XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Hell Are My Legs 17]

lol i like

~~REVIEW~~
lol i like this one, its way too short though, you should think of adding more content though, but these are funny, kinda reminds me of the eskimo bob series short and funny, now as for improving you should add more characters make it longer and even speed up the animation abit, but other then that these are pretty funny . keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
like i said before longer some other and new scenes and some new characters wouldnt hurt.

~~OVERALL~~
another and cute animation

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[The Hell Are My Legs 33]

lol funny

~~REVIEW~~
LOL well that was amusing, i remember seeing alot of these back in the day im glad to see that you are still making them, now as short as this one is, its actually ok with me as it was abit more quality then the others but really like the use of color you got going on this one though, i enjoyed it and cant wait for some more, as for improving on some more, abit longer and have the main character do abit more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
well as suggested you could have more going on like more scenes and stuff.

~~OVERALL~~
funny and entertaining

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[William the Br00t 2]

crazy

~~REVIEW~~
haha that was pretty funny and amusing i thought, lots of good color, and i like the backrounds you used, you showed some good {DETAIL} now the flash itself is kinda short but you gave it just the right amount of content it was creepy at the same time but still entertaining, i wouldnt mind it beeing abit longer though, maybe take it into more scenes but for the most part it was pretty entertaining.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
could see it a tad longer maybe other scenes and a few other characters wouldnt hurt

~~OVERALL~~
entertaining abit short but still ok i thought

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[Pumpkin Dissection]

kinda short

~~REVIEW~~
LOL well i wont lie this was very cute and i got a good laugh out of it, it was kinda short, the pumnkin idea was neat but thios could have been slightly better if abit longer and showing that the kid did get to cut it, also your flash {LOOPS} you may want to add a stop action code at the start of your {TIMELINE} so it doesnt loop, and if your gonna have short flashes why not add a number of short ones and put them in here so that its not so short just an idea though, anyways good luck on your next one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well a few things could really be worked on, first off adding a stop action code, adding more to the story, and or adding other short animations to go with.

~~OVERALL~~
Abit on the short side but still cute, i enjoyed it.
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Mukki responds:

(: Thanks! I'm not sure how to put a preloader in so if I ever do learn, i'll make sure add it in this one and other future submissions.

[The End of Earth 1]

Decent could use some work though

~~REVIEW~~
First off nice preloader at the start with the gunshots to reflect a liitle of what the main video will be about good little {DETAILS} like that are always a pleasure so nice touch there, and now onto the flash itself, now i noticed a few things such as the {ANIMATION} was abit slow, you could speed it up abit like when they are coming out of the truck, also the {TEXT} the yellow text could be bigger maybe not so bright, just a few ideas there that could be improved some of the effects were ok but could also use some spicing up to look better maybe adding some color in there wouldnt hurt but overall it was ok with me.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Work on a few things like faster animation, more color in effects, and better fonts all around.

~~OVERALL~~
overall entertaining but still could use abit more stuff and effort added

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[UZI:the boy PART 1]

Abit old but still ok

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm ok this one was differant, i like the little animation at the start before it starts, i thought the menu screen was kinda silly, seems like you had alot of symbols and stuff there in just crampped all over and seemed like too much, but for an older flash its not so bad, you had oranges and greens there but you should think about mixing it up abit, so its not all the same, and i would also lose the outline over the symbols, allthough the symbols are nothing much anyways, Now for the whole button thing i think you should remove the buttons and just let it flow like a flash movie, the buttons slow it down, There was far too much gradients used, and it didnt show the effort you could have done with more creations with shades detail, so try that out aswell, but anyways this was pretty good, good luck on your next one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Instead of all the gradiend circles you should have more shades, and remove the ouline aswell, and use less gradients, Now with buttons its ok, but if you let it flow more like a movie without the buttons it will run smoother, to me in my opinion the buttons seem to slow it down and tends to get anoying with all the clicking, so try it out with removing the buttons, if you dont kike that style you can always go back to the other way. Less gradients next time also.

~~OVERALL~~
A decent story, too much use of gradients though.

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[The French DEMO 1]

Really good stuff

~~REVIEW~~
Wow this was very impressive right from the start, its just too short allthough i do understand its a demo and all but would have been nice too see just a tad more, now the effects were very impressive with some very sharp fps so welldone on your part on those areas looks good and the sounds matched perfectly, now the idea is to get you to make a longer version and give us more character info and such, but for the mostpart i really enjoyed it , hope to see more from you soon, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
well could be longer and with more content but you already know that. and more character info,

~~OVERALL~~
overall good stuff needs abit more

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[Kitten with guns animated]

that was cute

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so that was pretty entertaining kinda cute, but it was way too short i thought, the Audio was cute and seemed to fit right in, but it was too short but again also cute and very entertaining, the artwork and animation was pretty good, you probably could use more animations though make it longer and more audio with much more differant scenes would be nice, now these are just a few ideas that could improve on this, something to try out, but for the mostpart it was ok with me and entertaining.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As explained could be longer more scenes, more audio and more stuff all around.

~~OVERALL~~
entertaining short here
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JBTheAnimator responds:

The animation is done over a video from witch I saw on Youtube.
And youtube vids tend to be very short.
But I liked this one so I thought I should make an animation out of it.
I made it very fast and didn't want to spend a lot of time on it.
I could have added some of my own comedy in it but,
too lazy I guess.
But anyway thanx for the advice. :3

[Another Day Two]

Very cute

~~REVIEW~~
wow this is so {CUTE} and the {SONG} is so awsome, the flash toon you have here is so cute, and the {FBF} is very good making it smooth but still in the fbf style, i am sad that it is so short though, you should really try and make it longer, i saw the first one and that one was cute this one is even better and he/she has a friend even, so very welldone there, i really like how you make it smooth on by from one scene to the next just like a {DAY} would really pass, This one was abit longer then the first so thats a plus, but the characters you have here are just so cute and with the great song it makes it a way more complete flash and i really took to this flash, and like what you made of it, i do plan on watching the others, as for improving on this, maybe a tad longer, and start to introduce other characters maybe even the mishaps of a days day, just an idea though, as for this i really enjoyed the flash and cant wait for more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try and ad abit more to it, like suggested some of the mishaps of the day, maybe something bad happens but he recovers from it.

~~OVERALL~~
another refreshing day with a cute song and cute characters.

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[Burnt Face Man]

Very amusing

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok as soon as i hit play this was {FUNNY} and the {VOICES} are very well done with the animation, i thought maybe you could ad some subtitles not that it needs it or anything but it would be a nice feature to have on this delightful series, I am suprised i have not seen it before, it was not very long but still suprisinly good, and gave me a chuckle so very nice effort on the humor, allthough i thought it could be somewhat funnier, maybe a few more {JOKES} in there and alot more laughing to go with, its ok just seemed like it could have done with abit more laughter i thought, the {CHARACTER} is well drawn in that cute like way, and with the voices it was just right, but again wish it was longer with more scenes and other places he goes and all, but with all that said i did have delightful time with this so very nice job, if anything is to be suggested on improving this i might go with {SUBTITLES} being the top issue but nothing too major.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
so as said, make it funnier maybe a few more funnier jokes, more longer and more differant scenes, This was not hard to understand, but it would be a nice option to have some subtitles, gives the flash just that bit more effort, and incase anything was missed you have the text right there. but other then that it was a good lil flash you have here.

~~OVERALL~~
Burnt face man you cant get enough of him

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