XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The 1-up Pursuit]

Awsome

So you have a good start here on this flash it is a promising piece to better things to come. So let me enlighten you with some thoughts and insight through-out this review because I found your flash fun and entertaining. This was some good animating and a good animation overall, nice graphics nice style here and some fun times within the flash. but regardless this was pretty good, I thought there could have been some better improvments but maybe next time, but as the time being it was an alright flash submission.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well here I am once again looking for some improvment points or some possible suggestion, to be honest with this one you did ok and I would be lucky to find much as its already a decent looking flash movie. So again I will say this does not need any changes at this time.

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[The End Of Pikachu 2]

Cute

This was actually pretty cute and it being dated from 2006 it does show some ok art style simple but still ok, Could be longer though but it was alright in my book.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer maybe a bit more effort on detail in graphics.

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[French Erotic BIRTHDAY!]

lol funny

Well I was never expecting this kind of content from you but this was amusing and entertaining and I like the "CONTENT" it was funny, the song itself was nice and a good effort.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe a larger view screen and what not. to show more of the visuals.

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[Orange and the Locktaur]

Nice intro

Well notbad here, nice intro aswell, as for the film itself it was pretty impressive one of the better clock movies fresh colors and a fun story, so nice work, and nice seeing lots of different scenes and clocks. I really like the ending.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A little more shade and details in the clock characters to give them some depth.

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[Raw Latex 3]

Very impressive

Ok here this one yields some good fun and it is entertaining and thats a plus, so nice job on this one not perfect but this is alright with this reviewer, besides I did enjoy this one. This was rather entertaining the "CHARACTERS" are great and the voices were even better, great use of ideas here, nice job indeed. This was a great Opportunity for me to review this you set a Standard and I did enjoy what you have here now just would like to see more effort all around, so good luck with all that.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ok so this was pretty interesting maybe I can Recommend a few ideas such as just adding some "SUBTITLES" would be a plus here.

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[fishy eater]

Um ok

Well that was kind of short but I must say it was still somewhat entertaining and whatnot, good for a laugh or two. and it does show some effort on your part.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make this longer, and more content for sure.

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joshboy101 responds:

yeah i would of, i just wanted to finish this thing before i go back to school

[One Punch Man in Two Minutes]

This whole idea is nifty

So with this kind of flash I think the best you can do is be creative and design new stuff you have done that and more, you have created the right foundation now just maximize on that along with the passion that drives that, you have made something we can all enjoy. This whole idea of these two characters are great, and the voices are pretty awsome, maybe adding some subtitles would be the last touch on this. Also nice work on the humor of it all, There was some enjoyment from this, It, was actually Refreshing, but anyways good luck on your future endeavors, I will keep an eye out for more of your stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And so we come to the improvments portion of the flash submission, wich is not always the easiest but I guess I will start with saying that maybe adding some subtitles would be the last touch on this.

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[the fluffy collab]

Notbad

Well here was something notbad at all, somegood action some random moments, maybe onlything I would change up here would be adding more detail in the backrounds.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More detail in backrounds as there was some bland spots.

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[wade is my hero]

These are amusing

Well these are amusing, the animation was kind of slow, but I really like the "DETAIL" you put in some of the art like the trees and backrounds, so nice effort there.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe make the "VIEW-SCREEN" a tad bit larger maybe you can show more of that detail.

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