XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[CD11 - Papua]

Another entertaining entry showing what clock day is all about and this was no exception, good use of coloron this one with there was a tad more content.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
While this is a clock day entry you can improve on what was meant to be this way.

~X~

[A flash made of B's:Part5]

Haha these are old yet still entertaining and give me some good laughs clock day goes way back and brings up fun times with clocks, the animation was not too bad, wish there was more to them though, but for the mostpart it is what it is.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs more depth and more backrounds but then again its clock day.

~X~

Haggard responds:

Funny to see your review here, I remember wanting to do at least SOMETHING for Clock Day and threw this together in like 10 minutes. Too bad the sound didn't work, though.

[SBC is hurt when you blam]

And another funny and amusing strawberry clock flash, I can never get enough of these as they entertain me but the problem is you cant improve on these as they are meant to be this way, but it was notbad.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing to improve on in a SBC movie

~X~

ChandlerThompson responds:

Wow, thanks for the review man! I completely forgot about this flash but I'm stoked you're still reviewing. Keep up the great critiques man, it seriously brightens an animator's day!

[S.C. Slighty Moves.]

lol well this was entertaining but you gotta love SBC cant go wrong there and I must say I had a good laugh with this one

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe more detail in the backround with this one.

~X~.

[Bear & Bunny Boo 2]

This was cute

Cute and Something different here, with an amusing style. Really good stuff here, kind of different here but this was pretty entertaining, all the artwork was smooth and well detailed, overall I was pleased with this and the outcome. a tad short there but again overall amusing. And now we end with this review as this was some good stuff I suggest you keep up the great work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And so while you have a good piece of work here there might be a couple of things that might make this somewhat smoother like say making it a tad longer more content, and I would even ad some subtitle just for that extra touch and effect.

~X~

[A battle to the Death]

Nice intro

Great stuff here but that goes without saying some improvments could be made and i may suggest some later, but right now i want to say i had fun and was excited all the way through with this, very amusing what you had here, keep at it, So i really liked the intro you had going on this one, it presented some nice animation and was kind of long but it was kinda neat to have kinda like a lil story, Infact the animation after the bests was nice too and the first medal was pretty good. and easy. you should have a "SKIP" button to skip past the intro if you are playing the gamemore then once, unless i have missed it. The "MEDALS" seemed way too easy maybe you can add some extras that are harder, or more medlas all around. And so it comes to an end, i had an alright time with this entry, there was some nicfty and differant element of stuff, but you had some good structure about everything, and i cant wait to see what changes you do make with this one so keep at it and let it ride to glory.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So there is alot to go through and sometimes we need to improve on things we may have missed, i have suggested a few ideas that i hope you will improve on and make it all fun submission for everyone, So go with some new changes and let it flow with new experiences. Add a skip button to the long starting intro, Decent medals here i really had fun with that, still think it could use much more medals then that, just had too few medals on here, needs more.

[Donut Quest]

Nice work

So this one was pretty nifty and interesting there was some nice visuals here and even some things that made me go wow, and thats always a plus, a nice job to start off. Hmm what can i say you have done this very well with lots of action a fun little story and some cute animation all rolled into one flick here that made for an amusing experience, the music made it more like a music vid which was ok, i wouldnt mind seeing some more Flashy effects, more blasts and lighting and darkening effects to give it that much more of an effect. And so that was that you have presented a nifty piece of flash here, it keeps you enjoying it and even wanting more throughout and on that note i will say it was a pleasent experience.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
so while this is decent work there is always a little room for some slight changes and upgrades, but you probably dont need much since you seem to know what you are doing but i do have a few ideas that could help make this slightly better, To be honest there was not much needed, but i did mention throughout the review that adding some more flashy effects more lighting and some darkening.