XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Knuckles Adventure 4]

Nice again

Guess I have not seen all of these but its nice to see these again first off as a small change and or improvement I would remove the button to move forward to next dialog, thats ok but you should make it so that it just flows and animates forward without having to use a button. also adding some "VOICES" for the dialog wouldnt hurt either and would improve on this greatly, nice film though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
ok a small change and or improvement I would remove the button to move forward to next dialog, thats ok but you should make it so that it just flows and animates forward without having to use a button. and some voices for your characters would be a huge plus.

~X~

[Knuckles Adventure 6]

Nice Sprite work

and here is another sprite flash movie, they are good stuff not bad at all, and I like the "MUSIC" you really matched it up well, theres a lot of action in this one and you bring some good animation to the table aswell overall a nice little sprite animation you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some voices for the dialog would be a great idea.

~X~

[BOF: Armageddon Pt. 1]

Cute

Well these are always cute with the sprites and the animation always amusing and funny aswell, wish the view-screen was a tad bit larger though, I like how you have put in a sort of story here but could use more of that, overall not a bad animation but could use more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs more story and a larger view screen.

~X~

[Hospital of Death Trailer]

Notbad for a first

Well this was notbad for a first but i still think it needs more plot more ideas and needs to be longer aswell, but for sure give it much more plot and story, needs some depth, but again nice work for your first one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Here are a few things to reflect on, Amusing toon here these are just so short you should really think about adding these into a flash that has a lot of these short clips and with that it would create more of a quality submission, the one short clip just doesnt seem to cut it. The plot was simple and seems like it could use more depth more stuff going on more things to keep the viewer really interested in your movie, Give more info on characters, places, and when, these are something that could have more depth to them. just a few ideas there that could really make this work.

~X~

[we need a new king]

SBC

You can never go wrong with strawberry clock lol and always nice to see a little action from bananna, these clock movies are still fun wish we had more of that in todays time, seems like its passed but anyways this was a decent flash here, i like it, so keep up the great work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Adding some sub-titles would be nice.

~X~

[ADL5]

Interesting

Well this was interesting some decent animation in here and the music was pretty fitting with the actual animation, you also have lots of variations in here aswell. a good educational flash aswell so nice job here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more use of color would be a plus.

~X~

[Neon Catalyst Intro]

Love this song

The song itself is enough for me to highly like this, your animation and video was notbad at all, and im not familuar with the topic but it all seemed to work out well and was pleased with all the outcome of it all.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some other uses of color and effects would be a plus.

~X~

[TheManWithTheRedHat 0.1]

Funny

Haha this was amusing and funny Some really good scenes in this one, the "EFFECTS" could be better though, and more flashy style effects needed, also this film could be a tad longer just my opinion though, but it was a funny film.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more flashy style effects needed, also this film could be a tad longer just my opinion though.

~X~

[A Merry Lockmas]

Lockmass Flash

Another entertaining flash from the portal, these types never get old and are always entertaining and bring a spark to the portal so first off thank you for the effort here. I have not seen a lock flash in a good while so glad they are still kicking around and such, Its always amazing with lock flashes and even clock flashes, the art and animation was pretty fantastic on this piece its actually a pretty amusing story you have here seemed to go a bit long but was notbad at all. And I must say it was highly entertaining with what you had going here, and it was a pleasure to review this, and hope you bring more our way like this entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So normally I have a little something to ad here but with this particular flash I thaught it was just right and had its moments but was not in any need for any changes.

~X~

[War!]

Fun stick Battle

A fun stick battle, I did think this was kind of "SHORT" but you can always stretch that out with more content and or adding other short flicks along with this one to make it like a multiple of short animations. but it was notbad at all.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was rather short, but you can always stretch that out with more content and or adding other short flicks along with this one to make it like a multiple of short animations.

~X~

wallpaperman responds:

Wow, Wayne Colt still out here smashing the reviews. Crazy you're still going dude, peace.