Lockmass Flash
Another entertaining flash from the portal, these types never get old and are always entertaining and bring a spark to the portal so first off thank you for the effort here. I have not seen a lock flash in a good while so glad they are still kicking around and such, Its always amazing with lock flashes and even clock flashes, the art and animation was pretty fantastic on this piece its actually a pretty amusing story you have here seemed to go a bit long but was notbad at all. And I must say it was highly entertaining with what you had going here, and it was a pleasure to review this, and hope you bring more our way like this entry.
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So normally I have a little something to ad here but with this particular flash I thaught it was just right and had its moments but was not in any need for any changes.
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