XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Columbine Kid]

Randomly short

~~REVIEW~~
Ok first off the idea was ok, and second you may want to work on the {BUTTON} especialy the play button at the start it could use a more sleeker and flashier look, The animation seemed kind of {SLOPPY} there was lots to see and stuff, and it all went by very fast, maybe too fast, so another tip for making it better would be to {SLOW} down the animation slow down the scenes and ofcourse add more story to it all the animation did snt seem to have much {DIRECTION} seemed more {RANDOM} then anything else, wich is ok at times but this one was just all over the place, you need more orginization with the animation story and so on, and ofcourse more effort, so other then that it was an ok little flash you have here, but can be much better

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The button it could use a more sleeker and flashier look, so another tip for making it better would be to {SLOW} down the animation slow down the scenes and ofcourse add more story to it all, you need more orginization with the animation story and so on, and ofcourse more effort

~~OVERALL~~
Short and sloppy but could be better

[UFO Abduction]

Very cute but also very short

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so this was a really small {FILE} ok so as the film starts playing it gets good with a sheep and some aliens im guessing the aliens changed the sheep and now the sheep is confused and doesnt know what to do, now this is cite but still very {SHORT} and another issue is that it loops and thats due to the fact that you need to add a {STOP-ACTION} code, also it being so short you should do one of two things, and that would either make the flash much longer or add other short flicks along with it so that there is a variaty of short films and not just the one thats so short. so this started out ok good animating good color and an overall start to a good story but just ended too shortly, so with all that said you should put abit more effort next time.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as stated above add more short toons or make this one longer with more to see and such, this movie "LOOPS" now thats actually an easy fix, you can use a stop-action-code from the action - script and there are actually lots of easy to understand tutorials here on the site to view on how this is done if you dont know, but anyways the stop-action-code will stop the looping, but dont forget to add some "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons for the viewers to restart viwing the flash, other then that its a pretty good start.

~~OVERALL~~
A short animation funny but just plain too short.

[Death of Diglett]

fix the looping and make longer

~~REVIEW~~
ok so this was actually not a bad little tune here, a very short but still very entertaining, still being so short makes me think you could have put a little more effort into to make more of a {STORY} out of it, add new characters new scenes and so fourth, you do have a decent flash it just needs more to it, you had some good {ANIMATION} and lots of color and just overall it was pretty funny i thought, just needs that little push for more {QUALITY} and so on, so as for improvmens suggested below and here are, fix looping, make it longer, add new characters and new scenes, and so on, just a few tips that should make it much better, Like i said its a cute little animation just needs more effort on your end.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the story longer and make it with new scenes and new characters, also you should fix the looping this is an easy thing to do with an stop action code, something to try and it wont loop,

~~OVERALL~~
a very short animation needs more effort though.

[[RD11] ROBOT Dancin']

Amusing robot

~~REVIEW~~
haha ok this was pretty cute, the dancing robot dancing to what i think is "MADONNA" but i could be wrong what was even better about this was that you filmed it with a camera and added all the frames into a movie, now this was pretty neat, a few issues might be the view screen is not large enogh, maybe have a few robots dancing and interacting with eachother, so its a simplistic flash with video but i found it to be amusing and entertaining, so notbad work, just wish there was more then just the loop, anyways good idea here i enjoyed it. hope to see more of this sometime soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
could have a larger view screen, and more stuff for the robot to do with walking and interacting with differant backround scenes

~~OVERALL~~
cute little robot dancing to madonna

Punisher responds:

While you may be "Like a Virgin" that was def not Madge.

[Bunnykill 5 Part 2]

Neato bunnies or bunny kill

~~REVIEW~~
ok cool movie here seems like alot of people like it aswell, the size of 13 mb, was abit much but still found it too be pretty good stuff, love the scene select options, the "MENU-PAGE" was notbad though maybe a tad of color wouldnt hurt, this movie starts right off and is pretty fantastic with all the effects like the light sabre scene, the film presents alot of action almost like these madness games,the "SOUND/FX" were righ on, aswell as the backround music, I never actually seen these "BUNNY" kill movies but must say they are pretty neat and ill have to checkout the rest of what you got, so anyways i had fun watching this, and dont see much to improve on as these are already really good onlything might be to add some color to the menu page, other then that pretty impressive.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add some color to the menu page, thats about all i saw.

~~OVERALL~~
great movie great series.

[Madness Heist]

Great film

~~REVIEW~~
ok so first off its always tough on the big file size not a real bad issue but it would be nice to not wait as much as some do, like i said thats not an issue, maybe have the viewer/player do something with some activity on the menu page while it loads, anyways great flash here with the whole madness style always a plus, it was abit "SLOW" in starting credits, i guess you wanted some build up, i like the opening scene, and this all reminded me of a great gangster movie, the "VOICES" are great, but i would suggest adding some "SUBTITLES" just a nice feature to have. but not needed as the voices were very clear as is, Now again i must say this really reminded me that i was watching a gangster mob movie great camera position, great voices and great cut scenes you did a fantastic job on pusing the camera scnes of what the viewer sees and im always impressed with that, what movie is the audio from it sounds familuar, but anyways great flash i was more impressed then expected of a madness film, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
loading page could use some sorta activity so that the player could do something while its loading some sorta mini game would be a start, Could use some subtitles as an extra feature but not needed, also look for places to save on space like the slow credits at start you could possibly cut that or cut straight to scene, just an idea anyways,

~~OVERALL~~
Madness at its best

~X~

MOC-Productions responds:

Thanks alot for all the detail! I know what you mean about the loading screen. I've debated updating it, but I'm not sure. Plus that would probably make the file size even bigger :/. And as for the audio, the music is all original by Mr.Redstone.

Glad you liked it. Thanks for the in-depth review.

[A Shiny Minecraft tale]

Fun game

~~REVIEW~~
hehe ok so this was actually a pretty cute cartoon atfirst i thought it was just the intro to the game but you get to do stuff so it was very fun, now the hard part is actually finding stuff you did hide them well so nice job there, kinda hid them too well but back on the toon for just a bit, great music great characters and you presented good action in the film it was all rolled together in a good little film/game and i was pretty impressed, so good job on all fronts i really had fun with the toon and the game part. anyways fun game movie here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe hide more items but not too hard

~~OVERALL~~
fun game here great finds

~X~

[Echo Force Zero: Vol1]

notbad at all

~~REVIEW~~
so this was one huge file not a big issue there was alot you put up forward, i would slowly push things and characters, some art detail could also be focused on, it was abig production almost seemed as if you were rushing it, now as i get into this it was right away funny especially with the first scene and that lil "VERY" cute indeed, great intro too, infact i find the "HUMOR" the best part so thats a plus, the characters are good but a tad more deatils here and there wouldnt hurt.so all and all this was a good pice, great voices decent visuals and funny story parts. untill next time keep up the decent flashworks.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned above some art details here and there could be mentioned, the charcters could use abit of that, just more overall detail in that area and such,

~~OVERALL~~
fun movie with a medal always a plus, good graphics, decent voices i enjoyed it.

~X~

LewToons responds:

thank you very much! The whole cuteness is important to me - - i know alot of people think its dumb or kiddy but i think it adds an element of fun

[Ryu Likes To Travel]

Amusing

~~REVIEW~~
ok i must say this was pretty {FUNNY} the loop is ok, but tends to get old somewhat, now i suppose this was more of a test then anything else but i must say it still got some humor to it, kinda makes one dizzy with all the looping but there is lots of room for improvment, some small {SUGGESTIONS} might be, a story, some new scenes, maybe some of the other characters spinning around just have to put forth the effort but besides that it was notbad and i did get a little laugh from it,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as mentioned above more ideas and more new scenes even some other {SPINNING} characters would have worked, but more differant scenes of course.

~~OVERALL~~
A looped spinning flash of ryu, entertaining but still needs more.

~X~