XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Confess to Mario and...]

Sprite fun

and here we have a short sprite flash movie love the music by the way it was pretty entertaining, the animation was nice and all seemed to flow nice you made it a crzy little story and all worked out well.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This movie could have been longer and even went into some new scenes and such.

~X~

[CS_Rio Stick]

Entertaining

So here was another funny and entertaining stick flash movie, I dont like the next scene button option thats something you can fix also adding more "TEXTURE" to the blood would be a plus. but a funny and entertaining flash here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More texture in the blood and even backrounds.

~X~

[Shloom]

Creative

Theres lots of creative ideas in this one you used the best of the skills at that time, but I do like how creative you were with this such as the two different ending and whatnot, animation was notbad and nice use of jpegs and art, all together came out well.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe have more "ENDING" options then just the 2

~X~

[Me and KFC]

Notbad

So this is notbad does seem like a love story but its kind of amusing, Im not too fond of the next scene button may want to change that out someway.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the whole Click next button seemed to get repetitive so I suggest you remove the buttons and just allow it to play as a movie instead it will have a much better result, the click next button just tends to anoy people when all they want to do is watch a movie. Besides the whole click next button is more of the old way they use to make games or movies with next scene buttons like this.

~X~

[The Astral]

Very beautiful Movie

And every now and then as I skim thru-out the portal I will find me something wacky and crazy but then Ill find something as unique and different as this one. Yes I must say this is a beautiful piece of work you have going here, everything from time laps, to the "MUSIC" wich was a really good choice, the amount and use of "COLOR" was pretty amazing too, the character was cute, and this film must have taken you a really long time, its a masterpiece, I will make this one of my faves now, really good stuff here. A unique piece of film here and I have enjoyed what you gave us here and showd us into alittle bit of your world of design with this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like the simplistic color tones but wouldnt mind more texture and meshes within the characters to stand out from the scnes and backrounds. just an idea though.

~X~

[[Stop Motion] Second]

Oh Nice

wow this was pretty nice work I like the stop motion, you dont see that every day and you presented it pretty well, I wont even say how short it is since these kinds take up alot of time, also love the choice of music, so on this one it was notbad at all.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could be longer just a bit.

~X~

[Too short for a title!]

Too short

Ok nice animation here with the sticks and all, but I could see you making this longer, more scenes more action, more sticks more scenes just much more content needed. the music was great and it started out awsome was just too short.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Very short movie, So I could see you making this longer, more scenes more action, more sticks more scenes just much more content needed. In my opinion this could be better with either more content or other short clips along with this short one, just an idea to think about. just something to think about.

~X~

[Untitled-1]

Nice

Nice stick flash you have here, i like the blood and action in this one, seems like you could have made this one a lil bit longer and the view screen could be larger, fun stick flash though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The screen size or as I normally say View-Screen was small, you should think about making it much larger, A larger screen will Let you show more of the detail in the flash aswell as give the viewer more enjoyment, and such.

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[You are a F*cking Moron8]

Nice

Ha I remember this guy always commenting on celebs and such lol, These are amusing and the "VOICE" of the main character are really good very clear and sharp and thats what really makes this work and ofcourse the celeb bashing lol.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
It is fine as is.

~X~

[Jesus!]

Amusing

Well jesus singing is somewhat funny and the "MUSIC" is ok but seems like this lacks animation and more scenes to really make it take off, it was entertaining enough to get a few laughs out of me but maybe you were bored, more scenes, more animation, maybe even having him fly around the world would have been a better idea, but other then that this was entertaining.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more scenes, more animation, maybe even having him fly around the world would have been a better idea.

~X~