XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ackbar : Balls]

Wow

These really get really short that was not much more then a few seconds or something lol it was amusing though just way too short.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I can see you adding much more to these give them a tad bit more quality while keeping the humor of it, or add a whole bunce of short ones in one film.

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[Shorts To Wear Pants To]

Interesting

This Animation It was alright, It is certainly better than a lot I've seen in my time on this website, and is better then I had expected from this submission, and feeling more lively would have been a major improvement here. Hmm well this was interesting kind of funny and amusing, the sound and voices were really good top notch actually, the animation was not bad either. But anyways with all that said this was a pretty decent flash again had all the elements thats makes up something good and amusing so I was pleased with this, cant think of much else besides that it was pretty solid with me, anyways keep up the decent work. I do look forward to see what you can come up with next, and on that note pretty decent submission here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So I have a few Recommendations that could make this more improved and better, there is just a few things here and there that could make it better and much improved. so good job so far cant wait for whats up next. But I have to say that this is one of those that may not need any extra touches as you did well here.

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[There she is!!!]

Nice work

It doesn't look like much effort would have been needed It is actually a good Concept you have here and I can see how it can be much better, the overall feel of this submission is good and enjoyble, does need more effort but as this review is just getting started, I feel very stronly on this one and can tell its just a start of better things to come. The song seemed very fitting to this and the movie itself was fantastic it all mixed very well, Props to you on getting some awards, that was nifty but was well worth it and really showed the quality you put into this. so nice job there but maybe more clarity there next time, And so besides all the above this was pretty good, some nice entertainment value, some god and bad points but with a few adjustments it could be better.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Hmm I think you did very well with this one and no changes are needed.

~X~

[Ackbar : BBQ strikes back]

haha

ok that was funny with the chainsaw and all but extremly short, but I still found it to be entertaining, the "CREDITS" were really long so that was a nice touch lol

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
First of all adding subtitles is a plus, Another thing i noticed was that this was just way too short, and you have a few options here, add more to your flash, more scenes more info, more content, and or add this along with other short flashes all in one flash so that there is abit more depth to the whole flash.

~X~

[Ackbar : Coming Soon]

LOL

This was funny these actually remind me of the way old newgrounds was and always having stuff like this it was pretty impressive kind of short but still entertaining.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
WEll as always adding some subtitles would be great.

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[Call of Awesome: W.A.A.]

lol cute

Well this was cute especially the end haha, but I do like the black and white style made it even better, I could see this winning an award or two but guess it didnt but was still a funny short, I wouldnt mind seeing a tad bit of color though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Now while its just Black and White. it wouldnt hurt to add a touch of color, maybe just a focus spot here or there, just odd stuff that could be colored not the whole thing just a touch of color here and there. Give it a try, the black and white is fine but a touch of color might even make it better.

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[Lemon Demon's "Bad Idea"]

Impressive

This movie shows that you have a lot of potential. and that this flash movie has alot of potential aswell, Now you only need some better tools, Or more improved outcomes with the tools. Really good video here like a music video, and the song was great fit well with the animation wouldnt mind some subtitles but it was a pretty good piece here. On an ending note to the review part of things here, it was ok, could use some extras and more stuff here and there, but I got alot from this, it has an entertaining valie and some good quality points but also need that extra push, but overall I found it to be alright. Never forget improving is just the first step to making it even better, anyways nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This has good Potential And I really like your direction in this piece, just could use more of a push in some areas so think about improving on some of the lacking areas. I saw some points of cleaning up. Perhaps a few random ideas as well. This could use some subtitles, it would help on a number of issues here the main being that its always nice to have some subtitles on voice work just for that extra effort on any flash, and second would help greatly if the voices are hard to hear.

~X~

[The Neverhood]

Interesting stuff

Well I guess this is more like a slide show then anything else but it does give you an idea of what the game is about, I wouldnt mind if you added more "INFORMATION" on what the game is about though not just visuals, but nice clay slips here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs more information on how the game is played and whatnot, not just visuals.

~X~

Ratcaller responds:

Oh boy! I honestly DID NOT expect anyone to still watch my stuff anymore xD
Thanks for the review anyways, despite being it almost historical now.

[Good Time Merry Boys 5]

Silly

Well this one is silly but thats what made it stand out I like what you do have here, even if its simple and silly and the "MUSIC" really played well with this fit the content very well, anyways nice job here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well with this one I wouldnt mind seeing some better graphics and maybe some smoother animation, or atleast speeding up the animation somehow.

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[Mario's Castle Calamity]

Entertaining

Well this was pretty entertaining, I like all the different clips and all, and you added some really funny ideas and whatnot, always great to see mario bros stuff never gets old, anyways nice stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Only thing I would do here would be to slow down between clips.

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