Ok that was really short
So that was really short, very very short, So add more too it, i mean i didnt really understand alot of it because it was so fast over as soon as it started, but it did have some effort as it had some nice visuals and sound, the "GREEN" text at the bottom could be changed to a differant color as the green is hard to see with the backround visuals. That was the basic of it, its interesting but could be longer, and abit more effort aswell, So while i liked this flash there are some good and bad about it, i went over it abit but have suggested some more ideas below hope it helps, its not major but could use more of the effort on little stuff here and there, anyways hope it helps as this was actually a pretty good flash. anyways keep up the good work.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
There are some improvments that could be made, here are a few suggestions, some effort on your side will only make this even better. So give these options a try, Another thing i noticed was that this was just way too short, and you have a few options here, add more to your flash, more scenes more info, more content, and or add this along with other short flashes all in one flash so that there is abit more depth to the whole flash.the green text at the bottom could be changed to a differant color as the green is hard to see with the backround visuals.