XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Perpetual Workday]

Amazing

Now as I get this started the one thing that i want to say first is that this is a decent Concept and you should keep up with that, and you have cleverly used some nice effects and elements to make this a good flash submission, There are some areas of improvment but that comes hand and hand, but for this I really liked how you got this going, very nice work here. Wow I must say this was pretty amazing the characters were smooth looking allthough I wouldnt mind some "MOUTHS" on them but maybe that was not your intent, but this was a pretty good animation. And so here we have something differant and with everything going on you really bring out the quality,So I am loving the unique style and it stillbrings some entertainment value and that was all a plus, and really just kept me interested from the get go, so props to you on a decent flash submission here, hope to see more from you. and more like this entry aswell.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Decent flash you have here, there are alot of these types but with some small fixes here and there and a few more additions of suggested stuff below and above, it could bemuch improved, so dont be afraid to try some of the ideas out it can only make things better and bring abit more quality to your flash. so lets go for that quality with a few ideas. Some animated mouths would be cool, maybe even more animated facial features aswell.

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[Ackbar : Trap Light]

Trap

Haha luigi is always funny, this was another random yet funny episode you have somany of these, wish you would combine them, and bring in more content aswell as those funny characters.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More content ofcourse.

~X~

[Ackbar : Fired]

Fired lol

This was funny and always love the random explosions, another cute entertaining and short flash, maybe you can put a lot of these together all in one film.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
but would be great if you did one of two things one being adding more content to the short animation or add a multiple of differant shorts to the actualy flash with a play button for each one that gives this lots quality and has alot of your work in one place for everyone to see.

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[Ackbar : TANKMEN]

lol Tankman

Akbar is always funny and always trying to be someone he is not, this was actually a pretty good episode even if it was one of the shortest ones in history lol.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More characters, subtitles, more content and just more more and more.

~X~

[Ackbar : ORLY]

lol

Haha and once again another funny and amusing film, allthough still short they do still give off a funny humor with some good random factor about them.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as I have always mentioned, adding more content and making them longer is always a plus, and even some subtitles wouldnt hurt.

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[EPIC METAL!]

This was very good

Wow I must say that this was very impressive I like the "DARK" touch you gave this the content was really good, the music/sound seemd slightly distorted but that was not too much of an issue, also adding some subtitles wouldnt hurt.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The music seemed low or distorted, subtitles are not often needed but sometimes they do help, and sometimes they make it kinda neat with that extra feature so maybe adding some subtitles would be a plus. So the looping in the flash is what getts kind of anoying but thats actualy an easy fix, as simple as adding a stop action code, done from your flash Action / Scripts So by adding the stop action code it will stop the looping and make your flash run smoother for all, and more enjoyble, Now if you dont know how to do this you can always ask in the flash forums about stop action codes, or even looking up some tutorials with the words stop-action-code.

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[Haruhi is happy]

Amusing

Lol well this was amusing, there are some ok visuals through out the film, and the "MUSIC" was pretty fitting for the content was all a tad silly though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe less flashing and slowing it down just a tad.

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[HOSUE [sic]]

Wow

Another good entry here, it was pretty interesting and there was some interesting visuals and some ok content, I thought there was some initial things that could have been better with some more detail, I suppose there is alot that could be made better, but overall I enjoyed it, but anyways you have some good Material here hope the rest of your endeavors prove to be as good. Your "PLAY" Button was amazing I dont think I have every seen anything like thatm the art and your detail for characters is awsome, this had some good random factor aswell, The "DANCING" at the end was great, all around good animation. So lets expand ideas and direction and see the possibilities that they can bring up, Maybe even turn up some new results, But anyways good stuff and hope to see more from you soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I thought this was notbad of a flash could use more here and there, it was intersting and does lack that extra effort just on little things here and there and I have suggested some advice on some of those things throughout the review so take your time and try some of them, other then that this was pretty good. So keep at it and always look for ways to improve on things. I could see you making more of these based around "HOUSE" maybe shorter clips likeish, anyways nice job.

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