XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[A Shiny Minecraft tale]

Fun game

~~REVIEW~~
hehe ok so this was actually a pretty cute cartoon atfirst i thought it was just the intro to the game but you get to do stuff so it was very fun, now the hard part is actually finding stuff you did hide them well so nice job there, kinda hid them too well but back on the toon for just a bit, great music great characters and you presented good action in the film it was all rolled together in a good little film/game and i was pretty impressed, so good job on all fronts i really had fun with the toon and the game part. anyways fun game movie here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe hide more items but not too hard

~~OVERALL~~
fun game here great finds

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[Echo Force Zero: Vol1]

notbad at all

~~REVIEW~~
so this was one huge file not a big issue there was alot you put up forward, i would slowly push things and characters, some art detail could also be focused on, it was abig production almost seemed as if you were rushing it, now as i get into this it was right away funny especially with the first scene and that lil "VERY" cute indeed, great intro too, infact i find the "HUMOR" the best part so thats a plus, the characters are good but a tad more deatils here and there wouldnt hurt.so all and all this was a good pice, great voices decent visuals and funny story parts. untill next time keep up the decent flashworks.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned above some art details here and there could be mentioned, the charcters could use abit of that, just more overall detail in that area and such,

~~OVERALL~~
fun movie with a medal always a plus, good graphics, decent voices i enjoyed it.

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LewToons responds:

thank you very much! The whole cuteness is important to me - - i know alot of people think its dumb or kiddy but i think it adds an element of fun

[Ryu Likes To Travel]

Amusing

~~REVIEW~~
ok i must say this was pretty {FUNNY} the loop is ok, but tends to get old somewhat, now i suppose this was more of a test then anything else but i must say it still got some humor to it, kinda makes one dizzy with all the looping but there is lots of room for improvment, some small {SUGGESTIONS} might be, a story, some new scenes, maybe some of the other characters spinning around just have to put forth the effort but besides that it was notbad and i did get a little laugh from it,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as mentioned above more ideas and more new scenes even some other {SPINNING} characters would have worked, but more differant scenes of course.

~~OVERALL~~
A looped spinning flash of ryu, entertaining but still needs more.

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[Awesome Kombat [CFC]]

Entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
I been meaning to review this one for the longest time and glad i did get around to it, its pretty impressive, i really enjoyed this one alot so thanks for the great effort on this one, The whole idea of mortal kombat with the odd yet interesting {CHARACTERS} was interesting, i thought thats what made it more silly and entertaining well atleast for me, Now i thought it was kinda {SHORT} so if you did make it linger and more characters that might put it over the edge for me, but other then it being short i thought this was a pretty nifty little toon, so nice job on the effort and i look forward to more of your silly toons, keep up the interesting flash works.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer with alot of the characters from mortal kombat

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining mortal kombat parody

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[Pink Fluffy Unicorns]

Colorfull

~~REVIEW~~
Hmmm wow this was differant, i do like the color and really good use of the color all around, always great to see cpolor used all around so nice job there, there was lots going on and eventhough it was kinda short it was still very entertaining and very amusing, i especially like you {LARGE} play buttons and all haha it was very pleasent and cute, would have been nice if it was longer and you shouwed more great and odd backround scenes but other then that it was, other then that i though it was a fantastic little colorfull flash.but anyways hope to see more interesting and unique flash like this in the comming future, untill then good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer bringout the backrounds more, other then that it was pretty neat

~~OVERALL~~
A very colorfull and pleasent flash of rainbows and unicorns

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[Kevin Rudd:RAI493+D 003]

Needs more effort

~~REVIEW~~
Now this one was differant but again the same whoever {KEVIN-RUDD} is ?? but regardless like alot of these the sizes seem to take awhile loading so maybe cut the {AUDIO} somewhat so its less loading time, just something to think about, in the next one, I thought since it was a differant character {NOT HITLER} you would have put up differant music, there was a slight animation like a quick second, but you shoould also think about adding some more animation throughout it all, have the poke ball flop around or something, just an idea though, so this does need more effort but i still found it entertaining, hope the next ones are somewhat with more animation and more to see, anyways nice effort.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Reduction of the music file would be nice, less loading time would be the result since its mainly the music that makes it a larger file. Needs some more animation like i suggested some animation with the pokeball

~~OVERALL~~
Another in the ranks of the hitler series

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[L'Amour de Rasputin]

I liked it

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm well that was differant, it was very short but the {GRAPHICS} were very good even in Black and white, allthough you should add some {COLOR} maybe just abit here and there just a few focus points, of color, this film had a whole german feel to it though, i do like your characters and the music was very german sounding guess that was the idea, but really it was ok, so how can you improve on this one? well for one you can make this longer, more of a story, and more differant scenes then what you had, but again for what it was it was notbad, anyways good luck on anything new you got going on.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could be longer and more other scenes and such more of a story to it

~~OVERALL~~
It was entertaining could be longer

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Battosai810 responds:

I don't quite understand your {FORMATTING}, you can just use plain ol' English dude.

It was fully intentional for this to be black and white, and I didn't really want to have the rasterbated/Sin City sort of "black and white with one color" that's become so passe. The music was Russian, and the writing was French; I was going for a surrealist film idea. I'll admit there's really not much of a story here, it's just sort of strange for the sake of it. Glad you found it entertaining anyway.

[Yotam & Fantasia 03]

Very entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so its my first time seeing one of these from the series i will catch up on the others later, but as for this one, The {PLAY-BUTTON} on the menu page could be brighter it was abit on the faint side, So first off great {VOICES} haha wow the dialog is crazy funny and you really put it out there, the main idea of this is about these characters i have not seen the others but i think you should keep the girlfriend in there makes for some good humor with a 3rd party there, haha, anyways great animation, you gave us some very funny {HUMOR} and the backrounds were very subtle but that was just perfect that way, i had alot of laughs with this one, so nice job indeed, keep up the funny series.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
To start off with make the play button on the menu page more {VISSABLE} as it was very faint,

~~OVERALL~~
Funny humor, good idea, and great voices

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