XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pico: The Shitty Power]

Very Intense

That was very nicely done. There was alot of great value to this Movie, but there were some weaker points that could be addressed aswell, that will be explained later but as for a start to this, this was pretty impressive to start. And eventhough im just getting started on this review I must say it was apleasure watching your flash, it was entertaining. Well I must say that this was very intense and started off right away, I like this action packed flick, keep up the good work. I really enjoyed this flash and all that you have presented here, there was alot to see and it was overall fun so great job all around below I have left a few ideas that may help to improve on this flash, so keep up the good work and I look forward to more. from you and more of this type and style you did here, more effort never hurt either.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So I have some Proposed Changes maybe you can Visualize and Re-Invent some of them So I have some ideas on your production here, But it takes some effort on your end, but I believe with some extra effort you can bring out the best of this flash, now here are some ideas. I thought everything was pretty good, the music you had at the end was great maybe that should be throughout the whole movie instead of just the end.

~X~

[McCain/Palin Voters]

It was an interesting take

Notbad of an animation entry here, it had alot of style alot interesting stuff going on, The animation and art style reminds me of some old great flashworks from awhile ago, but what I liked about this and that one was that it was a unique piece, and very stylish just like this one is, I will Recommend some extras and some slight improvments on this if it needs ofcourse. I will say that this was an interesting take on things, wish we knew what we know now back then lol but anyways the racist jokes are ok but I wouldnt label that on everyone but still an amusing flash here, I really took a liking to this flash, and grew on me there was lots of nice stuff on this, and overall got a good feeling from it and was great to see, now ofcourse it could be better and with some more effort it can be just that, so hope soon to see more of this and much more of your work, anyways untill then keep it real. and keep making these kinds of nifty flash submissions.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I Wrote up a few ideas Despite if they will get used, but some of them you may Re-Invent into some positive results, So anyways Hope all the tips, and ideas helped, For the mostpart this was pretty good and it has potential to be even better with such suggested improvments. here is what I came up with. Maybe more simple jokes then just all racist types the race card is easy to use but im sure humor can come from all directions.

~X~

[A Tournament for a Bride]

This was cute

Ok so I found this flash to be pretty interesting and slightly entertaining, its one of those flash pieces thats grabs your attention and keeps you there, I like the style and direction you took with this. Some really nice animation and character art, it has that "CUTE" factor that some flashes bring to the table, the sounds and voices are great but there was some "STATIC" that could be cleared up maybe it was the "MIC" or something. nice cute flash here though. So with all that said, this was pretty decent, allthough it could use more stuff and such, also suggested below, it was still pretty good just needs a tad more effort but it will pay off just keep working on it, and always do what is fun to you because that will make for a good flash so anyways keep up the awsome work, creativity is your friend.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I will enlighten you with a few tid bits of knowledge I may not be perfect in my reviews, but I do have some insight on how things can be improved so here is some things to think about. there was some slight static issues with voices but not too big of a deal.

~X~

[SchneckLand Shortz #1]

Cure lil Flash

I like this it had alot of good points some things could be worked on and such, but you gave it all the elements that I come to enjoy in flash like this, so great start here on something pretty interesting, lol ok so I would say thats a pretty short, short, not really a bad thing but maybe adding other short, shorts would be a big plus on this, but it was an amusing flash. After messing with this abit I found it to be a really decent and fun flash, allthough it did lack some stuff, it could still be better, So I have mentioned some ideas and even basic stuff that other flash like this one have so below in the improvments section may help good luck either way. and may all your flash-works comeout with as much effort as possible.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This is the type of flash that you can fully go with imagination and whatnot, So here are some options and a few tricks along with some extras that could go along ways. A better "TITLE" page not the logo but the white backround seemed too bland. A short animation you have here, maybe abit too short I would say to improve on the flash as a whole either make this one longer with much more content or, add more shorts in here such as about 3-5 short short animatins that way it doesnt seem like a waste of one flash space and also you get more viewing for alot of your work instead of just one piece

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[Broly The Legendary SS]

Interesting

Nice entry you have here, I realize you were aiming for a certain style with this, and thats cool and it has come out kind of unique, it was an interesting flash submission, and I was drawn to this, so I was not easily bored with this, would like to see more of this and see it go furhter and even deeper, while still keeping some quality to it. ok so this was interesting, the art on the characters was pretty impressive and the "EFFECTS" were even better, all around a good job here, this did seem kind of short more like a "TRAILER" of shorts. I really look forward to seeing more stuff like this, untill then keep working on great stuff. nothing else to say except keep up the effort in this one and future flash stuff you have planned.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I Encourage you on some of these ideas, it will ad more Exposure So there can be alot of different things you can do to improve on things But maybe all this really needs is some tweeks and some possible new situations but maybe you can try a few suggested things. I would ad a tad more bit of content to give more detail on whats going on or going to see, something to give the viewers something to be waiting for in any type of full version.

~X~

hrechkaness responds:

I feel like you tried your hardest to actually be NON descriptive lol. Still holding the title for number one newgrounds reviewer? I think you've done a couple of my animations in the past. Hope this wasn't just bot spam tho.....

[Starbattles Part2]

Haha

Haha this was amusing for sure, I belive that some "SUBTITLES" would be great for this, you have some nice characters here and nice theme with star trek and rapping up music, lol.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
One thing I have found that vocals are great in any flash but subtitles along with those vocals make it a much better experience, So this is something you should think about adding, and it would be a nice option and make your flash abit more quality based. anyways nice effort.

~X~

[999]

lol ok

Well this was interesting the pre loading flashing was amusing I suppose, the best advice here is just ad more content lol, it was amusing though,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as stated above this needs much more content and removing the flashing would be a point in the right direction.

~X~

[BigRich16 Tribute]

Um ... OK

Well ok this was a tad odd it seems to be a "LOOP" of a very very short flash no animation at all on this one at all just some images changing around so there can be some work put in here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So here with this one it lacked some visuals and more animation so you can add more of that to give it more of a fuller flash feel. So this one seems to have a Repeating Loop and while that may be amusing it tends to just be anoying but you can fix that by adding a Stop Action Code in the flash script, just something to think about. anyways good luck on your flash journey.

~X~

[Guns of the Awesome]

Funny stuff

So first off let me start by saying its a pleasure to see stuff like this, given that its not perfect and is not the worst either But it was Cleverly done, And there are some areas that can be worked on for improvment but. Lol well this was funny and amusing flash. it takes me back to playing those games back in the day, but as for this film it was good art design, nice voices and overall fun humor. With all that said you cando alot more with this I have made a few suggestions and I do hope they help to improve on this, now dont get me wrong you have something decent here and the effort shows but could still use a few more additions of stuff and so on, so go ahaead and give some new ideas a try. And hope to see some of those changes in the future or even on something new you may be working on.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And so this one kind of reminds me of a birthday party you can never be too sure of things, so you need to prepare, Just like in flash checking everything is a must and here are a few things that could be checked out. Hmm hard to improve on something that is very good, but if anything add more funny moments maybe even have a "BEHIND-THE-SCENES" section or even "BLOOPERS" anyways nice work.

~X~