XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[TBA - Time Trial #1]

Nice work

And here once again I find one of those interesting and yet still entertaining flash entries, a good submission you have here, I was delighted with all the happenings and so-on. Nice work here great characters nice voice overs, and nice story here with some good animation, really good stuff here. Im not sure I saw any real negitive points needing improvment, most of this was pretty good so nice effort there, I do look forward to more of your works though, as this was notbad and kept me interested and didnt bore me, it was highly amusing, anyways keep up the decent flashworks. It was pretty good and I look forward to much more of your work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as above, this could be better. and here are some suggestions, tips and ideas that can only help to make your idea work even better then it is, so give it a thought. Here are a few tips and ideas on making this some what better. Some "STATIC" on the voices just a little you may want to clear that up some how.

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[T.M.A.B.R. Episode 1]

Hmmm interesting

Well this was interesting for sure, first of all there was no sound, 2nd this "LOOPS" so there are some things that can be spruced up, the animation itself was ok the "CONTENT" was entertaining though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Music and sound/fx is good, this flash could use some atleast some nifty sound/fx, but some music choices would also be a nice touch, and show good effort towards all this, Make the view screen much bigger, it was small and not much you could do in the view screen area you did have so making it much bigger would only be a plus on your part and allow for more enjoyment for the people who checkout the flash. Adding a stop action code is one of the easiest things to do, but its best for the anoying loops of flash animations and such, and would benifit your flash very well, so add a stop action code, and dont forget to add some Play and replay buttons at the menu and ending pages.

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[4 Swords Misadventures 6]

Zelda

This animation features various Positive elements that are great for this and make it not so boring, though it could definitely appear more interesting. This animation was interesting to watch though, so its about in the middle with interesting level for me, maybe there can be more endeavors like this one with much more to them. Haha this was great zelda was great and this was a great parody on it, did go a tad long but was funny you gave it some humor and the zelda theme was just awsome, I wouldnt mind seeing some different view shots though besides just the top view maybe some added artwork you can do to give a new view shot. so anyways decent flash, some ok entertainment value, and it was presented well enough to understand it all so nice job here. Some ideas could be suggested below so hope that helps,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Using a few different idea options ideas and advice that will in the end make this more quality then it is, just something to think about. so lets try some things. some different view shots though besides just the top view maybe some added artwork you can do to give a new view shot.

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[Ackbar : 3D]

lol amusing

So with "3D" this was notbad at all, it was amusing as always and actually longer then most of the akbar productions but still I liked what you have presented here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Hmmm I would say make longer but you added some content here, maybe make more 3d stuff like this one.

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[Ackbar : Custom]

Interesting

This one was notbad kinda slow but still a tad funny, there seems to be an issue with some sound quality on this one though, it kinda dropped out abit maybe thats something you can look into.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
There was a slight sound issue with this one.

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[Ackbar : Dickass]

oh boy

lol I love this one, while these are very short they are still entertaining, you should really ad more to these though like some more "CHARACTERS" and what not, more starwars stuff for sure.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Adding more characters would be a big plus here.

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[PMP Blog 4]

These are interesting

This Is an alright animation. Its not perfect but it is obvious you have potential. And ist also obvious that you have put some time and good amount of effort to really make this into something special, now ofcourse it could use a few fixes and adjustments for some even more improving points, but thats for later. These are funny and I think I reviewed one of these before but you have some good humor and theres a good vibe about this all, nice job indeed. but overall this was a pretty good tune, not too much to add, except adding more to it but not by much, but great flash I really enjoyed it, heep up the hard work, as I know these flash types and styles can take time. So what else can I say here, except keep up the efforts and keep on putting as much quality as you can, in the end it will show off and shine.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And here we are once again in the improvment area, and before I do get to that, its a decent flash submission youhave, but could use some fixing and cleaning up on areas, Some of these ideas will do greatly on this whole piece, and I do look forward to seeing some upgrades and improved details, so give it a shot. Think I mentioned this before but some "SUBTITLES" would be a great touch here.

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[Bad Hair]

Haha

Haha this is funny stuff right here I didnt know what to expect but this was some funny stuff, even it being black and white was alright might be better with a bit of color though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was a tad bit short but I found it amusing, So with black and white flashes they are ok and bring a certain appeal to everything but adding some color wouldnt hurt may it be an item in the distant, an eye, a color of hair, a car tire, amybe a window, or even the sky, just anything random while keeping everything else black white as to not take away from your main idea but adding a bit of color might even make it cool.

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[Stoneage Collection]

lol

Besides some minor flaws, you executed this decently you have added various interesting elements and moments of fun and amusing entertainment, You also Utilised flash tools to make this comeout pretty decent if you ask me, I do have a few Recommendations to add to it and make it really comeout with a more smooth feel. Alright this was pretty funny and it was a good concept of an idea the "CHARACTERS" were not half bad but could be spruced up a tad maybe work on the "ARMS" a bit better there were a bit odd. But in the end I really found this flash to be pretty good, presented well, and well orginised, you brought all the elements together making for a decent flash here. So untill your next flash keep up the creative skills.and keep up the quality.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was a good animation it has a smooth side of things and the style and direction was ok, but I believe that there needs to be an even smooth direction on things, the flash was decent, but I must say there are still some clever ways you can make this better such as. Characters were not half bad but could be spruced up a tad maybe work on the arms a bit better there were a bit odd.

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[Ackbar : Pokaman]

haha cute

Well this was another cute one, I like the rush hour scene that guy is funny and you brought it here so nice job there on an entertaining flash yet still short.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well as always things you can improve on are, more content, variaty of clips in one film, longer sessions of a movie, and subtitles ofcourse.

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