XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Frame By Frame Flash]

Decent FBF

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so this was notbad, it took awhile to {LOAD} thought that was odd since it was not even that big, but anyways, onto your flash, Ok starts off with some good {MUSIC} except the onlything about that is that it was abit {SCRATCHY} and could have been abit lower in sound so it doesnt scratch like that, just an idea though, the second song was abit better but not by much, now as for the {ANIMATION} it was pretty good, somewhat smooth but not as much as i would have liked, the black and white style is ok, but also thought you could have mixed the {B?W} with some other color, maybe if it was even just some spots here and there, maybe even add some sorta {BACKROUNDS} all these ideas would really present a better outcome, for the {SIZE} it was not short but not too long either just right in my opinion, now i could see this getting better, anyways i have been delighted in this entertaining flash, good luck on anything new you have planned.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So there are a few things that could really make this much more better presented, Since you had Stick characters, I suggest making more Character like characters with full color facial details, This will show lots of effort in your character design, it tends to take more effort but the results will pay off alot, Black and white flashes are notbad, but while its black and white, you Should add some color even if just a drop of red or blue here and there, like say a blood drop so that the Black and White reflects more it would be a nice, and would standout abit better, and improving on your Black and White animation, Anyways hope this helped in improving your flash and future stuff

~~OVERALL~~
A decent black and white fbf it was amusing

~X~

[The Hell Are My Legs 2]

Funny and entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
Haha very entertaining with this one, now i did finally get around to reviewing this and soon the others aswell, but i must say this was way too {SHORT} it being only the {2nd} episode and all, whatever happend to the 1st one???, also i noticed this flash {LOOPS} thats one thing you could probably fix, , ill explain down below, but again on the shortness of this, there are alot of episodes in this series and this was funny dont get me wrong, i even like the {VOICE} kinda like the clock voice thingy, but anyways, you did put some effort into this with, some interesting characters use of color, not much animation, and some so-so voices, but these could get better with some other ideas and new scenes, like you should make it {LONGER} and bring in more and new characters aswell as some new scenes and such, i find this series very funny, i hope you make more longer ones with abit more depth though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well first off ad more to these, make more of a story out of em, give the viewer something more to grasp onto that way you will have much more fants to something pretty delightfull here, and 2nd You could place a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" it will help for the looping that the flash does, it will make it so that the user presses play and at the end replay, you will also need the propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons aswell, feel free to stop by the "FLASH" Forums on the newground BBS as they will help you on how to add this script into your flash, A short animation you have here, maybe abit too short i would say to improve on the flash as a whole either make this one longer with much more content or, add more shorts in here such as about 3-5 short short animatins that way it doesnt seem like a waste of one flash space and also you get more viewing for alot of your work instead of just one piece, but anyways these are just a {FEW} things that could help to improve on this episode and this {SERIES} but anyways good luck.

~~OVERALL~~
A very funny and amusing short, abit too short if you ask me, but regardless it was entertaining

~X~

[hellz kitchen]

Awsome effort in this one

~~REVIEW~~
This was fun, i also really like what you did with the {PRE-LOADING} the little astroids game at the start was pretty impressive while it was simple it was still very neat and i liked that there was a small game there while the movie/game loaded eventhough the flash was not that large to start off with, so nice job there, I do however there should be more of a {BUTTON} to press rather then just the {TEXT BUTTON} but anyways onto your flash here, I love the {NARATION} in this one, The {ART} was pretty awsome very sharp looking, and the {ANIMATION} was even better, the voices really cameout well also very clear and sharp sounding, you also gave this some great humor with all the differant characters, so good sound clips you have here, it could have used some {SUBTITLES} though, it was great in voices but its just one of those nice little features any movie could use, so props to you for an awsome effort on this with awsome skills and just overall a very entertaining flash, nice job indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well i did mention some subtitles would be nice, other then that it was a very impressive flash.

~~OVERALL~~
Abit long but well worth it, awsome effort into this one.

~X~

[a flash about dancing]

Entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
First of all you may want to ad a {REPLAY} button towards the end of this, i watched it through then decided i wanted to see it again and there was basicly no replay button so thats something you could work on, Now this was more like a {MUSIC-VIDEO} which was neat, and there was lots of use of {COLOR} and even a jpeg photo or two which was nice, but this just ended very fast, something that could be improved with some possiblity of more animation, more story and much more content, kinda like your other earlier flashes its just too short and lacks some story, but i did like the use of all the {COLOR} and the fact that it was like a music video and such, But anyways i suggest you rework this one, like the replay button i mentioned earlier, and ,more random stuff if thats the rout your going with, alos making it longer and more with something of a story to it somehow, i did get a laugh from this, but it does need more effort on your part of things to make it even better.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make a replay button at the end screen, make it longer, more depth and some sorta story would be nice also.

~~OVERALL~~
Another random yet entertaining flash

~X~

[Magnum Pie Ii: Caddyshack]

Needs more effort

~~REVIEW~~
Lol ok i must say this one gave me a {LAUGH} or two, it was silly because you did ad jpegs and some art style to it, but not much infact it sorta {LOOPED} and you should probably fix that, which is an easy fix, with a {STOP-ACTION-CODE} but thats just one idea on how to improve on this, if you ask me i think you should get away from the jepegs and make more art style stuff cause i could see you making {TOM} in a cartoony style which would have been abit more entertaining i thought, now with all that said you could also ad much more to it, more content and more of a story it was a few jpegs and just sorta ended, but making it longer will make it more entertaining then just the random humor, just something to think of, but if you di insist on the jpegs make it longer and with a more wide {VARIATY} of jpegs and such, also something to think about, so this was entertaining and did give me a laugh or two, but in the end it still does need more effort on stuff, longer and more humor is needed, anyways good luck on your next one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
First of all it was amusing but needs more jpegs or even better more toony style toms, and needs more content and more effort on giving it more of a story and such.

~~OVERALL~~
a short and random tom selec parody, i found it amusing

~X~

[Oradovencha]

Entertaining, needs abit more though

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so this was a cute like {COMIC} style of a toon, i like the comic style and even that of its black and white style, a few things i did notice however, are, first that the music is ok but you can hear some {STATIC} in the backround, now you may want to fix that and have a sharper more clear sounding music to it, and second i wouldnt mind seeing abit of {COLOR} in the black and white, not alot just maybe some eyes here and there or maybe another idea would be that the outer {FRAME} is in color while still keeping the {COMIC} in black and white, and now the last thing but not the least, but you have the flash {LOOPING} i would suggest adding a stop action code, so it doesnt loop also some play and replay buttons at the start and end would also be nice, these are just a few ideas that could improve onto this cute little comic style flash, but anyways i had fun watching this and even got a good laugh or two from it so keep up the good flash animations.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I had mentioned a few things that i thought could improve on this so first off i though abit of color could be added, my only other issue with this one would be that it would "LOOP" over and over and you could fix that easily with an action script code >> Stop-Action-Code. checkout tutorials on the newground forums if you are unsure how to do a Stop-Action-Code. oh and one more thing i found was that you can hear some {STATIC} in the music so the quality was abit low, well hope you get something from the review.

~~OVERALL~~
entertaining comic style, needs abit of cleaning up though.

~X~

[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 195]

Decent but could use more effort

~~REVIEW~~
So here we go with #195, and again with the cute nintendo music, i like some changes with making {HITLER} a differant color so it does show abit more effort there on your part, but still lacks in animating, the {SONG} here is pleasent also, the jpeg backround is notbad but wouldnt mind seeing more art style stuff, and as suggested before have the pokeball {GLOW} or even spin or something, but again the flash was cute but needs more to it, but for what it is i did find it amusing.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Have the pokeball spin, have a more animated backround or even artstyle backround, suggested some other ideas above.

~~OVERALL~~
Needs more to it, but is still amusing

~X~

[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 176]

Love the song

~~REVIEW~~
Hehe i really liked the {NINTENDO} sound/fx in this one and also that other song right after, i must tell you i have had fun reviewing these as its like a trip down memory lane with all the old stuff from you hehe, but as you know i wish there was some more {ANIMATION} in all these, more scenes and such, dont mean to sound like a broken record but it would be much better for all of us, but anyhow, good flash again the song was very pleasent and nice.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As explained more animation and more scenes, but more action from hitler aswell

~~OVERALL~~
a good and pleasent song on this one, but again needs more animating

~X~