XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 225]

Entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
Ok day 225 and hitler still trying to catch them all, will he ever catch them all? but anyways you should really think about working on the menu page and i know i have mentioned it before, could use more attention, maybe as an idea you should place the face or full pokemon of which pokemon the flash is related too, And im thinking you should also add more then just one pokemon add a variaty of them might make for more stuff going on aswell, lol you did well dressing up hitler with this one though, but again could use more effort with more stuff going on, i do like that you added a new song in here though lol

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Menu page effort with the pokemon on the menu page could be a nice change and touch, also having more then just one pokemon in each episode would be a nice idea aswell,

~~OVERALL~~
Another entertaining episode and pokemon.

~X~

[Pico's Penny Prank]

Funny and entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
Well this was cute has a very cartoony feel, and i must say the {MUSIC} was very catchy and seemed to {FLOW} very well with the funny toon, the {SIZE} of the flash was notbad at all, not too big or too short, allthough the toon was still very short, now dont get me wrong it was amusing and made me laugh abit so i was ok with that, but would have been nice to see it go on abit longer, The artwork was very oldstyle the backrounds anyways and i think that made for a fresh flash with the characters being very fresh and new like, as for the animation it was quaick smooth and fast but still very enjoyble, but i did like and enjoy it in its fullest so nice job on this, and pico day was fun with a few good pico flashes such as this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer maybe add a few other new characters,

~~OVERALL~~
Funny pico day 2011 entry.

~X~

ToonCastleTV responds:

it's true I would love for this flash to have been longer to, but due to time constraints this is the best I could do ! thanks for the great review :D

[Pico in Wonderland]

Entertaining for pico day

~~REVIEW~~
This was very pleasent and very colorfull it had a very {DREAMY} feel to it, the only bad part was that it ended so quickly, i like the music but maybe something more smoother would have flowed better with this?? This was more like a {MUSIC-VIDEO} but for some reason the music didnt fit, the animation flowed very well though and i rather enjoyed it, it was very pleasent and entertaining just abit on the {SHORT-SIDE} so as i said before and for a helpfull tip on improving would give it a more smoother music tune something that flows better other then that it was very good, anyways keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A differant choice of music would have been nice, something to flow more better,

~~OVERALL~~
Decent flash for pico day very pleasent

~X~

coughing-dog responds:

thanks, unfortunately I didnt get much time to spend on the music so I chose a track Tyson made and tried to 'fit' the animation as best I could to the track. I thought it worked pretty well but yeah it was a rushed effort, exactly the same reason why it wasnt very long.

[Brian's Payback]

Entertaining and amusing

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so i did get a good laugh out of this all, and it was pretty entertaining and funny, the whole {BUTTON} was ok but that seemed to dragon the flash, now there are a number of things you could do to clean this up and make it run smoother but before that i do want to say that it was pretty entertaining, wish it had some sound like voices, but overall it was entertaining, so as to improve, first off i would remove the buttons explained below, also some better subtitles are needed, the text was too small, You should really think about addings some voices it would better improve the film as a whole, but anyways more explained below, other then that was just said i thought it was pretty funny and entertaining.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Remove the buttons let it flow more like a movie, it doesnt slow it down and if you are worried about the text, why not add some {VOICES} also the text it self was hard to read as it was kind of small, other then that it was alright.

~~OVERALL~~
A funny moment for family guy lol

~X~

[Neolithic: G. M. A.]

Decent matrix theme flash

~~REVIEW~~
Hmmm ok well first off this was not too bad even for being an older flash and all from years ago but as for the start you had a loader page that was more on the simple side of things. the {FONT} could have been better maybe have more depth to it and such. the rest was actually ok, i would even think about removing the {AUDIO} in the opening loader page aswell, Now the characters and all the {TWEENING} was ok but i think to better improve off that you should do less tweening and more detail on the character would be much better,Also remove the buttons on the Bubble screens so that it flows more like a movie, instead of always having to click away, tends to get anoying that way. ok so with all that said i did like the {MATRIX} theme was a good flash but also could be cleaned up as stated before, so overall funny and entertaining with this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Start with the {FONT} could have been better maybe have more depth to it, i would even think about removing the {AUDIO} in the opening loader page aswell, i think to better improve off that you should do less tweening and more detail on the character would be much better,Also remove the buttons on the Bubble screens so that it flows more like a movie, instead of always having to click away, tends to get anoying, so try and clean up those areas and you will have something even better to work with.

~~OVERALL~~
A funny and entertaining matrix theme.

~X~