Amusing characters
~~REVIEW~~
haha ok i had fun with this one, why is the {SCREEN} so small though?? anyways this was pretty funny you hhad some nice characters with some good detail there bodies were {STIFF} so for some more improving there you could make some more animated bodies limbs and arms, Now you did have some good {HUMOR} funny and the story was ok even as short as it was, I would also suggest on improving by adding some {SUBTITLES} the characters talked so fast it was hard to understand at times, atleast with subtitles you can catch some of that, again just an idea that may help on making the flash more enjoyble for all, Now i suggested a few ideas on improving a funny little flash here, but i do think you have something here and you should make more as in a series cause you have the humor down and you have some funny characters, you just need to touch up on them, anyways funny flash.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more animated bodies limbs and arms, have them move there arms and legs and even head from time to time, make the characters not so {STIFF} Make the screen size much larger,
~~OVERALL~~
Funny short and amusing, nice humor with these characters.
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