Entertaining
Sometimes you see alot of flashes and once in awhile you get someting differant and unique like the one you are presenting here, this one is pretty interesting and has some good visuals that really get you into it. Haha this was amusing and I like the "MUSICAL" touch you added to this, I think some subtitles would have been really great for this piece. but overall this was good. To Produce and even Clarify this kind of flash would not beas easy or hard you have done what you needed to at the right times, and was a great Opportunity to see.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well I hope today I may have a tad bit of Influence on some possible fixes and clean ups here and there, Apply a few new options here, that may or may not Include the best of ideas, but you can always Tweak various parts of ideas and whatnot, Focus is the key.Subtitles are tricky but this flash seems like it could use some, not in a bad way or anything just that extra feature is nice to have in any flash especially when there is alot of talking among characters and such, so adding subtitles seems like this flash would do really great from.
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