XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bounty + Hunter]

A fantastic start

I was pretty taken back with what you have started and presented here, there was alot to take in aswell, and it was a pretty nifty and very interesting flash entry you have submitted here, I am glad to have seen this and hope to see more and hope you keep making much more like this, The animation style on this was pretty interesting, and kind of differant but that was kind of neat and why i liked it even more, The whole 3d style is pretty good and you really have shown the detail and effort that comes along with this type of project, There was some good action in this, but most of all i was pretty amazed with the detail, You have even made some interesting "CHARACTERS" in this one, The animation could be better more smooth and more flowing. The story was abit on the short and could have used more depth to it. but anyways you have something pretty good there was just some minor fixes butother then that it was alright. one thing i forgot to say was "CONGRATS" on the awards its always nice to get those for some hardwork done.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well here we are at the end here or almost to the end of the review, and What i got from this experience of the flash was that it was an interesting one and you know what you are doing and you have put those forward with ease, some other things could be discussed and so on for improvments. So i have enjoyed what you put up here sofar, i did think you could have put more stuff more things that really grab a viewers attention, So here is the part where i suggest some advice and tips, and i hope you look into some of them, they will help maybe even inspre some new ideas, Make the animation more smooth more flowing, There could be more to the "STORY" though maybe lower the "FILE-SIze" somehow since it was rather large,

[Yotam & Fantasia 05]

Strange but i still like it.

I will get this started by saying this was not awful infact it was pretty decent, it had some odd moments but had some decent moments aswell, but in the end it all made sense and made for an interesting flash here, so i like this submission even if it was somewhat differant. And so as the flash plays on this was keeping me interested there was actually alot going on with some interesting and nifty things happening, I was not too familuar with everything so was confused at first, but soon enough got use to it, so it was not that bad. The characters were interesting, some more use of "COLOR" would be nice, It did seem to lack some "ACTION" maybe thats something you can work more on later, There was some ok jokes but i thought that some of the jokes and humor in this could have been better and more direct and too the point it would make it more funny. And well there you have it, it was an alright flash could have some adjustments but thats for later, but for the mostpart this was still an interesting and somewhat entertaining submission, there are a few more suggestions but thats for later aswell, anyways good job here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And well for some improvments or fixes as some say, i dont know with this one, there are a few things i noticed thatcould be better, so ill do my best to suggest some positive suggestions, so look into them and try and make this even better then you already have, This flash Lacked action so maybe some scenes with more action going on, This could use some better jokes and humor, regardless good luck.

[ZTV News Episode 1]

Something differant

It is always a pleasure to review differant stuff, and i like what i have come acoross here its differant but also has some of the mainstream style that i have also come to enjoy so nice work there, But anyways once again its a pleasure to review this project, So this was kind of interesting, There was some good "ANIMATION" in all this, some good voice acting aswell so not exactly my style of animation but it has some there points that are ok so i was alright with it, Im pretty sure this style is pretty popular, maybe something differant with and something more unique, this was a strange one, but it was interesting, The quality was pretty good i guess the "CONTENT" and sublect matter is just not for everyone So after seeing this a few times i thought it was alright some stuff i was not too fond of but other stuff i really liked what you showed here, and theres even more potential to it aswell, maybe some improvments can be made but ill post that in that section of the review, One thing that i dont want to forget to mention here is A big congrats on the awards that you recieved on this flash entry, good job there and keep it up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some improvments never hurt anyone, so here is where i will suggest a few ideas and i hope they will help for some improvments somehow and if not atleast i tried with a few suggestions, so hope it all works out you have a decent flash here and hope to see more, Well for this one, maybe something more mainstream but if not that more detail and flashy effects would really come in handy here.

[Mythtory: The Silk Road]

Decent flash movie here.

You have a good movie here it was interesting at the sametime i took a good interest in this, it was intriging, and in some cases it was differant but thats what i look for, something differant and something nifty, But anyways you have something good here, I was taken back with this one, i was not expecting this so it was differant and thats what i liked about it, The worm was kinda interesting and made for an interesting story so notbad there, You have some good effort in detail and and the "ANIMATION" was even better, The whole Pencilmation was kinda neat and nifty and that really made it unique, so nice job there, The story was good but tended to go off in places, but other then that this was alright and i liked what you have presented here. Not to drag things on, i will try and end this review soon, but before i do ill suggest some improvments, but for now i just want to say that i have enjoyed this and there was some pretty entertaining things about this submission, so good job on this indeed, I noticed you have won some awards for this submission, and i can see why it was well worth the time and effort so congrats on winning some awards keep on with that.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Improvments are always a plus on any flash entry, not sure i have any for this particular one but if i do find any i will post them below, and basicly they are just a few basics and maybe they will make some improved ideas and an improved version but if not good job here, But honestly you have covered all the areas and brought in some nice ideas as it is so this doesnt really need anything at all, it was pretty decent work.

[/Flash]

Very bland

Well its hard to start this off because you dont really have much to start off here, but ill do my best here, would have been nice to see what was here though. So i guess this was something that you were working on and and you had something here but it just didnt work out, and i can see that it is somewhat older, but it was all good i suppose, but you did have the wording text so it was something. To end this i will say try and add more content maybe bring up the original so that there is much more to see then what you do have.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So the only advice i can suggest here is add some more content or even the original,

[Once upon a time]

Notbad of an animation

Well you have something interesting here, it was interesting and you added some nifty visuals, i really like the direction you took here and it all made for a decent little flash movie. This was a strange one ofcourse, but i found the animation to be pretty interesting it was somewhat short but i guess you were going more for the humor of the joke and all, i thought this could have gone a little longer though, but anyways you have a good theme here, and i did get some laughs from it, but anyways good stuff here. And so an entertaining experience we have come up with here, there are some things that you could do to make it better but ill leave that for later, but for the mostpart i was entertained with your movie entry here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So i may have an idea or two or just a suggestion that could help to improve on this, but you dont have to take my advice at all but i thought i would throw out some small ideas for your mind to ponder on, so here you are and hope it helps. So with this one you could probably make it longer, i could even see this going into a series like a number of things that happen to the pig but thats just one idea.

AskCrank responds:

Thanks for the long review i will take it on board

[What the fuck, Japan?]

Something differant

So first of all before i start on this review of this fine flash entry i must say it was pretty good and i like how you presented it with lots to see and some interesting aspects to it, there was some interesting but yet neat imagery on this flash movie, Ok so now lets get to the details of this movie and i can already tell you its pretty good. So this was one of those movies thats its yay or nay just because on the content and subject matter and so on, But i think you pulled itoff well especially with how everything was animated and the Japanese thems aswell, Theres alot of content and alot going on you bring an intense visual of animation and visuals, Sometimes i was confused because of how fast everything was going on, but in the end i had a blast with this one, uti guess its better to laugh and enjoy then be sad, so in that aspect of things it was alright to joke on tragedy allthough we the people tend to do that alot, so i just take it as some amusing humor, inwich you did bring to the front-view of this, so nice effort there, But anyways good work on a decent animation and i guess a big "CONGRATS" on the "UNDER-DOG" award, its nice but wish it could have been better. And so we come to the end of the review, a decent flash works here, some nice and entertaining stuff to see, and while it was not perfect of even the best i have seen on this site, i must still say that i was pleasently pleased with the outcome and glad it had some humor to it, so on that astrospect of things it was a decent flash movie submission.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And here we go with trying to make it better then it is with a few improvments sometimes this is the hardest points of suggestion as sometimes some flashworks dont need touching but in somecases they do, so i will do my best here to pinpoint a few ideas and tips of improvment for either this and other projects, so try a few new things and let it shine. As for this flash of works it was pretty good, the content was iffy but it wasstill a good flash entry and i was pleased with the outcome.