XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[TheTruth.com Parody]

Ok that was really short

So that was really short, very very short, So add more too it, i mean i didnt really understand alot of it because it was so fast over as soon as it started, but it did have some effort as it had some nice visuals and sound, the "GREEN" text at the bottom could be changed to a differant color as the green is hard to see with the backround visuals. That was the basic of it, its interesting but could be longer, and abit more effort aswell, So while i liked this flash there are some good and bad about it, i went over it abit but have suggested some more ideas below hope it helps, its not major but could use more of the effort on little stuff here and there, anyways hope it helps as this was actually a pretty good flash. anyways keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
There are some improvments that could be made, here are a few suggestions, some effort on your side will only make this even better. So give these options a try, Another thing i noticed was that this was just way too short, and you have a few options here, add more to your flash, more scenes more info, more content, and or add this along with other short flashes all in one flash so that there is abit more depth to the whole flash.the green text at the bottom could be changed to a differant color as the green is hard to see with the backround visuals.

[Super Happy Fun Time 33]

It was decent

Now there was not much to this one but it was pretty interesting with your design and all, kinda neat and unique, So while the animation itself was not all that great but you had a nice design in here as mentioned, you could spice things up abit more though maybe improved backrounds of some sort, maybe some deeper depth of color and designs aswell, just an idea though on something to improve, Now dont get me wrong this was kinda interestings just needed something more though, more stuff going on and such, but for the most of it i did enjoy what you did present us, 5 mb was starting to get long but was not that bad in this case, so anyways nice job all around, i look forward to seeing more from you.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So there could be some small improvments, start with the backround design, maybe some more animation, and last but ot least could be cut down in size just a tad.

[Deciduous]

Good flash here

First off glad to see this movie was so popular winning a few awards, pretty nifty if you ask me. This was pretty good, i really like how this story played out, The character is pretty interesting, and was odd, but still neat, you pushed more of the visuals then the story but it all worked hand and hand, and actually madeout for a good flash here, Dont know much about the character, but it was a good character and kept me wanting more as things played out, And with the "MUSIC" it fit so well and made everything flow very well and smooth, Its kind of like a story about life and stuff and you presented that perfectly, The piano playing was very nice, so props to you on that and a very good flash i look forward to more stuff,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Now this was already great, could use more back story for the character but it was still pretty good if you ask me.

[COMET]

Nice and christmas like

Great job on making this to daily feature thats a great award on anything always shows the effort you been through on something like this, This had alot of wondering and mystery around it i like how you presnted that feel, and touch there, The whole idea for chirstmas was great and you really presented that christmas feely touch style, And i love how everything is very colorful in this, really made the animation more enjoyble, The onlything i was concerned about was probably the size on this 12 mb was pretty big and alot of us have some smaller machines and connections it would be nice to have it cut down somehow or even make it into a part one and two, just a thought anyways.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Compress the file, It would help to load faster, and allow more users to see it faster, if you remove a few things here and there it would help abit, alot of times the things that take up lots of space is Music, Jpegs, and fine detail, just something to look into to have a smaller download time, in the end it will be better for the viewers and voters watching your entry.

[ME3: El-Cid's Best Worst]

Short and amusing

This one was ok, it was entertaining, i was taken back by the "SIZE"abit, but i guess it was well worthit, just took a little longer to load up this entry, I do want to take some time here and say Congrats on the awards it does seem worth the time of this flash and the award shows you put some good effort and time into it so nice job indeed on the awards. LOL ok so i really like the direction of this with a narrative style, but i also found this animation to be kind of short, still got some laughs from it and all, and was pretty amsuing, animation and art was notbad actually and everything ran smoothly i thought, So my advice on a few things would be to add some "SUBTITLES" and make it longer of a flashwith more to it, just a thought anyways.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as suggested. some subtitles would be nice, more effort on making it longer and more of a story there, even if its short it could go just a tad longer.

[Dancebreak!]

LOL Funny

Haha okso i had a good time with this flash you have here, it was rather "SHORT"and i was kindof confused but i must say it was abrilliant piece of flash here, a good overallmovie with some really good "VOICES" and while it was just a few scenes you cut to the funny and humor right away so that was all good and had some nice effort all around, Now i suppose it can use some sort of improvments like some "SUBTITLES" and maybe even a tad longer for more of the humor and good story youhad going on, so for the mostpart of this it was a pretty good and amusing flash entry keep up the fantastic work.

~~OVERALL~~
So as suggested above, some longer scenes, more scenes as it was a tad short, and maybe some subtitles not because it was bad or anything but because it would be a nice feature.

[Space Face (Part 1)]

Cute game

You have a cute game here, its pretty entertaining and kind of "SIMPLE" but imust say that its still pretty impressive i actually did like the simple side of it as it made it more pleasent and such, This is one of those games that starts out fun and is ok through the rest of the game and there was helpfull hints throughout so that was a plus, The one thing this flash did lack was sound, there was just not enough of it, youneed to add some music and using the audio portal is a great advantage, you may even want to add some sound/fx of sorts it will all be a plus to this flash, but anyways this was a pretty good idea of a game cute and simple keep up the good work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
To start off this game does need some music and or sound/fx, you can even use the audio portal it offers a wide selection for your use.

[UncleOutrage Marshmallows]

Wow this was nifty

So i guess its been awhile since you been on here but always nice to see some work like this especially with some flash woks as this one, now i hope you do stay a lil longer as this was pretty impressive, This was differant then most flash that runs through here, differant and sometimes picky as some may not like the content but i had fun with this one, And there was alot of effort and work that went into this so that was a plus the effort does show and that was nice, Even seemed like it could be turned into some funny songs, The animation was fantastic the effort was hardwilled, and overall this was just pleasent so this reviewer enjoys this submission and i hope others will too.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as some sort of improvments, why not make these things into more like songs and music videos seems like its already there, i wouldnt mind seeing some more humor.