XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[BiteyCastle Christmas]

Amusing

It was all rather simple looking. But maybe thats the key with this one as the simple look was actually very catchy and made it kind of nifty, it was not too complicated and seemed to just flow well from one spot to the next, so I would say that the animation was notbad and this was a decent submission. While this was very short it was still interesting and the animation was very smooth as was the art aswell, an all decent flash here. This was a Definite good submission it had some good outcomes and some good overall quality about it, It was Intensely good and amusing so props to you on this, You showed good Focus and direction on this entire piece,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ok so here is a big extravaganza, and as always with something big like this including your movie here There is room for some improvment and so in this help section i may have some advice for you in that area. Making this longer and with some added content would be a big plus.

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[Ackbar : That's My Fulp]

Different

Lol ok it was nice seeing tom and wade, and this was the collection page epsiode nice job there and congrats on the award, I think well deserved.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The flash was short, you should think about adding much more content, making it longer maybe if you dont want to go that rout you could add a combination of short flashes all together, almost like a portfolio of sorts, but you should do more then just have a really short toon and nothing else.

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[Ackbar : FACE HOUSE]

ok

Well this one started off different wich was nice and refreshing, you actually have a tad more story in this one but again could be longer, I like the naration on this, very funny stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well for this one since you added extra stuff maybe this one just needs some subtitles.

~X~

[Ackbar : Mama Luigi]

Haha

LOL funny dont get me wrong these do bring some humor just wish they were longer and I love the "SIGNFELD" theme in this one, also could use some subtitles aswell.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some subtitles for that extra effect.

~X~

[Robotic Octopus Snowman]

Kind of short

I was impressed with this animation, there was some Lavish attention to detail and that certainly Was a plus on the effort side, and made for some good visuals and brings in some good quality about this whole piece so really nice job there, and while I continue on with thid flash movie I find it to be a good quality experience and look forward to more. This was actually really good allthough it was a tad short but you did have some very good smooth art and that made up for the shortness, a decent little holiday flash here. So the content and effort you have put fourth here really solidifies the commitment and passion that you have put in these kinds of movies types and you really bring some joy to the fans of this type of flash.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
But anyways here are some random, or even new options of ideas, and use it go with it, make it work and make your submission shine from it, Despite some issues there are some good quality points about this. Only thing here would be to ad content to stretch it out just a tad more, other then that it was pretty impressive.

~X~

[Ackbar : Halo 3 Beta]

Hmmm

Well that was another interesting I do like the humor on things here it really makes for ome amusing fun but these would be much better longer and whatnot, so try adding more something atleast more story.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And well I have probably said it a few times needs more story and content.

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[Out Of Control]

Nice

So I thought I would checkout this little Movie of yours seems like It does have some potential to go even further then it represents, It has some decent quality to it, has some clever points, has both weak and strong points. This was a really great song and I feel it fit the content, some of the art style could be cleaned up somehow, more shades and details would also help. I am thinking that with this prticular song you could have had more of some darker art color tones and whatnot, anyways nice flash here. Now here is another piece of flash that has some decent Potential you are a Visionary of this Industry in the way of bringing some good effort along with some nifty ideas to the screen.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I Encourage more improvments and allow this to have more Exposure and it will effectively come out just right. You will make it to the top for sure, but before you do you may want to ad a few things aswell as make some changes and it will be all for a positive change so go with some changes. the art style could be cleaned up somehow, more shades and details would also help.

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[Ackbar : Eviction]

Another funny episode

But these are way too short I would suggest adding a lot of these short flicks and put them all together in one flash works, but thats just an ideas.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A very short toon you have here, too short if you ask me, you can add more shorts to this one so that theresmore to see, but just the one short seems like a waste, besides with more shorts all together more people will enjoy it much more, and allowing for a better outcome and score.

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[Hey Osvald]

LOL

Ok this was funny and I found it to be pretty amusing with just a little bit of content, so my advice here is ad more content give something to build up to the punch and whatnot, more story all around.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
making it longer and having a bit more of a plot would make it that much better just a tad more content would be great here, its ok but just needs more.

~X~

[Ackbar : Epic 1 of 3]

Funny

Lol ok this is funny and amusing this is very random and silly lots of stuff going on and honestly im confused but its funny, could use some subtitles though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well could use some subtitles for sure.

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