XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Rolando Quintana]

Differant

This was a clever movie you have here, There was some inspriring animation in this, and hile i do say that there was some areas of the flash that can be made to run and look better even more on a sharper and smoother feel, but i will for sure touch on those areas abit later, but now i just wanted to comment on how i preceived this to start off, and sofar i am pretty intriged by it, so glad to see something good here. Perhaps some little stuff here and there can be tweaked, And there is room for some various ideas of improving on this. Well this one was differant, it was kind of short but still found it to be somewhat interesting, you have shown some good animation skills here and made it work well, as the animation was smooth and flowed well, you have a unique and strange ideas here but thats what i liked about it, it could possibly use some sort of backrounds thogh and maybe be a bit longer aswell, but other then that i thought it was pretty nifty of a flash animation here. Good effort here, and i found some parts even better then others, it was actually a fun flash, it also has its good and bad moments, those are things that happen, but anyways keep up the awsome work and i really look forward to seeing more stuff like this, untill then keep working on great stuff. nothing else to say except keep up the effort in this one and future flash stuff you have planned.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as above, this could be better. and here are some suggestions, tips and ideas that can only help to make your idea work even better then it is, so give it a thought. Here are a few tips and ideas on making this somewhat better, it never hurts to improve on stuff, even in the smallest stuff. Its a good entry just needs some small adjustments. Make it longer, or maybe add some other short animations to it, also it could use some sort of backdrop or backround, just something there in the distant besides just the white backing.

[Pencilmation #22]

Number 22

And I am delighted to get started on another review of this flash movie, the work does show you putting the time and especially some effort to it, This is kind of interesting so it doesnt bore you but does actually keep you wondering what may come up next so thats some things i notoced right away about this flash. So i didnt know there was this many of this series, i will for sure have to checkout the rest, i did find this style funny and entertaining, i love the pencil idea and the animation seemed to flow nice with this one, it was smooth and cool to see, i believe the only downside to this was that there was no color and by adding some spots of color here and there would make it a well rounded flash animation so just something to think about. I really enjoyed this flash and all that you have presented here, there was alot to see and it was overall fun so great job all around below i have left a few ideas that may help to improve on this flash, so keep up the good work and i look forward to more. from you and more of this type and style you did here, more effort never hurt either.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So I actually found this to be an entertaining flash sumbmission, I did see a couple of things that could have been re-worked with a tad more effort, so i gone ahead to try and find some lacking points and do hope you consider looking into them as it will just add more quality, but anyways heres an idea or two. I did suggest the possible idea that having some spots of color here and there would be a nice touch, doesnt have to be everything just here and there, a spot a backround a line etc, but some color on this would be a plus.

[Robotic]

This was an interesting video you had for us.

So i really like this as this starts off there are some interesting stuff that get going right away, so for one very possitive point you show the effort to get things started in the right direction, and thats always a plus. So with flash movies like this one, its always nice to see the effort such as you have done with this movie. So this was an interesting video you had for us the music seems to go great with all the visuals. This is one of those flash videos that i wouldnt mind some subtitles to go with, just it would give it a nice effect especially with how the robot voice sounded and all, But i must say this was still a pretty interesting and entertaining flash vid you had going so i was pretty pleased with the outcome, A good robotic video just add some subtitles next time would be anice option You a hve a decent flash here, but there there is still some room for improvments even a few little things here and there, but in the end it can only help you and make your flash much better and again in the end more enjoyble for all who see it such as myself. i did enjoy what you have here now just would like to see more effort all around, so good luck with all that.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And here we are once again in the improvment area, and before i do get to that, its a decent flash submission youhave, but could use some fixing and cleaning up on areas, Some of these ideas will do greatly on this whole piece, and i do look forward to seeing some upgrades and improved details, so give it a shot. Now I mention Subtitles only because its nice to have for viewers, cause sometimes something might be missed, just a little something extra that will make a better flash and such. and having some subtitels and it does have to be much just a little text at the bottom so its not distraction to the flash and or game, and it can go a long way, try it out you will notice it does go a long way with the viewers and fans

koit responds:

Great and all but you keep mentioning subtitles, yet in my description it tells you how to access the subtitles built into the movie.

Press the S top left corner !

["Seeing is Believing" rap]

Wow nice

First of all great flash you have presented here, I was facinated with everything here, now some parts could be better and there could be some new ideas and adjustments but I really enjoyed it for what it was, and hope to see much more of your work soon. So starting off here is always hard but to get the ball rolling, i really did enjoy your presentation. Wow this was really good, you pushed the limits on thi one, the "VOCALS" are really impressive on this one, the visuals are really good and you had some nice animation flowing from scene to next, the music was fitting, but almost seems like the animation was too fast for the music seems like it needed more of a faster music tone, but it was alright, and the ending with the real person that was verynice and a good touch to cap it off, onlything i would like to see improved here might be some "SUBTITLES" but other then that this was alright stuff. There was alot of great things in this flash, some could be better like some little details here and there, but not much but still some stuff could take a looking into as suggested of course, the flash itself kept me interested and wanting to see more, so hope to see more of your works sometime soon. Untill then keep up the awsome work and efforts.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was a good animation it has a smooth side of things and the style and direction was ok, but i believe that there needs to be an even smooth effort on things, the flash was decent, but i must say there are still some clever ways you can make this better, such as using varias ideas and advice that will in the endmake this more quality then it is, just something to think about. This was ok but it wouldnt hurt to add some subtitles, not because anything was hard to hear or anything but because its just something extra that would make this abit better to understand and its like a nice little feature for your flash here, and if it is hard for some to understand, then they would have the option of subtitles.

MindChamber responds:

thanks for the review! and I totaly agree!
Also I definitely feel like subtitles are a good idea, as long as they arent too distracting,

thanks again!

[Central Bwankers]

lol funny stuff here

Well i must say this was a pretty fantastic flash. for the mostpart it was highly entertaining, it kept your interest, and has some nice visuals that really come together, so that was the good of things. I am really enjoying this flash movie, you do have the skills just takes putting them across the board even further then you already have. Now here you have something funny, lots of good characters and even better voices, and its political in away, wich is ok it was amusing though, this was pretty entertaining though, between each semant maybe you should have a "PAUSE" and something flashy so that it doesnt see so much like a loop, that might throw off people, but the dinosaur one was my fave hehe, anyways good work here, very entertaining. and amusing. So while this was pretty good it could use a few extras It had everything that made it a great flash nice art, nice detail and nice graphics, so all and all this was actually a pretty good flash. So as any suggestions i posted try them and see how it goes, but for the overall of this it was pretty good stuff. So keep up the interesting flash-works.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
There are some improvments that could be made, here are a few suggestions, some effort on your side will only make this even better. So give these options a try. So while this was pretty interesting, here are some tips and ideas that may help to improve on it. But just remember these ideas are in place to help make this flash better and make it more fun for all. Adding some subtitles would be a plus on this, while the voices are alright the subtitles would be just something extra to have, and something to think about. Add some pauses and some flashy pause text before each clip and adding some stop action code would be a nice option aswell, i thought it was just clips but adding a play and replay button would be nice aswell..

[Bahamut's BDAY Flash]

Hmm what to say with this one

Its a funny and amusing one, there is not much going on but the "MUSIC" waspretty amusing and cute, and in some ways it reminded me of some mexican song lol, i like all the random things that are going on makes for a cute flash and pretty entertaining, Some of the ladder medals seemed abit harder i guess thats how it should be maybe it was a area of clicking or something, Now i would think that you would put in a fewmore "MEDALS" since this was rather longer then normal, but again i thought it was funny and amusing, good sourse of amusment though, and as for more helpfull tips, you should allow for some "SCROLLING" so the user can scroll thru-out the party scene and in other parts of the room and all that would be intersting and maybe more fun for all, just something to think about in anycase, so anyways it was a fun game, i liked the medals, and while it could have used more it was still a fun experience.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more medal otions, maybe even allowing to scroll around the room for even more party fun.

Hacsev responds:

That's actually a really nice idea. Thanks for reviewing!

[Pleasure Island 4]

Good flash here

Hard to get this started but i guess i can start off by saying it was pretty interesting you have an nifty style about you and putting it on flash form so good job on the efforts you put into this particular flash of works, you brought out some interesting views and images aswell as animation, so good job, And so there was alot going on with this flash submission and seems like you took some time putting it all together and thats actually a good thing, I wish the loading time was better as the size seemed somewhat large, and i will just say this congrats on the awards thats always a plus, especially on the time and effort you have put fourth here, the shiny awards are something extra for your hard work so once again congrats on the shinies There is alot of random stuff going on with this one and i liked that, it made it for a more entertaining flash, the "MUSIC" was really good and very fitting to the content, I thought that the voices were notbad, actually pretty good you should have more of that there was some good quality there and you should keep with that, so good job on the voices. Some longer and more in-depth battle scenes would have been nice. The "GRAPHICS" and art detail was pretty good, Anyways I was enjoying this flash here you put in some effort you put in the time and everything seemed to flow and work well with each other thing going on, and there was some interesting stuff happening, so i was pleased with this and the outcome,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You have some good content thru-out this entire submission, and there is room for improvments. and improvments can really make your idea even better aslong as there is no disruption on your original direction, so here are some ideas and i hope they will help maybe even inspire some new direction and even future projects Maybe you can make some small cuts here in there maybe some enhanced areas could be toned down just a tad and maybe the file size can be somewhat lower, or even put this into two parts, just a thought on reducing the file size somewhat. You had some action fighting scenes those i beleive for a better outcome should have lasted longer and with more intensity, but also more longer battle scenes.

[Super Wrestle Night Xviii]

Interesting but could use more effort.

And we have a good entry here, allthough it could use some better stuff here, There was some interesting parts, not great but still ok, but with some more effort this could be something special so take your time with it and add that extra effort and it will pay off in the long run, Well this was not exactly funny, it was ok and could be alot better, I beleive that the jokes could have been executed alot better as they were somewhat dry and just needed more better direction and so-on But that was one area that can really be improved on. This was kind of interesting, but seems to lose the interest level and again that comes to the fact that it needs more humor. but anyways good flash here but does need that extra touch. I like what you have presented here, there was some interesting elements to this, there was some quality to it, but i still feel it lacked some points, maybe that will come thu better with some more effort throughout, Now dont get me wrong i did enjoy this and had fun with it,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Now with some improvments this could be a nifty lil flash it could really be something but i would like to see some ideas and suggestions pushed through, and some of the ideas are pretty simple and basic and can make this bloom into something really special, so try a few ideas out. Needs more animation, needs some more humor and better direction of jokes and all, the whole flash actually needs more of abit of everything.

hillrdavid responds:

Very good. Thank you.

[TTA Episode 030]

An ok submission, does need more effort though.

Another good entry here, it was pretty interesting and there was some interesting visuals and some ok content, i thought there was some initial things that could have been better with some more detail, I suppose there is alot that could be made better, but overall i enjoyed it, This actually starts right off and is pretty good, there was alot of action in this and alot ofgood story to it so i commend you on the story part of thinhs, there was some issues with the sound quality being hard to hear so the subtitles was a nice touch, the graphics could have used morefine tunning aswell, but besides that this was actually pretty good, it did seemto drag on and onmaybe shortening it up somehow, but other then that i kinda liked it. After watching this flash and seeing it all had to offer my ending notes on this are that i was pleased with it, even in the end, some parts were better then others and some stuff could be better and even improved on,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So with this one there could be a few things to improve on, i will get to that shortly, but first i wanted to say there was some really good parts, you can start improving on this by taking some of the advice offered and use it go with it, make it work and make your submission shine from it, Sound quality is really bad, you should try and give it more quality maybe its the "MIC" or maybe the recording was too close to the mic, these are things that can be looked into and improved, Another issue was the "GRAPHICS" some of the orinal art was ok but your brush strokes are too thick so you should change that up abit.

[TTA Episode 058]

Could use some update from its old style

These types of flash entries have always had an interesting mistique about them, now while these types are not always the greatest or flashiest they bring something to the table, You have made it interesting and didnt bore me all that much so there is some good in them. Ok so with this one it was pretty interesting and with the whole click button to move along to the next scene that was ok, but thats more of the old style and you could revamp that to the more modern styles, and since its a movie remove the buttons to next scene and just let it flow like a movie would from scene to scene. Add some voices to the subtitle parts seems fitting since there is some animation going along with the subtitles. ok so the music was pretty good, but the flash was a let down due to the fact that you have to click to each new scene and ofcourse the real killer with there being no voice-ers, just some things to work on later. OK so seems like there was some time and effort put into this thats all fine and dandy but still i came across some thing that could be better, but overall it was a good flash entry and i can see it being upgrded for more enjoy for everyone watching.anyways nice job here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Things to improve on that is the question here, now as i came across this fine entry there were alot of nifty things you put together but there are also ways, and ideas that this can progress to even better, I will try and suggest some ideas for a better production of this but it takes some effort on your end, but i believe with some extra effort you can bring out the best of this flash, now here are some ideas. So as said before, remove the next button option and just let it flow more like a movie, the next button is more of the old style of flash use and could use more modern styles besides the whole next button option just boggs down the flash. also the "VOICES" well there was none durring the subtitle parts you should add some voices for the subtitles,