XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[all for one dvd eddition]

Love this

A very cool video here love the emminem music it really played well into the "INTRO" of things, the rest of the movie was great some decent dialog, and good views and action scenes you really put some effort in this and the emmeinem was a great touch on this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would have the music play on a loop with smaller volume thru-out the film.

~X~

[Old: Couple O' Shorts]

Wacky

Lol well this one was kind of a wacky flash film but thats what made newgrounds work, the "MUSIC" was pretty boomimg if you ask me and fit well this one was a tad short but you have a good style here and some decent content, it was amusing stuff, keep up the decent work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could be longer with more content.

~X~

[F-I-R-E]

Lol amusing

Well this was cute and amusing it was kind of short, and the screen could be abit larger, and maybe even some subtitles but it was entertaining and always amusing with clocks a fun little old flash you have here, So not too bad here with this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few things here with this one one being that this could use a larger view screen not that this was bad or anything but a larger view screen allows for a much better viewing by the viewer of the flash and in turn allows you to show off the nifty details of your work. ad more content into this aswell to make it much longer stretch it out more so there a more full filling experience. just a few things that could help spruce up some things here.

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[MurderLands - HistoruOne; BEETS]

Entertaining

I like this with the animation and the music and meshed them well together with a nice style here the animation was very nice wish there was more backrounds but the music really made up for that overall a nice piece indeed. So while I liked this flash there are some good and bad about it, I went over it abit but have suggested some more ideas below hope it helps, its not major but could use more of the effort on little stuff here and there, Nice efforts here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe some more detail in the backrounds.

~X~

MRat responds:

Thank you for the thoughtful and thorough review. I will be incorporating more backgrounds as the series progresses. The line art will likely become cleaner as well. I do intend to maintain the rough animatic aesthetic, though, with few inbetweens and colour-coded line art.

- Ryan

[xtra Blam Movie - Torched]

Nice

Yeah this would have made for a better "BLAM" clip or movie however you want to call it, but this was nice really good music and very boom and blam out there making it a fun game, would have loved to see more to this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Would have liked to see you stretch this out even more with more visuals and such.

~X~

[PoringParadise]

lol

Well the cube part of this was a great introduction, and the music was nice but there was really not much other then that a fun game / movie i take it but still somewhat entertaining.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And one thing this needs much more of is more Interactivity, it has some but not enough and would be much more fun with alot more interactivty especially for a game like movie type . so just some things to think about.

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[Knuckles Adventure 1]

Decent

And I think this is the last one i need to review but Have to say it was pretty impressive and while this one is a bit older I still came to enjoy this one, some decent "STORY" here and was entertaining nice graphics indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Would like to see the story and animation sped up as it was a tad slow, so speed it up somewhat, and adding some "FLASHY" effects etc would also be a plus.

~X~

[Knuckles Adventure 2]

Cool

Another great film, and I love the "ZELDA" theme you have here, again I wish you could ad some voices to the characters that would be a huge plus on things, but it was actually a pretty decent film.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
adding some voices would be a huge plus for this film.

~X~

[Knuckles Adventure 4]

Nice again

Guess I have not seen all of these but its nice to see these again first off as a small change and or improvement I would remove the button to move forward to next dialog, thats ok but you should make it so that it just flows and animates forward without having to use a button. also adding some "VOICES" for the dialog wouldnt hurt either and would improve on this greatly, nice film though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
ok a small change and or improvement I would remove the button to move forward to next dialog, thats ok but you should make it so that it just flows and animates forward without having to use a button. and some voices for your characters would be a huge plus.

~X~

[Knuckles Adventure 6]

Nice Sprite work

and here is another sprite flash movie, they are good stuff not bad at all, and I like the "MUSIC" you really matched it up well, theres a lot of action in this one and you bring some good animation to the table aswell overall a nice little sprite animation you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some voices for the dialog would be a great idea.

~X~