XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Toy vs. Clay Ep. 2]

Lol

Well that was pretty amusing it was kind of on the short side but I can understand that with the "SIZE" it takes to build these kinds of flash entries, but you made a funny lil animation and it didnt end to well for the clay would love to see more of these maybe a tad bit longer though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some slightly longer animations would be nice maybe some dialog and subtitles and whatnot.

~X~

[Luigi's castle calamity (CANCELED)]

Notbad

So you have a pretty nifty of a movie here not always the best of how things play out but you made it entertaining and thats what pulled me into this one. Well I will say this was very short but most probably your intent with this one and as I mention in a few reviews now and then you can bunch up a lot of small flash movies together and have them play one after another for a more longer and more quality of that flash entry, thats just an idea to think about. And so thats that a nifty little flick you have presented us with, nothing too fancy but still good enough from start to finish.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you can bunch up a lot of small flash movies together and have them play one after another for a more longer and more quality of that flash entry, thats just an idea to think about.

~X~

[John and Loonof - Christmas Special 2017]

Lovely Movie

And here was something really special of a movie really great use of color and you gave this some great humor, I think you can ad some subtitles, but anyways nice animation smooth and the "VOICES" were pretty cool the story itself was pretty entertaining and you put some effort in here so nice job there. You have something good here, allthough it does need abit more, but really overall it was pretty balanced just needed abit more stuff, as stated already, so great work here keep making more flash as these are pretty good and lots of fun. Ienjoyed this for alot of differant stuff and in the end it was pretty decent, so nice effort here keep up the fantastoc work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe, some subtitles, voices were clear and sharp but subtitles are a nice option for viewers.

~X~

TylerBasham responds:

Thank you very much for the compliments and what I should improve on! I'll take both into consideration! Thank you very much

[Eye For War]

Interesting

well it was short and to the point I do like the small animation and the music was notbad but still very short and not much meaning to it but it was an animation none the less and thats how I review it, the effort was there but could have had a bit more effort.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some more effort in some sort of plot and story.

~X~

[Chaos Stick 1/5]

Very short

so this was very short and since this was short you should think about adding multiple short flashes just like this one and bunching them up together in one flash to save space and makes your movie of lots of short ones more quality like. but it was a good little stick flash needs more content and more scenes though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you should think about adding multiple short flashes just like this one and bunching them up together in one flash to save space and makes your movie of lots of short ones more quality like.

~X~

[The Sergio Show Episode #37]

Nice again

Wow you sure do have alot of these since last time I reviewed one, you have a good voice and you bring some humor to this its almost like a live radio show with different segments, I still think you should ad some "SUBTITLES" but anyways very nice episode here. So while this was pretty good it could use a few extras It had everything that made it a great flash nice art, nice detail and nice graphics, so all and all this was actually a pretty good flash. So as any suggestions i posted try them and see how it goes, but for the overall of this it was pretty good stuff. So keep up the interesting flash works.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some subtitles would be a plus here not needed but just a nice option.

~X~

[Retaliations]

Love that song

Really great song you have playing here, nice that you made like a music video out of it too, and also like the black and white here thats nice wouldnt mind some color though just a bit here and there while still keeping the black and white style you have

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like the black and white here thats nice wouldnt mind some color though just a bit here and there while still keeping the black and white style you have, also think about adding more to this it was just kind of short.

~X~

[Chaos Stick 2/5]

Funny

these kinds are always so funny and amusing very short animation you have here and I think you could have had some better backrounds, but again it was atleast entertaining, also you have it looping you can fix that aswell, but untill next time keep at it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad more content to this make it longer, Add a stop-Action code, it will stop the looping of the flash, also add some play and replay buttons so that the user can navigate better, the stop action code will stop the loop, and is easy to emplement it can be done thru the script in the flash code bars. anyways hope that helps.

~X~

[Trick Treat or Scream!]

Very nice

I like your logo I also like the characters and the subtitles are a nice touch but the "FONT" on the subtitles should be thicker, and this toon was a tad bit short maybe you can make it longer by adding some more content, But a nice lil movie you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
could be longer just seemed too short.

~X~