XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[COMET]

Nice and christmas like

Great job on making this to daily feature thats a great award on anything always shows the effort you been through on something like this, This had alot of wondering and mystery around it i like how you presnted that feel, and touch there, The whole idea for chirstmas was great and you really presented that christmas feely touch style, And i love how everything is very colorful in this, really made the animation more enjoyble, The onlything i was concerned about was probably the size on this 12 mb was pretty big and alot of us have some smaller machines and connections it would be nice to have it cut down somehow or even make it into a part one and two, just a thought anyways.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Compress the file, It would help to load faster, and allow more users to see it faster, if you remove a few things here and there it would help abit, alot of times the things that take up lots of space is Music, Jpegs, and fine detail, just something to look into to have a smaller download time, in the end it will be better for the viewers and voters watching your entry.

[ME3: El-Cid's Best Worst]

Short and amusing

This one was ok, it was entertaining, i was taken back by the "SIZE"abit, but i guess it was well worthit, just took a little longer to load up this entry, I do want to take some time here and say Congrats on the awards it does seem worth the time of this flash and the award shows you put some good effort and time into it so nice job indeed on the awards. LOL ok so i really like the direction of this with a narrative style, but i also found this animation to be kind of short, still got some laughs from it and all, and was pretty amsuing, animation and art was notbad actually and everything ran smoothly i thought, So my advice on a few things would be to add some "SUBTITLES" and make it longer of a flashwith more to it, just a thought anyways.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as suggested. some subtitles would be nice, more effort on making it longer and more of a story there, even if its short it could go just a tad longer.

[Dancebreak!]

LOL Funny

Haha okso i had a good time with this flash you have here, it was rather "SHORT"and i was kindof confused but i must say it was abrilliant piece of flash here, a good overallmovie with some really good "VOICES" and while it was just a few scenes you cut to the funny and humor right away so that was all good and had some nice effort all around, Now i suppose it can use some sort of improvments like some "SUBTITLES" and maybe even a tad longer for more of the humor and good story youhad going on, so for the mostpart of this it was a pretty good and amusing flash entry keep up the fantastic work.

~~OVERALL~~
So as suggested above, some longer scenes, more scenes as it was a tad short, and maybe some subtitles not because it was bad or anything but because it would be a nice feature.

[Space Face (Part 1)]

Cute game

You have a cute game here, its pretty entertaining and kind of "SIMPLE" but imust say that its still pretty impressive i actually did like the simple side of it as it made it more pleasent and such, This is one of those games that starts out fun and is ok through the rest of the game and there was helpfull hints throughout so that was a plus, The one thing this flash did lack was sound, there was just not enough of it, youneed to add some music and using the audio portal is a great advantage, you may even want to add some sound/fx of sorts it will all be a plus to this flash, but anyways this was a pretty good idea of a game cute and simple keep up the good work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
To start off this game does need some music and or sound/fx, you can even use the audio portal it offers a wide selection for your use.

[UncleOutrage Marshmallows]

Wow this was nifty

So i guess its been awhile since you been on here but always nice to see some work like this especially with some flash woks as this one, now i hope you do stay a lil longer as this was pretty impressive, This was differant then most flash that runs through here, differant and sometimes picky as some may not like the content but i had fun with this one, And there was alot of effort and work that went into this so that was a plus the effort does show and that was nice, Even seemed like it could be turned into some funny songs, The animation was fantastic the effort was hardwilled, and overall this was just pleasent so this reviewer enjoys this submission and i hope others will too.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as some sort of improvments, why not make these things into more like songs and music videos seems like its already there, i wouldnt mind seeing some more humor.

[Birthday 20]

Very welldone

Wow first off congrats on the awards on this one that was pretty cool, and very impressive, you know its pretty good when it wins some awards, so props to you on making something with abit more quality then the next, So this was a pretty good submission, nice and pleasent even with all the stuff described, the animation for one seemed to really work and flowed on through, i even liked it because its a great quality flash with a little loading time and thats always a plus with a slow machine like mine, and im sure others appreciate that, so again nice effort there, the flash and story mainly really took off and had a real touch, so once again nice job all around on this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So some things to improve on, cant say that this needs any improvments, i do know it was a welldone piece, and well orginized with nice animation.

["One" Trailer]

Short trailer, but still good

So that was something differant, This is kind of old, and it being a trailer is nice and all, i do however think that you could have put a bit more content in this, the "VOICE" was pretty good and the text wording was pretty good, but the thing is there was not enough visuals and content, I do understand this is a trailer but even with that it could use more visuals, But on that note good job on the character and the "VOCALS" the voice worked very well with this, so nice job there, so with making things better, add some more visuals, more stuff going on, and more characters of course, anyways nice work here i liked it and its a start for something really good.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
so with making things better, add some more visuals, more stuff going on, and more characters of course

[hitchHiker: part One]

Great story in this one.

First of all nice job on making the size of this kind of small at 1 meg thats pretty good and there is no reall long wait, and always great on slower machines and conections, This flash is pretty good it has a realistic feel to it, probably because how well the animation ran and how good you presented the art so that was pretty neat and nice effort on your part, The whole idea about hitchhikers and such was pretty neat i thought, great job on this one with color aswell, i do however wish there was more backround story on the character, and the flash so there was more info, but other then that this was pretty good i thought, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So first off, great flash the story kept me interested, I do wish there was more backround story on the character, and the flash so there was more info, besides that, that was about the only issue that lacked.