XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Show Metal]

Decent effort

~~REVIEW~~
Now this one is notbad i thought, the guitar playing is actually alright, but seems thats all he does, i think you could really go with something like this, such as giving him much more {BODY-MOVMENT} like a real rocker might make him go really wild, also you could work on the {ART} a bit more give the pants more {DETAIL} more stuff that you would really see today, and another thing was he was just on the stage you should have him move around the stage, as another idea you could have some tv screens of the concert or even show more of the {FANS} these are just some ideas that could help improve on a great little flash here, so keep up the good work, not sure you are making flash anymore but abit more effort would be nice. so once again nice job keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more detail on the clothing and making more body movment, like he is really rocking away would be a start to improve on a nice piece here

~~OVERALL~~
A good start of a concert but needs more work

~X~

[Scooby Doo ..Tension Tent]

Could be longer

~~REVIEW~~
lol now that was funny i like the voice dubs, it was a neat little extra there that made it more real and such, humor you added, must have took you a bit to put all this together with the voices and all, as for the content, some "SUBTITLES" wouldnt hurt just to give it that real movie feel and such, but really for the mostpart i enjoyed it especially the tent scene, and atleast we know why they always were buddies haha, good lil flash you have here funny and very entertaining but thats what i have come to expect from your work, so dont stop now and enlighten us with even more stuff as good as this if not better, anyways nice job, Now as for improving subtitles would be one start i supose, maybe make more of these little shorts in some sorta series or something, anyways keep up the awsome humor and animation work. Well untill next time.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more like in a series with the same voiceovers, maybe even adding some subtitles would be a nice touch

~~OVERALL~~
Scooby and shaggy, now we know the truth

~X~

[Funny Radio Song]

This was funny

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok i got a good laugh from this one, but you probably want fix it and clean it up for one it {LOOPS} so you could add a stop action code, and that should stop that, also you can add some {SUBTITLES} it would be funny to show whats beeing said and all, cause some of the stuff is funny, and it was abit short, so it was entertaining, but still needs to be fixed up, and the {AUDIO} was abit scratchy that could also be cleared up for abit more quality, so improving on this are the 3 main tips suggested, scratchy audio, some subtitles, and fixing the looping with a stop-action-code, its entertaining but would be much better with some slight changes, anyways nice flash you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the 3 main tips suggested, scratchy audio, some subtitles, and fixing the looping with a stop-action-code,

~~OVERALL~~
Funny idea but needs some work.

~X~

[Reading Rainbow 4]

Notbad

~~REVIEW~~
Well this is notbad allthough it could clearly use some more {FIXEs} some subtitles would be a great bstart, maybe even making the {VIEW-SCREEN} much larger this would also allow for more detail. The flash you have was actually kinda short you may want to think about adding more content, it just sorta ended too quickly if you ask me, it was entertaining and the characters were decent looking so some effort was put into it, Also noticed the {BUTTONS} were very small you should make the button more clickble, and more visualy better looking, Better explained below, The backround graphics artwork was pretty good though, also noticed another thing you could work on and that was the animation of the {MOUTHS} seemed to be animated too slow, speed that up just a tad, so anyways a decent flash here but could have some fixes and upgrades to making it much better and fixing these little details will help it greatly, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Making the view screen much larger would be a start, Now I mention Subtitles only because its not hard to understand or anything but its nice to have for viewers, cause sometimes something might be missed, just a little something extra that will make a better flash and such, Work on the button, make it look more like a button, all you have was the text of a buttion, you should make the text with a box or circle around it, and make that clickble aswell, that will give more area to click on and not so hard to click on by viewers.

~~OVERALL~~
Decent flash here nice artwork, still needs more effort though.

~X~

[Rumble In The Projects]

Decent story of battle

~~REVIEW~~
for an older flash its notbad and its a good little {BATTLE} the story plays out pretty good, and really neat to see the battle play out into differant scenes, i like the detail with the backrounds in the first scene but you should have done the same with the rest of the scenes as they ended up being more bland with just the gradients, also the {TEXT BUBBLES} could use some work like more {BOLDER} bubbles and text maybe even make the text black so it standsout better, now these are just a few ideas that could improve on the flash its actually an ok flash just needs abit more of that effort, so work on the text bubbles, and the backrounds in the later scenes other then that it was an ok story and flash.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the later scenes in the backrounds with the {GRADIENTS} were abit bland, make it more like the city backround you had in the first scene, and the text in the text bubbles could be more bold to standout more

~~OVERALL~~
An interesting story of battle, could use some work.

~X~

[A RETARDED THUMB]

Random

~~REVIEW~~
lol ok first off you may want to add a {STOP-ACTION-CODE} as soon as you press play from the preloader button it just keeps going and its just a short animation, and didnt much sense, the animating of it is kind of good, but other then that it just keeps looping so you may want add the stop action code, you should also add a play and replay buttons for extra measure, so with these types of flashes since they are so short you should think about adding more to them more of a {STORY} and if not that then add other shorts kind of like in a {COLAB} and such and make it a more vriaty based of tunes, but other then that it was ok random and funny, so for improving add a stop action code, and some play buttons and add abit more to it like more of a story, anyways better luck next time.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a stop-Action code, it will stop the looping of the flash, aswell ad some play and replay buttons. some more depth and story would be a plus aswell, it can only make it much better and more enjoyble for all, A short animation you have here, maybe abit too short i would say to improve on the flash as a whole either make this one longer with much more content or, add more shorts in here such as about 3-5 short short animatins that way it doesnt seem like a waste of one flash space and also you get more viewing for alot of your work instead of just one piece, anyways good luck.

~~OVERALL~~
A random yet funny short toon

~X~