XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Super Wrestle Night Xviii]

Interesting but could use more effort.

And we have a good entry here, allthough it could use some better stuff here, There was some interesting parts, not great but still ok, but with some more effort this could be something special so take your time with it and add that extra effort and it will pay off in the long run, Well this was not exactly funny, it was ok and could be alot better, I beleive that the jokes could have been executed alot better as they were somewhat dry and just needed more better direction and so-on But that was one area that can really be improved on. This was kind of interesting, but seems to lose the interest level and again that comes to the fact that it needs more humor. but anyways good flash here but does need that extra touch. I like what you have presented here, there was some interesting elements to this, there was some quality to it, but i still feel it lacked some points, maybe that will come thu better with some more effort throughout, Now dont get me wrong i did enjoy this and had fun with it,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Now with some improvments this could be a nifty lil flash it could really be something but i would like to see some ideas and suggestions pushed through, and some of the ideas are pretty simple and basic and can make this bloom into something really special, so try a few ideas out. Needs more animation, needs some more humor and better direction of jokes and all, the whole flash actually needs more of abit of everything.

hillrdavid responds:

Very good. Thank you.

[TTA Episode 030]

An ok submission, does need more effort though.

Another good entry here, it was pretty interesting and there was some interesting visuals and some ok content, i thought there was some initial things that could have been better with some more detail, I suppose there is alot that could be made better, but overall i enjoyed it, This actually starts right off and is pretty good, there was alot of action in this and alot ofgood story to it so i commend you on the story part of thinhs, there was some issues with the sound quality being hard to hear so the subtitles was a nice touch, the graphics could have used morefine tunning aswell, but besides that this was actually pretty good, it did seemto drag on and onmaybe shortening it up somehow, but other then that i kinda liked it. After watching this flash and seeing it all had to offer my ending notes on this are that i was pleased with it, even in the end, some parts were better then others and some stuff could be better and even improved on,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So with this one there could be a few things to improve on, i will get to that shortly, but first i wanted to say there was some really good parts, you can start improving on this by taking some of the advice offered and use it go with it, make it work and make your submission shine from it, Sound quality is really bad, you should try and give it more quality maybe its the "MIC" or maybe the recording was too close to the mic, these are things that can be looked into and improved, Another issue was the "GRAPHICS" some of the orinal art was ok but your brush strokes are too thick so you should change that up abit.

[TTA Episode 058]

Could use some update from its old style

These types of flash entries have always had an interesting mistique about them, now while these types are not always the greatest or flashiest they bring something to the table, You have made it interesting and didnt bore me all that much so there is some good in them. Ok so with this one it was pretty interesting and with the whole click button to move along to the next scene that was ok, but thats more of the old style and you could revamp that to the more modern styles, and since its a movie remove the buttons to next scene and just let it flow like a movie would from scene to scene. Add some voices to the subtitle parts seems fitting since there is some animation going along with the subtitles. ok so the music was pretty good, but the flash was a let down due to the fact that you have to click to each new scene and ofcourse the real killer with there being no voice-ers, just some things to work on later. OK so seems like there was some time and effort put into this thats all fine and dandy but still i came across some thing that could be better, but overall it was a good flash entry and i can see it being upgrded for more enjoy for everyone watching.anyways nice job here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Things to improve on that is the question here, now as i came across this fine entry there were alot of nifty things you put together but there are also ways, and ideas that this can progress to even better, I will try and suggest some ideas for a better production of this but it takes some effort on your end, but i believe with some extra effort you can bring out the best of this flash, now here are some ideas. So as said before, remove the next button option and just let it flow more like a movie, the next button is more of the old style of flash use and could use more modern styles besides the whole next button option just boggs down the flash. also the "VOICES" well there was none durring the subtitle parts you should add some voices for the subtitles,

[ParodyRangersTheMovie 1-2]

This was interesting

It is a pleasure of mine reviewing this piece of work, there are some great things that happen in this one, dont get me wrong there are some improvments that can be made, but You have done a did piece of work here with everything that was happening on this. Before i get more into the review i just wanted to say congrats on the awards thats always some extra that comes along with the extra work here, so nice effort on the flas and acheiving the awards, So congrats on that. This was really something here especially withh all the contributers here, The characters in this are really good and the "VOICES" are pretty good too, they have some good emotion and some just some real good voice-acting so nice effort on the voices So there are some areas that could be improved like the animation was good but was also kind of choppy, you could also use some subtitles on this. and last but not least, the animation on the mouths were too fast animated, slow it down abit so that it actually matches up with the sound comming from the mouth. A fin flash animation here, a good submission entry here, you took your time with this one and made a few good visuals and made it fun for all who are watching and so on, but besides that its a pretty good entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This is where we come to some ideas and tips for improving on your fine entry you have here, you have done a pretty good job, but there are a few tips and tricks that could make this slightly better not just for you but for everyone else watching aswell, This could use some subtitles, it would help on a number of issues here the main being that its always nice to have some subtitles on voice work just for that extra effort on any flash, and second would help greatly if the voices are hard to hear. The animation seemed somewhat choppy and kept on skipping so maybe faster frame rate mayne smoother animation on your part, mouths moving too fast, alot faster then the sound comming out, maybe matching it up would look more realistic.

[The Steven Seagal Show #2]

Great action in this one

first of all this was pretty good now im not one for large file sizes butit was well worth it with all the quality and there was alot of "ACTION" in this and that was the best of it, I also want to take this time to give you a big congrats on the awards you won for this flash it's always a plus on that, so congrats, hope to see more awards come your way. I also love that this has steven segal in it, you can never go wrong with Steven hehe, also liked the bill clinton parts aswell,s o this flash had it all, celebs to presidents really fullfilling and very entertaining but most of all some great action scenes, The ending was even better then everything else, you really put your thinking cap on this one, Now while this was a pretty big file like i said well woth all the fun and such, so im not gonna gripe on the size, since it was one hell of a movie flash. and cant wait to see what else you can come up with in this type of stuff, i look forward to more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
so as to improve on this piece i would say some size reduction, but i think it was pretty fantastic as is could even be longer if added more celebs and such.

[The Walking Derp]

Nice parody

A good flash here i thought, its interesting how this starts off, pretty interesting, and i got some good entertainment value from this, This was a nice and funny parody here, Im not too familuar with all the content of the show but i like the "HUMOR" and gave off a few laughs so that was pretty good and there was alot of silly stuff going on here, the "ANIMATION" was pretty good too could be sharper at times but it was alright i thought, The voices were kinda hard to understand, but after a bit you could understand what was being said, so nice job there but maybe more clarity there next time, And so besides all the above this was pretty good, some nice entertainment value, some god and bad points but with a few adjustments it could be better so anyways nice job nice effort here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
There are many ways to improve on this, and i have some advice here and there a few tops and a few adjustments should make this a top notch flash, so try a few of the ideas and and let the flash become even better. The voices were abit off at times, and the animation could be better, other then that this was pretty good.

[Pencilmation: Egypt]

This was pretty interesting

I found this to be pretty interesting, it has a good story and the "VOICES" were pretty good andhad some good quality to it and all, It was pretty entertaining and amusing i thought, I guess there was some other episodes to the series, and i should check those out but this was pretty good and some nice content great voices and good. i would have liked to see more dialog on this whole episode but it was pretty good as is, so with that all said, great stuff very entertaining and great story, i look forward to more, So while i liked this flash there are some good and bad about it, i went over it abit but have suggested some more ideas below hope it helps, its not major but could use more of the effort on little stuff here and there, anyways hope it helps as this was actually a pretty good flash.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Hard to suggest anything on this one as it was great, maybe some better dialog going on but it was all good if you ask me.

[Moisture Care]

Great ending

I thought the best part on this was probably the "ENDING" and you had some great build-up aswell, very nice indeed, aswell as being one of the most funny and amusing parts, so great job there, The animation was pretty "SMOOTH" and just went from one scene to the next with ease and flow, so another awsome job there it was pretty good, So all and all this was a great little toon you have here, lots of "HUMOR" very entertaining and pretty amusing i had lots of lots of laughs with this so great job and im sure people will love this years to come, so with that all out there keep making these awsome flash-works as i and the whole community here really enjoy them, as for improving on this, its hard to say but i guess if anything make them a tad longer with more random stuff going on aswell.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some longer scenes, add some more humor and add more "RANDOM" humor.