Different
Well this was different but I kind of like it, the art was kind of random and such it was all like a music video of sorts, the music was not too bad either.
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might want to ad a stop action code.
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Different
Well this was different but I kind of like it, the art was kind of random and such it was all like a music video of sorts, the music was not too bad either.
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might want to ad a stop action code.
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This was nifty
There is a good Discovery with this submission, And here is what I call a well crafted with lots of detail through-out this submision and you really have shown how this flash comes alive before us, and I hope you continue to bring that forward. Perhaps Ironing out a few tid bits would be great. This was a nifty animation lots of good use of color animation was pretty smooth and funny characters wish it was longer though. And so there was a few instances that really Showcase the work well, Hope you enjoy this Commentary I was very entertained with it, I do feel it could be even be better though with more touch ups and some extras that will generally make it better for all.
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Not all the time do you get to see stuff like you have made here today, So nice effort here just wish you had made it longer.
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Different
Well this was different the graphics are pretty good some nice characters it seemed more like a game then anything else, but then it wasent, but it was entertaining and kinda fun, just didnt make much sense.
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A starnge one but would love more clarity on this one.
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lol
Haha this was funny there was not much there not much content but maybe you can work on those elements later but does need a tad bit more stuff going on.
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As mentioned more content and more stuff to see in an action sense.
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Nice work
I want to give you cheers on this flash There was alot to this and I found it delightfull, even using some good creative expression cameout to work good so nice job. This was some pretty good nice work. good graphics funny characters, smooth animation and a good story to go with. So anyways nice job nice effort here. So untill the next flash submission, I say goodbye and enjoyed what you presented, hope to see more like it.
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This was a Bonus to see because you did some interesting and nifty things on here, it could use some extras though, Maybe some subtitles just for some extra measure.
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lol amusing
Lol well that was amusing the intro music was notbad, kind of funny and I like all the different clips, allthough they could have used more content and such.
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Much more content for sure.
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I like it
You have really gone and added your own personal touch here, It shows it well in this flick, And I must say I was pretty impressed with your work here, and hope to see more of your movies. There was some interesting visuals here, and I believe thats what caught my eye with this one, nice job overall on this one. I like the Opportunity here on this flash, and Endorse this submission to others, I got some good enjoyment from this, There are a few instances that could be better, I hope to see more of your endeavors in flash works, soon. The Opportunity here built Momentum for this review.
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Alright So here are some Minor Details that could work and weild some positive results, just adding some small flashy effects here and there would be nice.
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Notbad
This was interesting I like the whole "HOUSE" relation here the voices really made good on this the art and animation was not bad either, a good little flash here.
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Kind of short but still entertaining maybe making it a tad bit longer.
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Really good quality
You have some good Material here with this submission, I was taken back with some of the stuff that was going on but it was all in good fath, This is a great Discovery here on the portal, and I wish more artists and designers would go more of this rout and such, But anyways this was done Wonderfully and showed the time and effort you have put fourth here. I have to say these characters are very good, awsome textures awsome details and the animation was very imressive good detail, and you also made the "STORY" come alive, it was a tad "SHORT" but still very impressive. To Produce something like this does take work, A little more detail, and something more to attract more of the attention and so on, but anyways it was a decent submission. I like the Momentum of this submission.
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I always like to suggest some positive ideas and outlook, on some good stuff here in the portal, and this one caught my eye, Only thing I can say about this one would be to make these a tad bit longer.
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Very nice
Its always nice seeing stuff like this, and also awsome to see the quality visuals and details, So I was pretty impressed with everything you have presented here, anyways great work indeed.
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Nothing to change when its a solid piece.
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