XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Demo Reel 2012]

I like it

So this one was an interesting piece of flash, this movie type was different then most i am use too, and i like the variaty of your style in this one. Interesting piece here there was alot of different things going hence the title being a demo reel and what not, the music chimed it well to flow well with this, the animation was notbad and, it was a subtle piece of flash and a nice flowing one. And so that was that a decent movie entry with some decent visuals of a good style that gave off a good vibe and whatnot. So overall with this one i did enjoy your piece here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And so here i am with a few positive changes and adjustments that should make thinsg run smoother and it will give off a better effect, now you dont have to use any of the ideas i suggest but try and atleast to look into some small changes. So hard to say where to improve since it was a demo reel of sorts but, maybe you can push the music up a notch maybe changing tempos for each different scenes and whatnot, even having some sort of subtitles for different scenes and so on.

[Game Facts: Bethesda]

Big file but pretty entertaining.

So first off congrats on the awards thats always a nice gesture from the site, and its well rewarding especially when you make something like you have here, awards are cool and this flash was very well deserving. So this was a pretty good flash of works there was lots to see with this one, and some random and odd things going on but guess thats why i like it, it kept me interested and was overall pretty entertaining with some slight amusment in some areas and even more in others, So good flash entry here.So i was pretty amazed at how large the file was, that has to be one of the largest size was of a file i have seen here, guess thats why it took forever to load up and all, But once you get past the loading time it really is a good quality submission, I must say that the "VOICES" were pretty fantastic, the "HUMOR" however was abit on the dry side and could use for some more humor and more jokes and such, It was pretty good i like all the differant characters they had some good personality and made for a good film there was only a few issues that could be better.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And now we come to the end here well almost and what i took away from the experience here was that it was pretty interesting some stuff could be made better and have more entertaining value, but thats all explained later, but for the most of this i liked it, so good work here. And so we come to the improvments portion of the flash submission, wich is not always the easiest but i guess ill start with saying that it was a pretty solid flash, but could still use some adjustments and some small changes here and there, in some cases it may need more changes, so hope you will take some of these ideas to light. so with this one i thought it could use some more "HUMOR" and more funny jokes, while it was funny and amusing It could have been abit more on the funny side of things. And then there was the rather large file it was ok but took forever to load up and thats something you should think about in the future maybe some adjustments and some condencing of graphics here and there could help, these are just a few things that could help lower the file size, maybe even making it into more then one part or two, but just something to think about when it comes to size. So anyways just some helpfull tips on making things slightly better.

[Bounty + Hunter]

A fantastic start

I was pretty taken back with what you have started and presented here, there was alot to take in aswell, and it was a pretty nifty and very interesting flash entry you have submitted here, I am glad to have seen this and hope to see more and hope you keep making much more like this, The animation style on this was pretty interesting, and kind of differant but that was kind of neat and why i liked it even more, The whole 3d style is pretty good and you really have shown the detail and effort that comes along with this type of project, There was some good action in this, but most of all i was pretty amazed with the detail, You have even made some interesting "CHARACTERS" in this one, The animation could be better more smooth and more flowing. The story was abit on the short and could have used more depth to it. but anyways you have something pretty good there was just some minor fixes butother then that it was alright. one thing i forgot to say was "CONGRATS" on the awards its always nice to get those for some hardwork done.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well here we are at the end here or almost to the end of the review, and What i got from this experience of the flash was that it was an interesting one and you know what you are doing and you have put those forward with ease, some other things could be discussed and so on for improvments. So i have enjoyed what you put up here sofar, i did think you could have put more stuff more things that really grab a viewers attention, So here is the part where i suggest some advice and tips, and i hope you look into some of them, they will help maybe even inspre some new ideas, Make the animation more smooth more flowing, There could be more to the "STORY" though maybe lower the "FILE-SIze" somehow since it was rather large,

[Yotam & Fantasia 05]

Strange but i still like it.

I will get this started by saying this was not awful infact it was pretty decent, it had some odd moments but had some decent moments aswell, but in the end it all made sense and made for an interesting flash here, so i like this submission even if it was somewhat differant. And so as the flash plays on this was keeping me interested there was actually alot going on with some interesting and nifty things happening, I was not too familuar with everything so was confused at first, but soon enough got use to it, so it was not that bad. The characters were interesting, some more use of "COLOR" would be nice, It did seem to lack some "ACTION" maybe thats something you can work more on later, There was some ok jokes but i thought that some of the jokes and humor in this could have been better and more direct and too the point it would make it more funny. And well there you have it, it was an alright flash could have some adjustments but thats for later, but for the mostpart this was still an interesting and somewhat entertaining submission, there are a few more suggestions but thats for later aswell, anyways good job here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And well for some improvments or fixes as some say, i dont know with this one, there are a few things i noticed thatcould be better, so ill do my best to suggest some positive suggestions, so look into them and try and make this even better then you already have, This flash Lacked action so maybe some scenes with more action going on, This could use some better jokes and humor, regardless good luck.

[ZTV News Episode 1]

Something differant

It is always a pleasure to review differant stuff, and i like what i have come acoross here its differant but also has some of the mainstream style that i have also come to enjoy so nice work there, But anyways once again its a pleasure to review this project, So this was kind of interesting, There was some good "ANIMATION" in all this, some good voice acting aswell so not exactly my style of animation but it has some there points that are ok so i was alright with it, Im pretty sure this style is pretty popular, maybe something differant with and something more unique, this was a strange one, but it was interesting, The quality was pretty good i guess the "CONTENT" and sublect matter is just not for everyone So after seeing this a few times i thought it was alright some stuff i was not too fond of but other stuff i really liked what you showed here, and theres even more potential to it aswell, maybe some improvments can be made but ill post that in that section of the review, One thing that i dont want to forget to mention here is A big congrats on the awards that you recieved on this flash entry, good job there and keep it up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some improvments never hurt anyone, so here is where i will suggest a few ideas and i hope they will help for some improvments somehow and if not atleast i tried with a few suggestions, so hope it all works out you have a decent flash here and hope to see more, Well for this one, maybe something more mainstream but if not that more detail and flashy effects would really come in handy here.

[Mythtory: The Silk Road]

Decent flash movie here.

You have a good movie here it was interesting at the sametime i took a good interest in this, it was intriging, and in some cases it was differant but thats what i look for, something differant and something nifty, But anyways you have something good here, I was taken back with this one, i was not expecting this so it was differant and thats what i liked about it, The worm was kinda interesting and made for an interesting story so notbad there, You have some good effort in detail and and the "ANIMATION" was even better, The whole Pencilmation was kinda neat and nifty and that really made it unique, so nice job there, The story was good but tended to go off in places, but other then that this was alright and i liked what you have presented here. Not to drag things on, i will try and end this review soon, but before i do ill suggest some improvments, but for now i just want to say that i have enjoyed this and there was some pretty entertaining things about this submission, so good job on this indeed, I noticed you have won some awards for this submission, and i can see why it was well worth the time and effort so congrats on winning some awards keep on with that.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Improvments are always a plus on any flash entry, not sure i have any for this particular one but if i do find any i will post them below, and basicly they are just a few basics and maybe they will make some improved ideas and an improved version but if not good job here, But honestly you have covered all the areas and brought in some nice ideas as it is so this doesnt really need anything at all, it was pretty decent work.

[/Flash]

Very bland

Well its hard to start this off because you dont really have much to start off here, but ill do my best here, would have been nice to see what was here though. So i guess this was something that you were working on and and you had something here but it just didnt work out, and i can see that it is somewhat older, but it was all good i suppose, but you did have the wording text so it was something. To end this i will say try and add more content maybe bring up the original so that there is much more to see then what you do have.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So the only advice i can suggest here is add some more content or even the original,