XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[dragon ball stick]

Needs work

~~REVIEW~~
Ok well not sure wehre to start off with this one there is alot more {EFFORT} that is needed to improve on this, not sure if this was just a test but i do understand its older first of all you should think about adding Story, more characters, other scenes, newer and flashier effects, and you should fix that {LOOPING} its easy to fix explained below, some backrounds aswell, just needs alot more effort but if you are going to make these really {SHORT} flashes then you should think about adding other short animations along with it, other then that it was a fun and cute very short flash but still needs more more, and much more effort, anyways good luck on anything new you may be working on.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
first of all you should think about adding Story, more characters, other scenes, newer and flashier effects, Add a stop-Action code, it will stop the looping of the flash, aswell ad some play and replay buttons. Since you had Stick characters, I suggest making more Character like characters with full color facial details, This will show lots of effort in your character design, it tends to take more effort but the results will pay off alot. it being so short you should do one of two things, and that would either make the flash much longer or add other short flicks along with it so that there is a variaty of short films and not just the one thats so short.just some helpful tips on improving on this.

~~OVERALL~~
A very short film with sticks battling, needs more effort

[Tai Die]

Amusing but needs more

~~REVIEW~~
Well first off this does need some {SOUND} and even some music to go with it you dont need to have talking voices but with music it would give it some sounds and adding music is not that hard you can always check the newgrounds forums and theres always helpfull tips on doing this, aswell as putting in a {STOP-ACTION-CODE} wich it needs to stop the {LOOPING} now besides all that you do need to make it longer, with more story, more backround effort and more scenes and a few more {EFFECTS} wouldnt hurt. the little animation you did have in this was pretty entertaining and amusing but with more effort with the suggestions i offered it would get better rating and much more viwings, now i do understand its abit old but still i could see something with this, as it does show some effort in the right direction.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
putting in a {STOP-ACTION-CODE} wich it needs to stop the {LOOPING} now besides all that you do need to make it longer, with more story, more backround effort and more scenes and a few more {EFFECTS} wouldnt hurt.

~~OVERALL~~
Needs some effort in a number of things, as suggested above.

[The Killing Bean vs. Pika]

This was cute

~~REVIEW~~
ok so this was interesting and that whole {PIKA} was kinda amusing and got annoying aswell, the art was notbad could use a few more extra details and shades here and there and differant assortmants of color and so on. You should also give the whole film abit longer more {CHARACTERS} other pokemon would be interesting, i also like that you added some {SOUNDS} and with that it seemed to work well together so all and all it was a decent little animation abit on the short side though, so you might want to add abit more to that, but besides that i was alright with the outcome.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
could use a few more extra details and shades here and there and differant assortmants of color and so on.

~~OVERALL~~
A very short yet amusing flash i enjoyed it.

[The Columbine Kid]

Randomly short

~~REVIEW~~
Ok first off the idea was ok, and second you may want to work on the {BUTTON} especialy the play button at the start it could use a more sleeker and flashier look, The animation seemed kind of {SLOPPY} there was lots to see and stuff, and it all went by very fast, maybe too fast, so another tip for making it better would be to {SLOW} down the animation slow down the scenes and ofcourse add more story to it all the animation did snt seem to have much {DIRECTION} seemed more {RANDOM} then anything else, wich is ok at times but this one was just all over the place, you need more orginization with the animation story and so on, and ofcourse more effort, so other then that it was an ok little flash you have here, but can be much better

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The button it could use a more sleeker and flashier look, so another tip for making it better would be to {SLOW} down the animation slow down the scenes and ofcourse add more story to it all, you need more orginization with the animation story and so on, and ofcourse more effort

~~OVERALL~~
Short and sloppy but could be better

[UFO Abduction]

Very cute but also very short

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so this was a really small {FILE} ok so as the film starts playing it gets good with a sheep and some aliens im guessing the aliens changed the sheep and now the sheep is confused and doesnt know what to do, now this is cite but still very {SHORT} and another issue is that it loops and thats due to the fact that you need to add a {STOP-ACTION} code, also it being so short you should do one of two things, and that would either make the flash much longer or add other short flicks along with it so that there is a variaty of short films and not just the one thats so short. so this started out ok good animating good color and an overall start to a good story but just ended too shortly, so with all that said you should put abit more effort next time.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as stated above add more short toons or make this one longer with more to see and such, this movie "LOOPS" now thats actually an easy fix, you can use a stop-action-code from the action - script and there are actually lots of easy to understand tutorials here on the site to view on how this is done if you dont know, but anyways the stop-action-code will stop the looping, but dont forget to add some "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons for the viewers to restart viwing the flash, other then that its a pretty good start.

~~OVERALL~~
A short animation funny but just plain too short.

[Death of Diglett]

fix the looping and make longer

~~REVIEW~~
ok so this was actually not a bad little tune here, a very short but still very entertaining, still being so short makes me think you could have put a little more effort into to make more of a {STORY} out of it, add new characters new scenes and so fourth, you do have a decent flash it just needs more to it, you had some good {ANIMATION} and lots of color and just overall it was pretty funny i thought, just needs that little push for more {QUALITY} and so on, so as for improvmens suggested below and here are, fix looping, make it longer, add new characters and new scenes, and so on, just a few tips that should make it much better, Like i said its a cute little animation just needs more effort on your end.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the story longer and make it with new scenes and new characters, also you should fix the looping this is an easy thing to do with an stop action code, something to try and it wont loop,

~~OVERALL~~
a very short animation needs more effort though.

[[RD11] ROBOT Dancin']

Amusing robot

~~REVIEW~~
haha ok this was pretty cute, the dancing robot dancing to what i think is "MADONNA" but i could be wrong what was even better about this was that you filmed it with a camera and added all the frames into a movie, now this was pretty neat, a few issues might be the view screen is not large enogh, maybe have a few robots dancing and interacting with eachother, so its a simplistic flash with video but i found it to be amusing and entertaining, so notbad work, just wish there was more then just the loop, anyways good idea here i enjoyed it. hope to see more of this sometime soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
could have a larger view screen, and more stuff for the robot to do with walking and interacting with differant backround scenes

~~OVERALL~~
cute little robot dancing to madonna

Punisher responds:

While you may be "Like a Virgin" that was def not Madge.

[Bunnykill 5 Part 2]

Neato bunnies or bunny kill

~~REVIEW~~
ok cool movie here seems like alot of people like it aswell, the size of 13 mb, was abit much but still found it too be pretty good stuff, love the scene select options, the "MENU-PAGE" was notbad though maybe a tad of color wouldnt hurt, this movie starts right off and is pretty fantastic with all the effects like the light sabre scene, the film presents alot of action almost like these madness games,the "SOUND/FX" were righ on, aswell as the backround music, I never actually seen these "BUNNY" kill movies but must say they are pretty neat and ill have to checkout the rest of what you got, so anyways i had fun watching this, and dont see much to improve on as these are already really good onlything might be to add some color to the menu page, other then that pretty impressive.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add some color to the menu page, thats about all i saw.

~~OVERALL~~
great movie great series.