XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Go, Go, Parody Rangers!]

Entertaining

It is a pleasure of mine reviewing this piece of work, there are some great things that happen in this one, dont get me wrong there are some improvments that can be made, but You have done a did piece of work here with everything that was happening on this.I Encourage you to keep making stuff like this, any additional detail would be great. This was an entertaining piece with lots of interesting and entertaining characters, "VOICES" were not half bad either, this film actually went long but it was funny and amusing with everything going on. Awards are not always something everyone can get but its nice when you can so awsome job on getting some awards for this flash. There were some areas that could use some more clever ideas and tips, but that also comes with most flash submissions, So maybe below I will have a few ideas for you, but regardless of this all, this was actually notbad of a flash entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Overall A decently made flash on the whole. Obviously there are bits and piece and there that could have used a general second look, and improvements, and so this is where I come in and try and suggest a few new ones and some old ideas aswell in hopes that you do take a second look into things and make them much better and improved. I would love to see different scenes going on and also some subtitles wouldnt hurt either.

~X~

[Once at the Lesson]

Nice

OK so here I go starting another review for another entry, and with all Criticisms aside I really think this was a good entry, it had its ups and downs and ofcourse it can use a tweak or two but just by a touch here and there, but thats for later in the review, but what I do have to say is that I like what you presented here, and to keep with it. This was different for sure, lots of little details that made for some quality flash here, the art style was not perfect but it was the little things that made this a success. So as this review comes to a short end, it was a decent flash of good portion, could use more stuff here and there and some smoothing out on some areas, but I thought in the end it was just right and fittng with all that was happening so it was alright with me. So with all that said maybe your next project will be just as good if not better

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I Am always looking to help on a few improvment ideas here and there, Not all flash needs new ideas but some still need some improvments so hope you will take some of my ideas and use them to the best of your skills. I wouldnt mind seeing an improvement in graphics and visuals.

~X~

[Rats On Cocaine - Ep #10]

Different

I love reviewing and I love reviewing stuff like this so im glad I was able to find this piece you have presented here, you have offered some nifty little flash of works here and it has kept me somewhat interested, so nice job here, Nothing was overused in this, infact this flash submission was pretty Refreshing so thats why I liked it. Wow I must say this was something different slightly disturbing but I found it interesting I like the characters you brought to life here and the whole "CONCEPT" of this film was interesting and different. OK so while this review is almost comming to an end I found this flash submission to be fun somewhat entertaining, it had some good visuals and showed some of your effort put into this, so keep at it as this was notbad at all.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Little touches make all the difference, I was amused with this flash as it brought some entertainment value, and some other elements that brought stuff together but then there was some weaker points that could be worked on, and adressed more. You have a good idea here, and I can see this becomming a series of sorts maybe cutting it a tad shorter though.

~X~

[Ackbar : Showdown]

LOL

This starts out great especially with the music and all, akbar is pretty funny and these episodes seem to get better with each new one lol, and the "EXPLOSION" was pretty awsome, anyways nice episode here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Hmm I kind of like this how it is, maybe more scene with akbar doing different things and such.

~X~

[Ackbar : DK65]

HaHa

LOL well another amusing episode, the "JPEGS" are funny but wouldnt mind some more art like stuff in there but guess that takes time and all, also wouldnt mind some more dialog from all the people at the party.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More dialog from the party people to make it seem like there was a party.

~X~

[Hny (happy New Year!)]

Creepy

Well this was kind of creepy but you made it that way and the blue them over white backrounds was great, and the music gave it that much more dark and creepy feeling so if that was the intent you did good.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make this longer or into a series of sorts, but longer for sure.

~X~

[Snowbot]

Pleasent

And so as I start on this submission, it has some interesting points, some not so interesting parts aswell, but I guess thats what the reiew feedback is for, for what works and what doesnt work, But it starts off kind of so-so but does get better, I was pleased with a few parts and hope the rest does get better, But I will suggest some feedback later. Well this was a pleasent film here and the little guitar was such a nice touch aswell as having a good tune for it to flow with, overall a decent little flick you have here. The animation was very nice in that it looked like you spent a nice amount of time working on it, and that really shows, right off from the start, but there were still some sreas that could be even better as explained in review, some basic ideas are thrown out there for your improvment of this submission, but even with that said it was a nice flash entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
everything can allways be improved and or made better, may it be the little things so hope these small yet helpfull ideas help. So here I have added a few tips and advice on your submission, in hopes that you go with it and allow for more creativity throughout the whole flash, and in the end it will be a much better experience. I actually thought this was kind of short, I could see you stretching it out a tad more though.

~X~