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[The Walking Derp]

Nice parody

A good flash here i thought, its interesting how this starts off, pretty interesting, and i got some good entertainment value from this, This was a nice and funny parody here, Im not too familuar with all the content of the show but i like the "HUMOR" and gave off a few laughs so that was pretty good and there was alot of silly stuff going on here, the "ANIMATION" was pretty good too could be sharper at times but it was alright i thought, The voices were kinda hard to understand, but after a bit you could understand what was being said, so nice job there but maybe more clarity there next time, And so besides all the above this was pretty good, some nice entertainment value, some god and bad points but with a few adjustments it could be better so anyways nice job nice effort here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
There are many ways to improve on this, and i have some advice here and there a few tops and a few adjustments should make this a top notch flash, so try a few of the ideas and and let the flash become even better. The voices were abit off at times, and the animation could be better, other then that this was pretty good.

[Pencilmation: Egypt]

This was pretty interesting

I found this to be pretty interesting, it has a good story and the "VOICES" were pretty good andhad some good quality to it and all, It was pretty entertaining and amusing i thought, I guess there was some other episodes to the series, and i should check those out but this was pretty good and some nice content great voices and good. i would have liked to see more dialog on this whole episode but it was pretty good as is, so with that all said, great stuff very entertaining and great story, i look forward to more, So while i liked this flash there are some good and bad about it, i went over it abit but have suggested some more ideas below hope it helps, its not major but could use more of the effort on little stuff here and there, anyways hope it helps as this was actually a pretty good flash.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Hard to suggest anything on this one as it was great, maybe some better dialog going on but it was all good if you ask me.

[Moisture Care]

Great ending

I thought the best part on this was probably the "ENDING" and you had some great build-up aswell, very nice indeed, aswell as being one of the most funny and amusing parts, so great job there, The animation was pretty "SMOOTH" and just went from one scene to the next with ease and flow, so another awsome job there it was pretty good, So all and all this was a great little toon you have here, lots of "HUMOR" very entertaining and pretty amusing i had lots of lots of laughs with this so great job and im sure people will love this years to come, so with that all out there keep making these awsome flash-works as i and the whole community here really enjoy them, as for improving on this, its hard to say but i guess if anything make them a tad longer with more random stuff going on aswell.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some longer scenes, add some more humor and add more "RANDOM" humor.

['Arrow to the Knee']

Amusing and funny stuff here

wow pretty awsome that this flash won alot of differant award, thats always a plus, the 4 megs of file size was actually not very small or big it was actually just right, I guess theres alot of these Skyrim types now i am seeing lots of these now and then, this one was pretty good i thought, The ending was kinda funny with the kid dieing and all, Seems like you had some nice art going with this aswell, the animation went well with the art aswell, So while this was pretty good it could use a few extras It had everything that made it a great flash nice art, nice detail and nice graphics, so all and all this was actually a pretty good flash. Now making this better would be hard to do but i suppose maybe add more random humor, other then that this was pretty good, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Amusing flash here, Kinda entertaining it could use a touch more of some random stuff happing and some random humor, nice work though.

[Stick Wars]

A blast from the past

Now with this one i like the idea of "STICK WARS" and even though this is an older flash, it still did pretty good, you really did give it that star wars feel so even with sticks it was like i was watching starwars in a stick version haha, so nice effort there, and it does show the effort in relation to star wars, so after watching the movie abit it gave me a few chuckles, now with the green stick scene i thought you could have animated it abit more with his limbs and such, the animation was kind of short almost seems like you could have added more short clips all in one flash to make for a sort of multiple starwars clips of sorts. And last but not least some "SUBTITLES" wouldnt hurt for when phantom is talking. but i did enjoy this, it was entertaining and i got a few laughs out of it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
For starters you could "ANIMATE" the sticks "LIMBS" more, even have him move around more like into other scenes and such, you could have added more short clips all in one flash to make for a sort of multiple starwars clips of sorts. Now I mention Subtitles only because its not hard to understand or anything but its nice to have for viewers, cause sometimes something might be missed, just a little something extra that will make a better flash and such. but besides that hope those small tips help on this amusing flash.

[Stickman Can't Fight 2]

Random and amusing

OK so i found this one pretty amusing and there was alot of funny moments, the "MUSIC" was pretty kicking, i noticed alot of basic sounds as sound/fx, also the backrounds could have been better most were just white ones the episode here was not too short and kinda flowed along with some decent action and some random humor wich i reallygot a kick out of, maybe you should use smaller "STICK-CHARACTERS" so that you can show more detail in other areas aswell, But anyways a good and entertaining submission you have here, i look forward to more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more details here and there maybe some facial details on the sticks as they fight, and some backround detail could also happen.

guitan11 responds:

check out the latest episodes! i think i cover most of what you thought needed improvement ;)

[Stake..And die]

I think i remember this

I think i remember this from long ago, it was spretty neat, OKfirst of all this is notbad its really too short though, So maybe upgrade this with some longer scenes, maybe have him skate on differant parts of the sidewalk and such, The flash is just too short and just is over before it started now i did get some humor from it but maybe making it longer or with other short tunes would show abit more quality on your end, You may also want to do something with the "STICK" character as it was abit plain, After messing with this abit i found it to be a really decent and fun flash, allthough it did lack some stuff, it could still be better, So i have mentioned some ideas and even basic stuff that other flash like this one have so below in the improvments section may help good luck either way.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Since you had just Stick characters, I suggest making more Character like characters with full color facial details, This will show lots of effort in your character design, it tends to take more effort but the results will pay off alot. Just having a more full character you can do more with and improves on the quality of your flash as a whole. have him skate on differant parts of the sidewalk and such, but also give differant scenes like a city backdrop and such, Add a stop-Action code, it will stop the looping of the flash, also add some play and replay buttons so that the user can navigate better, the stop action code will stop the loop, and is easy to emplement it can be done thru the script in the flash code bars. I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see, just the one short single flash is ok but its over before it gets started and theres not much enjoyment out of that.

[Thief: Rent's Due]

Good flash here.

So for a stick flash the "ANIMATION" was very fantastic, even for stick characters, so that was the first great thing i noticed, how the animation flowed very nice, and just rolled into each and next seen easily, always nice to have that in a flash, and as for it being a robin hood it gave it some sort of adventure, and the content kept me interested, so nice job on those elements, The "VOICES" cameout pretty good aswell i thought, fit the parts perfectly, so if there are any tips at all i can give for making this better, i believe the onlything i can suggest might be that maybe broaden your ideas with more then just stick characters, give them more character style characters, with the animating you can really make the flash shine, anyways nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Great flash here, if any suggestion of tips and ideas to make it better maybe, Make Characters not the stick kind, while this does take more time and effort but it will make your flash better and with more details for the characters like color, hair clothing some facial detail, it will improve on this and your characters, something to think about for this or your next film, for improvment.

[Edible Castle #10]

Nice talant with this one

Now i like this one for a number of reasons, and its sad to see that it could be one of the last ones, but seems like it went out with a bang especially with names like tom fulp and such, the animation cameout well, and seemed to play along very well from start too finish, i was very impressed from everything with art and animation as it all flowed well together and made for something very entertaining so nice job all around, I love all the differant iconic names working on this and the list keeps going on, but in the end it was a welldone piece, and i do hope its not the last, its worked out for the best, as for improvments, i could see more of these being popped out, but besides that it was pretty good.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So always with improvments, i try and suggest some, but with this one it had all the right stuff, but if anything at all, more effects with backrounds, just an idea and that might bring more focus too those elements.