XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ebonics Lesson]

Notbad kind of funny

Haha so i got a few good laughs out of this, this was pretty entertaining, the "VOICES" were great as was chris rock, the jpegs were amusing but thought you could have put abit more effort there with more real character work and not the "JPEGS" but it was still ok, You should also fix the "LOOPING" it tends to get anoying, and is an easy fix with a stop action code, But i did get some laughs out of this whole piece, very entertaining and amusing, very funny indeed, and along with the stop action code dont forget to add a replay button and this would greatly make this flash better but overall i found it funny and entertaining, nice job regardless,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The jpegs were amusing but thought you could have put abit more effort there with more real character work and not the jpegs, You could place a STOP-ACTION-CODE it will help for the looping that the flash does, it will make it so that the user presses play and at the end replay, you will also need the propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons aswell, feel free to stop by the "FLASH" Forums on the newground BBS as they will help you on how to add this script into your flash. Also if you do a search on the newgrounds flash games, for Stop action code you will turn up a bunch of tutorials on it and how to do it aswell as other great flash tutorials and how to do's good luck.

[TOME Episode 02]

Wow big file

Wow this was a pretty good flash here was a big file though i suppose that could be worked on but with the content and all it was well worth it all, especially since it won daily 2nd and even weekly 4th, There was lots of effort that went into this by others even so i can understand it needing much of the space it did and there was so much stuff in here i couldnt just pick my fave as they all gave me a good blast in it, I love all the sprite stuff aswell that really made it even more enjoyble, So this was afantastic flash and i enjoyed it from the start, hope to see more like this, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As for making this better i might suggest cutting the size abit but i understand it needed that much

[Sesshomaru-HappyBirthday]

Random

Ok so this one was an interesting one, kinda bazaar with his stuff flopping around, but it was amusing atleast, The animation was notbad though, and did flow evenly throughout the flash, the guy dancing was the other funny part, some more wacky moves in there and would have been better, and i can see some effort was put into it but also understand it was more of a spam flash just to get out there, so there are lots of areas of improvment but if it was mainly for the spam style i guess there wouldnt be any more effort to make it better, so with that note good luck on your next flash may it be better with much more effort then this one, anyways good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So theres alot to improve on such smoother animation, improved music and or sound/fx, and overall effort on character design.

[Madness Science3]

Needs more effort

The animation on this was abit sloppy and didnt always flow that well, The characters could use some better effort aswell, i did think this had some nice ideas and such so good efffort there, but the rest does need some work espcailly with how the animation flows and the character work aswell, There was some nice effects here so some nice effort once again, overall this was pretty decent flash, but once again needs character work and animation work. sound worked pretty well so that was another plus that made it all better, Nice view shots though, anyways decent flash here, but does need that mentioned effort, good luck on your next piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Making this better would only help you, so maybe some suggestions might be. The characters could use some better effort aswell, i did think this had some nice ideas and such so good efffort there, but the rest does need some work espcailly with how the animation, so work on those ideas and it should be good to go.

[Dragonzball P]

Amusing flash here

Now first off congrats on a few things the first is winning a "DAILY" second would be that you got a good quality flash here, and doing so with at a 2 meg file thats always impressive, so nice job there, So this was pretty good the animation alone was pretty fantastic, very smooth and flowed well, And the art was another link to the great animation, The whole theme of dragon ball z was great and was entertaining enough to get a few laughs out of it, I really enjoyed this one and hope others will too, it gives some good humor and gives the viewer some laughs so nice work all around on this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A good flash here and some great animation, didnt see much in improving, as it was pretty excellent stuff.

["...is Done" ROBOTDAY2010]

Fantastic Flash here

This was differant i have to admitt that the "ANIMATION" was very good very smooth and flowed smoothly, there was alot of differant stuff going on so it did have that random factor, All the woman were pretty sexy though, As for the music it was pretty hip and flowed very well with the animation and it was a jumping beat, And since it was for robot day this was pretty neat the robot was amazing and liked the focus from then on out, i was very impressed with this one, keep up the good work, and i do look forward to see more of your works, hope you bring us stuff as good as this if not better, anyways thanks it was a blast.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Now my only issue here was that it could have been shorter only because the 7 megs was abit long to load but once it got rolling it was pretty good.

[BONK!]

Entertaining and nice animation

I like this one because, it had more of a story, then i thought, it was very detailed and kept everything else going, The characters were really great with this one, the animation really ran smoothly aswell so that was a big plus on things, Also nice touch on the "HUMOR" there was a little bit of it but still made it worth while, i was highly enetertained with this, it was of high quality and good animation seemed to be very good from start to finish, i was very pleased with this and glad i had the chance to see it in its entirety, so awsome job on this, so if anything is to be improved maybe some more humor but like i said the humor was ok.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So some more humor could really work on this, but other then that this was alright.

[B in Arabic]

Decent for clock day

This was pretty good, another clock movie pretty entertaining, allthough it could use some improvments but being a clock movie its kinda good as is, but the animation was notbad, the whole arabic style was kind of interesting, kinda amusing infact, also the SBC was neat and a nice tribute of sorts, allthough this is pretty old flash i have to admit its still pretty good and has some good humor about it so i did get a few chuckles out of it, regardless it would be nice to see some improvments but again clock movies were not created to be the best quality of stuff, but anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not sure i have any suggestions for improving, since clock movies are best known for lesser quality, but this one was pretty good as is.

[<3 ToastedToastyToast]

Kind of interesting

This was interesting, kind of confusing at first but i thought it was interesting seemed to go on abit too long story wise so kinda dragged on towards the end, so you could possibly shorten the story abit somehow, the voice seemed abit anoying and all the clock characters was kinda neat, and in the end i guess there was a meaning to all this but was still kind of confused, now on the possitive side of things the art was pretty good, the animation could have been better and the story could have been shorter, So all and all this was notbad and i did get a laugh or two from it so nice job there and decent effort on this flash, keep it up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Making this flash better well there were a few options, shorter story as it dragged on towards the end, some smoother animation from scene to scene, and the anoying voice could have been better.