XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Once upon a time]

Notbad of an animation

Well you have something interesting here, it was interesting and you added some nifty visuals, i really like the direction you took here and it all made for a decent little flash movie. This was a strange one ofcourse, but i found the animation to be pretty interesting it was somewhat short but i guess you were going more for the humor of the joke and all, i thought this could have gone a little longer though, but anyways you have a good theme here, and i did get some laughs from it, but anyways good stuff here. And so an entertaining experience we have come up with here, there are some things that you could do to make it better but ill leave that for later, but for the mostpart i was entertained with your movie entry here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So i may have an idea or two or just a suggestion that could help to improve on this, but you dont have to take my advice at all but i thought i would throw out some small ideas for your mind to ponder on, so here you are and hope it helps. So with this one you could probably make it longer, i could even see this going into a series like a number of things that happen to the pig but thats just one idea.

AskCrank responds:

Thanks for the long review i will take it on board

[What the fuck, Japan?]

Something differant

So first of all before i start on this review of this fine flash entry i must say it was pretty good and i like how you presented it with lots to see and some interesting aspects to it, there was some interesting but yet neat imagery on this flash movie, Ok so now lets get to the details of this movie and i can already tell you its pretty good. So this was one of those movies thats its yay or nay just because on the content and subject matter and so on, But i think you pulled itoff well especially with how everything was animated and the Japanese thems aswell, Theres alot of content and alot going on you bring an intense visual of animation and visuals, Sometimes i was confused because of how fast everything was going on, but in the end i had a blast with this one, uti guess its better to laugh and enjoy then be sad, so in that aspect of things it was alright to joke on tragedy allthough we the people tend to do that alot, so i just take it as some amusing humor, inwich you did bring to the front-view of this, so nice effort there, But anyways good work on a decent animation and i guess a big "CONGRATS" on the "UNDER-DOG" award, its nice but wish it could have been better. And so we come to the end of the review, a decent flash works here, some nice and entertaining stuff to see, and while it was not perfect of even the best i have seen on this site, i must still say that i was pleasently pleased with the outcome and glad it had some humor to it, so on that astrospect of things it was a decent flash movie submission.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And here we go with trying to make it better then it is with a few improvments sometimes this is the hardest points of suggestion as sometimes some flashworks dont need touching but in somecases they do, so i will do my best here to pinpoint a few ideas and tips of improvment for either this and other projects, so try a few new things and let it shine. As for this flash of works it was pretty good, the content was iffy but it wasstill a good flash entry and i was pleased with the outcome.

[3D, you must see!]

Needs more to it

So for a movie submission, This had its good and bad parts. For the most part, the good out-weighed the bad, so it was an movie entry I would recommend to others in an instant, It was a simple submission / movie but still enjoyed what you have here. Hmm so this was sort of interesting, this little "LOOP" may not seem like much but its still entertaining its a small nice visual, some more effort could be done, like give some more visuals and such, or some random movie based on the nifty loop, but it was pretty good i thought. What's also amazing is how there are so many good elements in this, yet it isn't a very complicated movie entry, I will say that I am You just never knew what was going to come up next in this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was actually not bad, but could use a few things, to spice it up somewhat, so below i have suggested some positive advice some new ideas and even some old ideas. Add some depth and some more nifty visuals. needs more basis, more depth, needs some sort of random movie in the middle somehow.

[The Mourner 2]

Amusing, but needs more.

I am generally not a fan of these types movies but it had some un-expected movie fun and some nice visuals. It turned out to be actually fairly enjoyable. I appreciate you looking for originality in your work as this seemed like it. so great movie entry here. Alright this was kind of nice, the "MUSIC" was nice but kind of scratchy, and there was not much here, also this "LOOPS" so you may want to add a stop action code to stop that looping also some sort of dialog would also be great, but other then that this was an alright flash movie. It's Flash movies like this that makes me realize it's a great site and a great upload you have here, it's decent in its own right. but it's actually not that bad. It reminds of some good quality, flash that i may have seen before, with a little buzz to it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
There are a few Things to take a second look at, and i will get to those, but i would like to take this time to suggest a few ideas, maybe some advice and so on, and i hope you use it to the best of your knowledge. You could place a STOP-ACTION-CODE it will help for the looping that the flash does, it will make it so that the user presses play and at the end replay, you will also need the propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons aswell, feel free to stop by the "FLASH" Forums on the newground BBS as they will help you on how to add this script into your flash. Also if you do a search on the newgrounds flash games, for Stop action code you will turn up a bunch of tutorials on it and how to do it aswell as other great flash tutorials and how to do's good luck. Needs a tad more detail and such. add some dialog some more scenes with more character talking and so on going on.

[Mix Masta Monkey]

odd and strange

I had fun with this and while not revolutionary, I love the idea of itself. I have been writing this review and come to enjoy this, It didn't seem to go with a general theme, just kind of random. It was interesting that way. Well this one was kind of strange, i like the fact that it has your music in it, you could even throw that in the audio portal but then again this is an older flash entry, you could have atleast added more "CONTENT" as there was just the one scene, but i guess it was more for the audio and such, was also abit short, so there are clearly some things that could be worked on here. Wow, that was a pretty Good flash for what it was worth. I like how you don't make it too flashy or anything, because you simply don't need to. It's a good Entry for its simplicity.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
fans of this will appreciate it more, If you cleaned it up maybe added some new things just a few anyways, so i have gone ahead and suggested a few ideas for you to look at and try and implement into your system. So there are a few things you could do to make this better, add more scenes maybe have the character dance in differant ways and not just the flipping over, so it also needs some more contentand with that could be longer aswell.

[HaxerDewd Rv MACNERD]

Kind of short

Wow, it's not often that you stumble across a flash that's so intriging like this one you have here. This really makes me want to go back and think and check this one out again, this is something that i would suggest to friends to see. So first of all nice "INTRO" it kinda was interesting, well while tis was an older flash it was alright it was kind of "SHORT" though so there are some extra you can throw in, i mean it was over before it started so there could jsut be more overall depth toit, the sound/fx wasnotbad, and the music was alright, but i still found it to be somewhat entertaining, hope to see more soon. It's great to see so many different things. on this fine website of newgrounds and you get to see stuff like this one you have now, so props to you on something pretty interesting, So as i run through your flash more i get more excited and so on.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would probably say it could be a little longer. Granted, length never stopped something from being great before. I knew I was in for a doozy with thisone. The film could be longer with more content more scenes and just more stuff going on.

[The Ugly Girl]

Kinda funny

Alright you do have something here i was actually pretty impressed with what you have going on here, i did however think some extras could be added and you could change some things, but overall you have done well on this. Haha ok allthough this is kind of short i have found it pretty amsuing, its really short though so you should for sure add some more content maybe some new scenes and such. allthough this was kind of old i still found it to be pretty funny and entertaining, infact i tend to like these older flash stuff as they had some good originality to them, so nice job on that could use some more work though, some subtitles wouldnt hurt. And that was that the ending was good as we do come to the ending of this and the submission i was more impressed with how you ended it so good job there and hope to see more of your interesting and entertaining work. so keep them comming.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So this is where i may suggest some small tips and possibly some suggestions, i hope you will take a small look into some of the suggestions as they should help and if not atleast i have tried to suggest some positives. Alright so for me i thought this could have used some subtitles it will make it someting extra and doesnt hurt to have some, its just one of those little things that make it a much better flash experience. its really short though so you should for sure add some more content maybe some new scenes and such.

[Baman Piderman]

Something differant and fantastic.

How to start off this review of this interesting yet mystery of a flash here, you have alot going on here, some stuff i wasnot on par with but its how it was presented so you do have something decent here and i quite enjoyed what you have presented, Hard to really judge this one, but atleast i can say that the animation was pretty good, and you had a good flow of animation from here to there so that was a pleasure, Seemslike this doesnt really need much improvment as its pretty solid, so you did pretty good on this one i thought, if i may suggest anything maybe add more to it, more story and morerandomness to it making for an even better and interesting style. but anyways thats all upto you, And now the end is near in my review, while i had a fun time reviewing this i still had some confusion here but thats ok ill watch it a few more times, but for the mostpart this was notbad interesting on some parts and could be somewhat betterin others, Congrats on the awards here, that is another little nifty thing from the website that gives credit were it is deserved, and since you won some awards for this entry you deserve some praise and grats on that so congrats on the awards.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Getting to some improvments is always a hard one, but there is always room for some sort of improvments anywhere actually so with your flash i have submitted a few ideas and maybe some advice unless i dont feel there is need for any in that case you have probably done pretty good in that area, Some suggestion maybe would to make it longer add more stuff, more random stuff and so on.