XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[A Merry Lockmas]

Lockmass Flash

Another entertaining flash from the portal, these types never get old and are always entertaining and bring a spark to the portal so first off thank you for the effort here. I have not seen a lock flash in a good while so glad they are still kicking around and such, Its always amazing with lock flashes and even clock flashes, the art and animation was pretty fantastic on this piece its actually a pretty amusing story you have here seemed to go a bit long but was notbad at all. And I must say it was highly entertaining with what you had going here, and it was a pleasure to review this, and hope you bring more our way like this entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So normally I have a little something to ad here but with this particular flash I thaught it was just right and had its moments but was not in any need for any changes.

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[War!]

Fun stick Battle

A fun stick battle, I did think this was kind of "SHORT" but you can always stretch that out with more content and or adding other short flicks along with this one to make it like a multiple of short animations. but it was notbad at all.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was rather short, but you can always stretch that out with more content and or adding other short flicks along with this one to make it like a multiple of short animations.

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wallpaperman responds:

Wow, Wayne Colt still out here smashing the reviews. Crazy you're still going dude, peace.

[All You Can Eat]

Notbad

Nice flash here the use of color is really nice love the backround too, maybe ad some subtitles? but this was actually kind of amusing, he is kind of a silly old guy lol, entertaining at the least but you have created some good qiulity here with this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Adding sub titles wouldnt hurt.

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[Ruined Ice Cream]

Nice clay-mation

So I wont dock you for it being short I know these clay movies can take a lot just to put up but you should make the "VIEW-SCREEN" larger even just a tad bit larger, but it was somewhat entertaining and could be funnier.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Heres a few things, A few things that could be better You can start by making the screen larger It would be a great improvment to this, It was kinda small and didnt have room for much stuff, so in that aspect of stuff it kinda limits your game and brings down the quality of The viewing pleasure, so try and make a larger viewing screen if you can. Try it out.

[Confess to Mario and...]

Sprite fun

and here we have a short sprite flash movie love the music by the way it was pretty entertaining, the animation was nice and all seemed to flow nice you made it a crzy little story and all worked out well.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This movie could have been longer and even went into some new scenes and such.

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[CS_Rio Stick]

Entertaining

So here was another funny and entertaining stick flash movie, I dont like the next scene button option thats something you can fix also adding more "TEXTURE" to the blood would be a plus. but a funny and entertaining flash here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More texture in the blood and even backrounds.

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[Shloom]

Creative

Theres lots of creative ideas in this one you used the best of the skills at that time, but I do like how creative you were with this such as the two different ending and whatnot, animation was notbad and nice use of jpegs and art, all together came out well.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe have more "ENDING" options then just the 2

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[Me and KFC]

Notbad

So this is notbad does seem like a love story but its kind of amusing, Im not too fond of the next scene button may want to change that out someway.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the whole Click next button seemed to get repetitive so I suggest you remove the buttons and just allow it to play as a movie instead it will have a much better result, the click next button just tends to anoy people when all they want to do is watch a movie. Besides the whole click next button is more of the old way they use to make games or movies with next scene buttons like this.

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[The Astral]

Very beautiful Movie

And every now and then as I skim thru-out the portal I will find me something wacky and crazy but then Ill find something as unique and different as this one. Yes I must say this is a beautiful piece of work you have going here, everything from time laps, to the "MUSIC" wich was a really good choice, the amount and use of "COLOR" was pretty amazing too, the character was cute, and this film must have taken you a really long time, its a masterpiece, I will make this one of my faves now, really good stuff here. A unique piece of film here and I have enjoyed what you gave us here and showd us into alittle bit of your world of design with this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like the simplistic color tones but wouldnt mind more texture and meshes within the characters to stand out from the scnes and backrounds. just an idea though.

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[[Stop Motion] Second]

Oh Nice

wow this was pretty nice work I like the stop motion, you dont see that every day and you presented it pretty well, I wont even say how short it is since these kinds take up alot of time, also love the choice of music, so on this one it was notbad at all.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could be longer just a bit.

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