~REVIEW~~
lol ok first off you may want to add a {STOP-ACTION-CODE} as soon as you press play from the preloader button it just keeps going and its just a short animation, and didnt much sense, the animating of it is kind of good, but other then that it just keeps looping so you may want add the stop action code, you should also add a play and replay buttons for extra measure, so with these types of flashes since they are so short you should think about adding more to them more of a {STORY} and if not that then add other shorts kind of like in a {COLAB} and such and make it a more vriaty based of tunes, but other then that it was ok random and funny, so for improving add a stop action code, and some play buttons and add abit more to it like more of a story, anyways better luck next time.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a stop-Action code, it will stop the looping of the flash, aswell ad some play and replay buttons. some more depth and story would be a plus aswell, it can only make it much better and more enjoyble for all, A short animation you have here, maybe abit too short i would say to improve on the flash as a whole either make this one longer with much more content or, add more shorts in here such as about 3-5 short short animatins that way it doesnt seem like a waste of one flash space and also you get more viewing for alot of your work instead of just one piece, anyways good luck.

~~OVERALL~~
A random yet funny short toon

~X~

[The Scoop 2 -DeeDee guest]

This was cute

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was cute especially with the {SLOTH} have not seen him in such a long time, but i do understand this is a very old film but i must say its pretty good even for today, i was kind of letdown with it being so {SHORT} so if you still made stuff i would suggest making it longer you could even have other guests and all, more effects like you did with the throw up and stuff, that was pretty funny, i do however suggest some {SUBTITLES} and more dialog between the two just to give it that extra touch, for the viewers, as for your art you did a great job especially with the sloth, a good flash made me laugh, good graphics, only downsize as mentioned was it was too short, but its pretty good if you ask me, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer with abit more {GUESTS} add some subtitles even.

~~OVERALL~~
A good little flash, could use abit more though.

~X~

[Un-named GOLD Edition]

Cute

~~REVIEW~~
ok i have to admit this is pretty funny i especially like your characters they are not too advanced but they are simple and funny, now you could probably work on them shape em up abit more, maybe smaller heads would be fine, but as for this animation it was entertaining i believe the {NEXT-BUTTON] just in gets in the way, you may want to remove that and let it flow like a movie, it would be better presented aswell and just better for all and besides the button tends to get abit on the anoying side, Now the animation was great just seemed an issue with always having to click on the button, also noticed there was not really anything in the backrounds thats another little part you could work on, even some solid colors would sufice, anyways i gave a few tips in hopes you can improve on this and anything new you have planned, keep up the decent work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
For starters you may want to reshape the characters they are ok but abit more detail, Now with buttons its ok, but if you let it flow more like a movie without the buttons it will run smoother, to me in my opinion the buttons seem to slow it down and tends to get anoying with all the clicking, so try it out with removing the buttons, if you dont kike that style you can always go back to the other way.

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining and cute but needs some work.

~X~