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[Lost on halloween]

Awsome festive flash

~~REVIEW~~
Wow first off i love the {PRELOADER} and the menu page the {MUSIC} was awsome, fit very well, and not only did you give the menu page music and a nice logo, but you gave it some nice graphical work so very nice job there, The graphics in the flash itself was not perfect but it has its moment its simple with a sorta cutness to them, the backrounds were nice and you gave it some, the animation is cute kinda just ended shortly, Now overall i really enjoyed this little festive flash animation you are a good animator and bringing the art and animation together cameout well so props to you on a fantastic piece, i look forward to more flash from you soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well i wouldnt mind it abit longer, maybe even start a halloween series but thats just me

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and scary kinda

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CyanSandwich responds:

Thanks for the review :)

[The Hell Are My Legs 34]

Amusing

~~REVIEW~~
Well it seems you have 34 of these, thats alot in a series, i think my issue with this one and alot of the other ones is that they are way too {SHORT} and they are like random as hell nothing wrong with the randomness and such, but still after 34 episodes, you would think some more effort would be in these later episodes and such, now as for this little episode, it was cute and random but still the ending needs more understanding it was confusing as hell, dont get me wrong i like these just needs more effort in the story and introducing new elements to it and all, So as improving try and bringout the story more, making it longer and more stuff going on, more characters would be nice aswell, i like the series just want to see more effort in these.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more content to the flash put more effort into the story add new characters and so on, these will all make it much better.

~~OVERALL~~
Episode 34 short but kinda funny.

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[Oscars]

Amusing characters

~~REVIEW~~
haha ok i had fun with this one, why is the {SCREEN} so small though?? anyways this was pretty funny you hhad some nice characters with some good detail there bodies were {STIFF} so for some more improving there you could make some more animated bodies limbs and arms, Now you did have some good {HUMOR} funny and the story was ok even as short as it was, I would also suggest on improving by adding some {SUBTITLES} the characters talked so fast it was hard to understand at times, atleast with subtitles you can catch some of that, again just an idea that may help on making the flash more enjoyble for all, Now i suggested a few ideas on improving a funny little flash here, but i do think you have something here and you should make more as in a series cause you have the humor down and you have some funny characters, you just need to touch up on them, anyways funny flash.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more animated bodies limbs and arms, have them move there arms and legs and even head from time to time, make the characters not so {STIFF} Make the screen size much larger,

~~OVERALL~~
Funny short and amusing, nice humor with these characters.

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MigitMadness responds:

Thank you for the detailed review. The video size has been fixed since you watched it. These videos are old, but were just put on Newgrounds and we had a little trouble getting them uploaded. We use a higher quality microphone now, so the videos we have made recently and will be making should be more understandable. The animation is a slow progression for us, but they will be getting better. These videos are actually a series already, all these characters are in most of our other videos.

[Blueys adventure]

Cute

~~REVIEW~~
This was actually pretty cute, the animation was smooth running not too short and not too long kinda just right if you ask me, but it was cute and entertaining, and allthough the character was very {SIMPLE} just a ball you actually made it work, even with some funny face expressions, the {MUSIC} was simple as well but felt it was fitting for the feel you gave it, not the best flash in the world but for sure a decent piece of work, now how can we improve on this? in my oppinion i think you could make a small series of shorts like this, with other ball episodes of deaths and mishaps, maybe other ball heads are introduced and such, try it out and see what happens, anyways i enjoyed the flash it was decent work and a good effort. And i look forward to reviewing more of your work soon, untill then good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more small episodes like this, with new adventures and new ball heads but keep it simple as this one

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and short

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CyanSandwich responds:

Thanks for the review. I was actually thinking of remaking this, with a slightly better storyline and far more polished look.

[Barney Commercial #4 - Sing-Along Life Lessons]

Funny and cute

~~REVIEW~~
LOL now this was cute, this animation reminds me of stuff that came thru newgrounds back in the day, i love the title, and the content was funny so good humor there, , i think you should have more differant {SCENES} in there but still gave me a good laugh, and something i say to alot of others maybe you could introduce other characters into the mix, you do have something here, so i would suggest go with it and make more ad new characters, with new scenes, and also now that i think of it, some subtitles wouldnt hurt, you probably dont need them in this one but seems like it would be that extra feature to push it forward, anyways nice job here. so improving with those few ideas would be a start i suppose but keep on going with the good idea you have, anyways once again nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So i suggested a few differant ideas of making it somewhat more improved like more differant {SCENES} and maybe even some new {CHARACTERS} This was not hard to understand, but it would be a nice option to have some subtitles, gives the flash just that bit more effort, and incase anything was missed you have the text right there.

~~OVERALL~~
Fun with barney

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[Afro_Stud's Birthday!]

Amusing

~~REVIEW~~
haha ok this is amusing, and the animation was funny very amusing infact, I know this is somewhat old, and stuff but i must say it still gives me a good laugh today so nice job there, now i could see this still being improved on such as it was very short, and just in the one scene or two. There should be abit more interaction with other characters so the story goes on abit longer just an idea, maybe even ad some darker color tones besides just the bright ones, now thats just an idea that could improve on, anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could use more content maybe other characters but for sure more scened are needed,

~~OVERALL~~
Short short but still amusing and funny

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harryjarry responds:

I'm still proud of this animation! My first flash on NG. I'm glad you were able to enjoy it! I would've loved to make it longer, but I was trying to get it done on Afro's birthday, so I didn't have much time. I've never been very great with color-I should look into working on that!

If I start getting back into flash (which I'd love to), I might do another flash like this for fun. I will see what I can do!

Thanks for the review! <3

[A Signal]

Decent

~~REVIEW~~
well first off, the intro was pretty intense, love the visuals and sound/fx so prop to you there, now as i saw the other one it was good i like this one, the song at the start of the flash was very good one, but then you tottally change it, that kinda confuesed me, i thought that you should let it play like a {MOVIE} especially with the song at the begenning, but when you change it up it really throws you off and kinda doesnt make sense at times, might seem better if it was played as a movie, and maybe not so much cut scene were it changes so fast, i really love the art and animation was very neat and differant, nice 3d effects with them art scenes, So it was a good flash but was confusing with the changing of scenes and music changes, but anyways good flash, hope to see more work soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Let it flow like a music video, and less cut scenes, let it flow into each one there aswell

~~OVERALL~~
Good series so far.

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CaKeS1 responds:

Thank you, glad you came by to watch the second. I'm not sure but I was thinking of remaking this installment, because like you said it kinda confuses people and changes way to much. I would've loved to keep this a mystery series rather then a random killing sequence of animations that don't fit together. Thanks for the tips and support, I might remake this one, or if I feel comfortable after thinking about it a lot, I might just make a third.