XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[NeoPikachu AFD Collection]

Good lil pika

~~REVIEW~~
Now this was notbad at all i actually like it, I like the fact that pikachu is fighting and all and fighting the clock crew was a good idea but im thinking you could go one step better and have pikachu fight other characters not just the clock crew but robots and all sorts of stuff that would give it much more variaty, Theres not really much to say on this one but the fact it is a good idea, but also i think as stated that more variaty of villians and stuff just an idea or two there, anyways nice idea keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I posted an idea or two about pika fighting more variaty of vilians and enemies, just a suggestion though.

~~OVERALL~~
a good idea here with the fighting but needs more variaty

~X~

RazorHawk responds:

Yeah, that's probably all true. Variety would definitely help next time.

I've been in a bit of a rut when it comes to making new flashes... not sure whether to start a new series or what, but I'll figure something out eventually.

Thanks again for checking this out.

[Duracell Reality]

An ad

~~REVIEW~~
Well this was an add and thats not really allowed it did have some redeeming qualities though, so notbad but something differant next time. but from what i thought it was pretty neat and had something to go with, so maybe abit more effort next time

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more content more animation and less advertisment style

~~OVERALL~~
its like an ad

~X~

[Delta Ebonics]

Entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
Entertaining, but very random, maybe thats what you were going for, needs abit more, add something to the backrounds as they were blank pretty much, some even basic colors would sufice but does need something there, and maybe add some better pictures maybe something that fills the whole screen. anyways hope to see some improvments sometime soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As i said above, better images, and some backround work

~~OVERALL~~
abit bland needs some work done on this.

~X~

[Free Cookies]

amusing but too short

~~REVIEW~~
a fast flash you have here, and you added some {NIFTY} sound/fx, but i have to say that this was just too short i thought, you should make it longer, it was really funny and all, just still very {SHORT} something that could be longer just have to stretch it out abit, the content was funny and sick in away, but like i said it was amusing and i did get a short laugh out of it, now you could ad more scenes, or better yet make other shorts along with this, kinda like a series of short clips about differant restuarants and stuff it might have better results that way i thought, But again its just too short and needs more to it either in a series of shorts or by adding more to this one making it longer and eventually stretching out the joke you do got going, but anyways something to try out, also another thing might be the light {BLUE} backround on the credits maybe make it abit darker will make the text better to read, anyways it was a funny little short but in the end it needs more to it. anyways good luck on your next entry, thats if you still make stuff, since this one was abit on the older side.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
a couple of things, mainly that it was too short and could be better as a longer flash or a number of short clips in the flash, aslo the light blue backround in the menu and credits could be another color something more dominant and darker

~~OVERALL~~
A very short flash but its very amuising.

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[FuRbY LosEs iT]

This was interesting

~~REVIEW~~
You have a good little story here, the "ART" and "GRAPHICS" could use some work though, also some backrounds are needed as you mostly had it blank. which made it very bland so something to work on and i hope will improve on this, anyways good luck on this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some backrounds, and more detail on the main artwork, like characters

~~OVERALL~~
Interesting and decent flash could use some improvment

~X~

[The Wrath of Moses]

This was funny

~~REVIEW~~
First off i like your "CHARCTERS" very original and funny looking, this flash was good and had some good humor just like i like, you really do have an idea here you just need to improve on it the characters are your best point on this whole flash now work on other stuff such as story-plots, introduce more characters and really let this flash take off into something awsome, hope to see more like this sometime soon here on newgrounds

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well as exolained more story and plot work, but you do have something with the characters

~~OVERALL~~
funny and neat characters needs more to the story though

~X~

[Hypno-Disk]

This was neat

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad of some visuals, i thought some of them were more basic then anything else but they seem cool, i would love to see some changes like more depth in each visual or something, but something that brings out the flash more, with better presentation, just a few ideas to improve on it, anyways good luck and hope to see some better and more improved stuff in the near future.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more "DEPTH" like more shades more effects expecially in the backrounds

~~OVERALL~~
decent could use abit more effort though.

~X~

[Shadow Hates Colours]

Impressive music and animation

~~REVIEW~~
This Was a really good song, and, i know i have heard it before, nice to see that you implemented it in here though, As for a sonic based flash the music really did match the animation, and props to you for having good qaulity of animation with art animation speed and graphics detail it all came together very well and showed off in your presentation so really good job there, I also like the fact that you did more then just use sprites it was very impressive with the animating, I like how you have deep info on the {CHARACTERS} and all makes for a good and
better story and animation heres, now how can we improve not much as it was fantastic and you used all sorts of elements to push this forward, but to improve maybe more special effects like lights and rays and stuff that happens in the backround and such. anyways good flash here, make more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As to improve i did mention abous some backround effects to spice it up abit, but other then that it was pretty good.

~~OVERALL~~
overall a good and entertaining flash good music to go with some smooth animating.

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