XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Snowbot]

Pleasent

And so as I start on this submission, it has some interesting points, some not so interesting parts aswell, but I guess thats what the reiew feedback is for, for what works and what doesnt work, But it starts off kind of so-so but does get better, I was pleased with a few parts and hope the rest does get better, But I will suggest some feedback later. Well this was a pleasent film here and the little guitar was such a nice touch aswell as having a good tune for it to flow with, overall a decent little flick you have here. The animation was very nice in that it looked like you spent a nice amount of time working on it, and that really shows, right off from the start, but there were still some sreas that could be even better as explained in review, some basic ideas are thrown out there for your improvment of this submission, but even with that said it was a nice flash entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
everything can allways be improved and or made better, may it be the little things so hope these small yet helpfull ideas help. So here I have added a few tips and advice on your submission, in hopes that you go with it and allow for more creativity throughout the whole flash, and in the end it will be a much better experience. I actually thought this was kind of short, I could see you stretching it out a tad more though.

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[A Big Three Xmas]

Haha great stuff

I will get this started by saying this was not awful infact it was pretty decent, it had some odd moments but had some decent moments aswell, but in the end it all made sense and made for an interesting flash here, This was kind of random but the art and effort is really top notch sounds and music is also top notch aswell, very good stuff here, great characters and funny stuff. I found this flash to be pretty decent now ofcourse there are some things that can bemade better and much more improved those details are explained later, but do try and put some of the ideas in effect as they will only make things better, but anyways decent flash i had fun with them, and most of all keep up the fantastic flash work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
To be honest you covered it all, I will leave this one as is

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[TailsClock's Greatest SWF]

Well

Ok well I am not gonna say its tottally bad but it was a tad bit entertaining, I was for sure looking for a pause button, but there was some effort in it, so notbad I suppose lol

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So you have here is an anoying intent thats fine but maybe you can add to it maybe different types of screams and what not with a few different visuals.

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[{PS} Penis Penis Penis!!!]

Um OK

Well this is interesting I suppose it can be interesting the "FLASHING" is anoying but maybe that was the intent, I am probably not a fan of this piece but maybe more content should be added.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More content ofcourse and more scene and such.

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[Ackbar : Halloween]

Nice

Well I have seen a lot of these and they are all very entertaining, short but still entertaining I think this is the first time I seen "CONTROLLER GUY" get mad wich was pretty amusing, anyways nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like the improved logos I would do more stuff like that.

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[Ackbar : Copyrights]

LOL

And here we are with another interesting episode, wish you added some subtitles here, but you do make up for it with humor and jpeg images so nice effort there on these entertaining clips.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So maybe you can ad alot of these clips into one flash so people can pick this or that.

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[Ackbar : WWF]

Nice

Lol cosby is always funny, I like the "LOGO" you added with this one, walkin is great too lol, You have some very good acting on when the guy gets crazy and waht not, anyways funny clip here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Would have liked to see some "ACTION" in the ring but it was still funny.

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[Blush Your Teeth]

Artistic

So first of all before I start on this review of this fine flash entry I must say it was pretty good and I like how you presented it with lots to see and some interesting aspects to it, there was some interesting but yet neat imagery on this flash movie, Ok so now lets get to the details of this movie and I can already tell you its pretty good. Wow I must say this was pretty artistic the animation flowed well, and was some good ideas and concepts I especially like the use of color really some nice work here. Good flash funny and amusing, and in the ending notes of this review, it was something dfferant with some nice visuals and has some entertainment value and thats something we all look for, so in my opinion you did great here, keep that style up. there were some things that could be changed but for the most of this submission it was actually alright.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So here is some advice, some tips and some ideas that could possibly improve on this submission. but if not it was a decent flash in anycase. So hope to see some improvments changes soon. I would say make more random stuff within the animation random is good.

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[Ackbar : Deal]

Another one

You have somany of these, One thing I will say is that your "VOICE" is very good for these characters you did well there, and while these are short its still amusing.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well what can I say that I have not mentioned already, maybe think outside the box more and adding more of a random factor.

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