XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Penny the Possessed Baby!]

Haha cool idea

A nifty movie idea here, and i took a good liking to it so i will look forward to whatelse you can make from this and other stuff, but as for this one. you did a great job, allthough some parts could be better, and you can throw in other ideas aswell, LOL this was pretty interesting, and it was a cool idea, and good concept, it was not very long, but i guess thats what you can do when it was an idea of a toy, it was a funny one though, not sure how one can make this better as you have covered all the bases, but like i said its a good idea, it was funny and amusing, aswell as some nice animation and good humor to go along with, anyways keep up the good work. The idea was great the effort was plenty and you have made a good product, i wouldnt mind seeing more stuff like this, and hope to see what else you can make for us to be entertained, i do admire your efforts here though, and hope you aspire to make even better stuff,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as i write this up i cant helpbut think of the many ways it can be better and improved, it probably doesnt need much, but maybe a few changes here and there, and ill just suggest a few ideas and hope they may work, but regardless it was a good flash. So maybe adding more scenes with other ideas, more characters and other options for the toy, but it was a good idea i thought.

["The Worst"]

Wow unique

So with this entry i found this one interesting and unique as some would say, Now ofcourse there are some things that you could implement in making things better, and that would give this an even better touch about it but thats for later, Wow this one is a "UNIQUE" one its has a whole differant feel of graphics and visuals that are so differant from anything i have seen sofar, It sort of ended kind of short but it was still interesting, not sure if it had a story but the visuals and animation after that wre very impressive and incredible, so some things could push this over the edge like more of a story maybe some subbies. other then that i thought it was an alright flash animation. And so there we have it i found this whole entry to be a number of things, you gave it a little bit of everything including some good quality so thats whati liked and i liked the effort you put forward, keep doing that,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
OK so not everything can be improved on to perfection but i think i may have a few ideas that may help improve on this and if not then im all ok with the outcome you had, it was all a pretty good entry though, there could have been abit more buti liked it. So as suggested above in review this could use some subtitles to start off with, giving some sort of text to what was going on and such, butnot needed but would be a nice feature of any flash for subtitles. More of a "STORY" could beplayed in here aswell, but it was a unique flash regardless.

[Hank Hanky: Your Cat]

This was interesting

An interesting flash submission you have here,Now i cant say that i have liked everything here but you really brought out some nifty and interesting aspects of this and made it much more enjoyble then i had originally expected, so for that nice work, This was interesting and you had some interesting video clips in there mixed with art and animation so that was pretty nifty, a good variaty and mixture of stuff, so a plus indeed, The "VOICES" were pretty good aswell, so overall this was amusing and well rounded, and i had some good chuckles so this was pretty entertaining and amusing, as forimprovments it is pretty good and no real issues. And on that note you have done a good job here you presented a decent flash, some good effort and a suprisngly interesting idea here so you are alright especially when contributing as you did with this one, now i can see more comming from this and future stuff,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
By this point of the review, we come to that aspect were i may or may not suggest some ideas but if i do they will be some needed aspects that can make things better, So maybe a few adjustments could be made here and there, So for improvments i thought everything was pretty solid, if anything it could be longer, maybe even some sub titles but its a pretty solid piece.

[Parallel Memories: Ep 1-1]

Great design

The animation is nice but not awesome, Doesnt mean it cant be awsome its actually decent work and is in a pretty goos shape of quality, B utit still needs some Tweaking there and here and all around for some better outcomes It does have some interesting and entertaining things. all about it though and thats what drew me to this. I would like to say that just the menu alone and all the extras from scene selection to settings and so one was a very good idea and it gave this flash a more "FULLER" feel and touch so props to you on that aspect of things, Now as for the actual animation, The "AUDIO" to me was not the best of quality, there was some slight scratchy sounds with mic it seemed, maybe that can be looked into, The "VISUALS" are really good though, you showed some impressive results and the "SPRITE" and or "PIXLE" work was really good The "STORY" was ok could have had more depth and more story to the characters. And with this flash it was actually pretty good, iliked the effort you put forward on this but there are still a few more things here and there that could make it even better, ihave posted a few ideas i hope they help to improve on this so good luck, and i hope to see improvments soon, or in the near future. But untill then this was a decent piece of flashworks.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So while this was a pretty nifty flash movie here there were some tweaks and changes that can be addressed, as mentioned throughout the review aswell as here, you can put that extra improving for an overall better outcome with some more quality added, so here are some thing i found lacking and or needeing some changes. audio was abit low quality some scratchy sounds in the recordings it seemed, someting you can look into later i suppose.

Pienkaito responds:

Outstanding review right there.
I'll keep the things you mentioned in mind and correct those flaws as good as I can.

Thank you very much for your constructive review.

[Olifant]

Great graphics and detail

I certainly Have found that this entry was amusing, entertaining but most of all it kept me wanting to see more, not for the quality but because it was a little something differant then most of the other flash movies that do come thru here, so I do like that you have put the efort to not be the same but change it up abit. The visuals and graphics on this are great the shades and texture and how they moved off of eachother as the animation flowed off from one scene to the next, but overall i found the design of characters and "RANDOMNESS" of the story and plot was great there was no real story but you had a unique style of flash and animation here, it was pretty good i thought, could be longer for more of that effect but i generally had some fun with this. You have an idea here and something decent here, i had fun with this one but it could use some more effort as suggested below and above and hope those ideas help to make it even better for all, but even as it is it was pretty decent if you ask me, keep up the decent efforts though. And hope to see more of your flash-works sometime soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ok so here it is in a nutshell as some may say, thiswas notbad, and there is some room for making things better and or improving on a few points, both positive and negitive points in this flash, but i liked it all, but anyways here are one or two ideas and improving on this would be great. This whole thing could be better in the sense that itcould be longer and some sort of more story to it aswell, maybe take these characters into some adventure show off more scenes more backround drop backs aswell.

[The Elephant in the Room]

Great flash animation

Well so its not all the time you see flash works like this especially in a movie form so i was actually suprised with how you presented this and how you let it flow from start to the end, So in that aspect of things it actually does get off to a decent start. I wish there was more submissions like this as they present something unique and differant. So as i do get started on this movie i am getting good vibes from it so keep that up. Haha well i really liked this, it was pretty good, i really liked the "STORY" you had here, it was pretty good, and kept you wondering what was going to happen next, the idea and story were my fave part of this one and really glad i saw this one it was pretty interesting, and the "ENDING" was great aswell, so nice job indeed, now as for improvment, im thinking you can use the elephant somehow, and make more stories with it, but anyways good stuff here. And soonce again this was a decent Flash i really liked what you presented, now ofcourse there was some improvments that could make it much better i suggested some ideas below, but for what it is you presented a good flash with an entertaining and replay value, so with that said keep up the good work it was a pretty decent work of flash, So keep it up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Little touches make all the difference, I was amused with this flash as it brought some entertainment value, and some other elements that brought stuff together but then there was some weaker points that could be worked on, adn adressed more heavily, and with alot more effort, So if i do suggest any advice and or ideas they would help on these flashes great i think, they do have potential, so its a good sense of entertainment. But anyways without furture adu here are some of those ideas to improve on. Make multiple endings so that there are other outcomes and differant endings and so on, its an idea anyways.

[Madness HAXimation]

Nice work

And as i get started on this submission entry, i found it entertaining it even gets better as it plays thru and such, Now while its just the start of things i think you really have something here, so keep going with that. There is some good potential in this movie, and i am really liking the vibe that flows with this, so dont lose track of that and really push this flash forward. First off nice menu here it was pretty interesting, i like the animation in it and it made it kinda nifty as a whole so nice little menu page intro thingie here, This was really short, so maybe adding more to it and or adding more short clips to this entry making it a longer more fuller flash submission, so its an idea, but as for this particular entry it was short and fast but i got a laugh out of it so it was kinda neat. nice effort aswell. After messing with this abit i found it to be a really decent and fun flash, allthough it did lack some stuff, it could still be better, So i have mentioned some ideas and even basic stuff that other flash like this one have so below in the improvments section may help good luck either way. and may all your flash-works comeout with as much effort as possible.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
everything can allways be improved and or made better, may it be the little things so hope these small yet helpfull ideas help. So here i have added a few tips and advice on your submission, in hopes that you go with it and allow for more creativity throughout the whole flash, and in the end it will be a much better experience. The one thing about this was that it was too short and could either use a longer depth to it or could use other short animations with it, just something to think about when putting more quality to a short flash.

[War of the Shyguys]

Cute sprites

Sometimes you see alot of flashes and once in awhile you get someting differant and unique like the one you are presenting here, this one is pretty interesting and has some good visuals that really get you into it so for me this is a great flash here.But before i do continue on with the review, its been fun watching this you have some good and clever ideas in here.
Ok so i found this little flash of yours to be pretty cute, the sprites and sprite like action was notbad either rather cute as i have said, This one was kind of long but there was alot going on and that gave it some good "DEPTH" i really like how tis played out the graphics and visuals were pretty detailed though and thats what really pushed ne forward in seeing this so nice job indeed, all around and i hope to see more from you soon. After seeing and messing with this one i thought it was great, its a decent flash there is room for improvment, and you should think about adding some new stuff as mentioned below and even in the above review lines, it will be great for all, anywayskeep up the work i like the effort you put in sofar, and look forward to seeing more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This is were I suggest a few ideas that could help to improve on this, hope it does help, and remember it can only make things better. So dont take some of these ideas too light but consider them and just roll with it as these are some ideas that can help to make a better production on your movie. anyways here you go. This seemed kind of long and tended to drag on abit but it was good maybe cutting it down in a couple of parts might be ok.

[Batman : The Droppings]

Nice visuals

Now Criticisms aside Before i get started on the details and such, I just wanted to say a few things in a more enlightening way of the flash, first off it was a refreshing flash entry and showed off some decent skills here and there and whatnot, So for what i got out of this it was pretty positive, allthough later you will find some helpfull ideas, tips and suggestions that may help make it even better so try them aout and never be afraid to try new stuff. This had some very nice visuals, and good graphics, the animation was even better i thought it could use some sort of "SUBTITLES" subtitles are not often needed but sometimes they do help, and sometimes they make it kinda neat with that extra feature so maybe adding some subtitles would be a plus. but anyways i found that this entry kind of ran slow but it still had an entertaining ending and gave me a few chuckles so i was pretty pleased with the outcome and such, could use more depth though. This was a decent flash, now ofcourse there were some things that could be better and fixed and such, stated a few of them above and some more tips added below, these tips should help to make it somewhat better if not maybe they will give you some ideas, but even if you didnt use any of these tips you have a decent idea here with this flash, i look forward to seeing much more of your work inthe near future.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just some ideas and tips on improving some points of the flash, so here are some suggestions, i hope they help. They are some basic ideas that possibly you have overlooked or didnt notice before but they should help on making this a better movie entery, and an overall quality submission, its always better to submit some of the best of your work, so peopel can really enjoy your pieces here. So i have suggested some subtitles options it would be a real plus on your part. and i think the fans would appreceate it, and doesnt have to be anything fancy, just something simple text and all, try it out, it cant hurt.