XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bentframe Ad - Mike Tyson]

Mike is always entertaining

Lol that was entertaining, i think i remember this movie, the voice clip was pretty good, there is room for some improvments such as the "LOOPING" you can ad a stop action code so it doesnt loop, also the backround needs some color or some scene, you may also want to give some animation to his head have it move around once in awhile, it just sitting there looked odd, but anyways these are just a few ideas, that could improve on this, also one last improvment point might be to have some "SUBTITLES" aswell, but other then those things mentioned, it was kind of amusing, if anything some more jokes could be placed in there, anyways nice effort here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was not hard to understand, but it would be a nice option to have some subtitles, gives the flash just that bit more effort, and incase anything was missed you have the text right there. some more jokes could be in the dialog, the backround needs some color or some scene, you may also want to give some animation to his head have it move around once in awhile, Try and fix that loop, this is an easy provess with some simple action script code, its called a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" now you will also have to add a stop and replay buttons so that the viewer can easily replay you flash aswell

[The Disgruntled Ice Cream]

Kinda corny but still amusing

So first off this starts off pretty good, and you have a good idea here with a disgruntled ice cream man, The animation seemed abit choppy. so you may want to speed it up and or increase the frame rate, you may want to add some subtitles aswell, A few good points is that you did put effort in the character but he could be smoothed out abit more, and i like the ending as it ended like a movie with the credits and music so while this movie has some good points, it could also use some more effort, keep at it. hope to see more of your stuff soon, just with abit more effort on your side though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
increase the frame rate as the animation seemed abit choppy. also the voice of the ice cream man was abit hard to understand so add some subtitles there. with that said it was ok.

[The Zit]

Kind of like a comercial

ok so that was pretty simple, it has some good humor about it such as trying to pop a zit and how it can kill lol, the film was kind of short though, the character was welldone, and the animation was ok, seemed like you could have taken the "STORY" further though like on an adventure to pop that zit, but your method of a comercial style was pretty good too if you ask me, it was a pretty well rounded film, didnt miss a spot except it could have been longer, so like i said the only issue i saw was could have been longer, but overall a good and entertaining flash here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the story longer, maybe showing how he couldnt or could get his zit.

[Man On Can]

Short and bazaar

OK so that was kind of interesting, and i guess you could say it fits the title as it was a man on a can, and in the end atleast he was able to get it in the can, his head exploding was kinda funny, i think this was all abit too short though, and it loops so these are a few things you could possibly make better with some improved effort, for an overall better outcome, but for the mostpart this was pretty entertaining, even on a bazaar side of things, on one last note you may even want to add some backrounds, anyways it was notbad and i got a laugh or two out of it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So this was abit on the short side, you should add more scenes and more stuff going on, some backrounds wouldnt hurt besides just the white wall, And last but not least You could place a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" it will help for the looping that the flash does, it will make it so that the user presses play and at the end replay, you will also need the propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons aswell, feel free to stop by the "FLASH" Forums on the newground BBS as they will help you on how to add this script into your flash.

[Sgt. Wanker 2 (fixed??)]

lol ok

This was amusing and it was over before it started, cant say i have seen the first but you say this is the better version, cant see that much, it was amusing and had some effort on your part, the first think i would suggest would be to add some sort of subtitles when the guy is chatting and wanking i suppose, But you need to also add more content make it longer give it more scenes and so on, so this was funny and seems like you were getting back at people but in the end it was still amusing and entertaining, just needs more work indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This would be much improved with some "SUBTITLES" it would help for others to understand abit more as sometimes its hard to understand whats being said, not a real big deal, but its nice to have subtitles as a feature on this flash. You flash would look more improved and it would help some others to understand it better. You can even have it as an optio to Toggle on or off, so that the users who dont need it have that option availble to them. But you need to also add more content make it longer give it more scenes and so on,

[Captain Low-Rez Ep.1]

Entertaining flash

This was actually pretty good, but seems like you could have added some better humor and funny to it, for the mostpart it was pretty entertaining, It was more in the animation being not as smooth as it could be, so smoothing out the animation from scene to scene is a start in the right direction, The graphics could be abit more "DETAILED" for a better outcome and all, What i did like that you did on this was a decent flash with some decent quality about it in a small filesize so props to you on that, anyways decent work here hope to see more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The animation seemed somewhat slow and choppy, so smoothing out the animation from scene to scene is a start in the right direction

[The Noob Adventures Episode 5]

Entertaining

So this was pretty interesting, the title kinda confuses me but maybe its meant to do that, The voices in this are pretty good, and really go with everything, have not really played the game that this is related to but seems like a fun and entertaing, game but seems like you had alot of effort with voices and scenes and seemed to all come together very nice, so i was pleased with everything, it was pretty good actually and glad i saw it, also glad this won daily feature, anyways nice job on this, keep up the great work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As for improving i think its just good as it is

[B-Lated ClockDay Post-It]

Nice work

Now before i get started on the details and such, I just wanted to say a few things in a more enlightening way of the flash, first off it was a refreshing flash entry and showed off some decent skills here and there and whatnot, So for what i got out of this it was pretty positive, allthough later you will find some helpfull ideas, tips and suggestions that may help make it even better so try them aout and never be afraid to try new stuff. So first great job on this "CLOCK-DAY" Entry its always a fun day and see what comes thru, The differant toons you have here are all kinda neat and quite enjoyble, so it was nice that you added a few short animations in one flash that is good quality controll, The animation here was abit differant i guess because it was more then animation but i do like how you presented this, it was interesting though, Audio was pretty good here there was a "WIDE" mixture of audio uses and such wich actually made it alright so that was something good, There was some "STATIC" Sounds with some of the music but it was little to non, and not a real issue, And i guess the whole "VIEW-SCREEN" could be larger it would allow for more detail to show and bring a tad more quality to everything. And so here we have something differant and with everything going on you really bring out the quality,So i am loving the unique style and it stillbrings some entertainment value and that was all a plus, and really just kept me interested from the getgo, so props to you on a decent flash submission here, hope to see more from you. Ok so here it is in a nutshell as some may say, thiswas notbad, and there is some room for making things better and or improving on a few points, both positive and negitive points in this flash, but i liked it all, but anyways here are one or two ideas and improving on this would be great.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So I actually found this to be an entertaining flash sumbmission, I did see a couple of things that could have been re-worked with a tad more effort, so i gone ahead to try and find some lacking points and do hope you consider looking into them as it will just add more quality, but anyways heres an idea or two. Some static was around but it was not a big thing maybe some looking into this would be great.and a larger view screen would be a plus.

ToonCastleTV responds:

Thanks for the very fair review - I'd very much like to try this type again sometime soon =/ but I think larger paper will have to be used, probably animation paper and I have a higher quality camera these days so maybe it will be epic if I have a chance

[Chrismissed DE]

Somewhat funny, and random entry

So first off let me start by saying its a pleasure to see stuff like this, given that its not perfect and is not the worst either and there are some areas that can be worked on for improvment but i have to admit that for the most of this i found it amusing and pretty good, so i was actually glad i had the time to check this one out, So with all that said Lets really get into this. I really like the randomness and strange feel you put into this that really got me interested, The jokes were amusing but not overly amusing, there are some areas with jokes that you could execute them better and just overall make them more "FUNNY" Random Animation you have here, i found the randomness to be a blessing if you will, it made it differant and more interesting, thats something you may want to go with more. The "STORY" here was welladpated and i took a liking to it right away and found that it was pretty good, keeps you interested and not easily bored, Graphics was prettygood, especially with some of the backrounds showed lots of effort on your part and detailed wffort if i say so myself. Effects is something that you could work on abit better, just a few effects here and there, maybe the blood, and some other areas throughout the film. And then there is the Animation and to me it "FLOWED"perfectly bringing everything together so i had no hangups there as you have shown lost of effort here and especially in the animation. Ok so with This and that said here on a few things, I came to find that this submission was kinda nifty, somewhat entertaining, but generally i found it to be a worth while of a flash movie, and i can see how you have put your efforts across the boards, and hope to see even more from you as this was a pleasent flash.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So here we go with ways and ideas to improve always the hardest part of the review for me as i dont want to nit pick on every detail but try for some of the basics, But there were a few spots thats could be cleaner, smoother and finner so Hope some of these tips do help and would be nice to see changes in the near future. So the "JOKES" could be funnier and come to gether better, they were needing better execution im guessing, And something on a small scale maybe some more effort on effects like blood, maybe some random props aswell.

ToonCastleTV responds:

Hey man thanks for the review! I definitly agree some of the drawings weren't the cleanest - a lot of the drawings were slightly rushed and back when I didn't care as much about my line quality which I think you'll find very much improved in future animations. It's true I spent a lot of time on some of the backgrounds, and you're right in thinking that this could have been pushed a lil more, I think I grew a lot making this piece I hope that you can see that with future work =)